Kori

Here it is everyone BROTHERS!

ok this is one of my precious "Originals" and is up to chapter 5. What do you guys think of it? I havent had that a vast amount of reviewers so i decided to place it here. k thx

As Always
-Enjoi

Okay Naruto's Trip To The Darkside is OFFICIALLY on hiatus as i am on a writers block and i have been for about a month or so and i can't think of any ideas. If anyone has any ideas please leave a response. Don't worry Brothers is not on hiatus as that has up to Ch 9 done on paper so that will have some time for me to delay Naruto Akatsuki. Please don't hate me


Here's Naruto Akatsuki if you want to read it
i have 4 chapters up so theres at least a little something.

i am ashamed of myself for placing this on hiatus, but i just can't think of anything and again i'm sorry readers of Heaven and Earth

Okay in english class today we were discussing Shakespears usage of tragic heroes and what exactly tragic heroes are. When she (my teacher) wrote out what all tragic heroes posses a light bulb went off in my head.
Here are the qualities she wrote

Born into nobility...check
falls from that nobility in some way...check
responsible for own fate...check
Tragic flaw...check
makes an irreversible mistake...arguable
and finally
meets a tragic death...that would seal the deal

ok heres the explaination
born into nobility: father was the 4th hokage...nuff said

falls from that nobility in some way: he grew up alone, poor and in lower class status, next

responsible for own fate: fighting to become hokage and is doing a good job and that dream is within reach, moving on

tragic flaw: ok this is easy, intellect needs work, overly hyper, gets in over his head(well not so much anymore but still) impatient, i could go on for a while so lets go on

irreversible mistake: in my opinion the 6-8 tails was the mistake. the 4th fixed the seal (which he says is the last time he can) and is only 16 (or 15 i can't remember) he also destroyed the 1st's necklace and that is how Yamato was able to suppress the fox' chakra, now with that gone, what would happen if Naruto went 4 tails again? they couldn't stop him because the cloak is impenetrable (at least that's what Kishi states) and they can't suppress the chakra because that seal Jiraiya gave Kakashi needs to be placed on him (idk if it has to be placed on a certain asspect of his body or not) and the fox will either obliterate Kakashi, or using his superior speed, get away. then when he tires out (again idk if that could happen) they most likely won't be able to find him and heal him. if he doesn't get tired out and he becomes even more enraged, then he could very well get to the 8th tail again and then the 4th can't fix the seal after which could possibly screw up Naruto's chance at becoming hokage and also possibly the fox could get out with the seal weakening and all that.

those are my assessments. we could very well see Naruto end with Naruto's death or in the future with the aftermath of his death


who agrees? who doesn't agree? who at least thinks it's a valid point? i'm all ears and i am also willing to listen to anything you want to add

if there are any more qualities of the tragic hero i'll post them up again (i won't double don't worry i don't do that, well unless my PC screws up then it shows as a double post) so anyway tell me what you think i hope i caught something here and if i'm right and Naruto is to die, then i think we should all hope that Sakura falls in love (or realizes she's in love with him based on she hasen't shown MAJORLY STRONG romantic actions towards him but shown some romantic actions nonetheless) before he dies and they become canon.

well peace out and as always
-Enjoi

Who do you think would end up together based on how the manga is progressing?

and who do you want to end up together---you can say NaruSaku if you want, but its kinda obvious cuz isn't that why we're here?

anyway here are mine

Who I Want
NaruSaku (Duh..)
SasuKarin

The rest im honestly indifferant towards. i can't say i'd want one over the other, the only one i honestly don't want is SasuSaku. As I Said i'd rather hav SasuKarin

Who I Think
NaruSaku
SasuKarin
ShikaTema

the others i can't really make assumptions because there isn't really any hints to them in the manga, well how bout you?