Crazy Ninja Dude
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In Topic: All I Have Left
16 September 2007 - 07:42 AM
The first chapter was very cool for me.
In Topic: Seek Happiness or Seek Strength with Chapter 1 Already
04 September 2007 - 12:42 AM
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CHAPTER 3: QUICK AND EASY, A NARUSAKU!
After too much thinking, Naruto opens his mouth to say something but the Dimension of Within vanishes, and Naruto opens his eyes and sees that Neji and Lee are shaking him to stop meditating. “I didn’t really expect you disturbed meditation, Neji.â€Â, Naruto said with a sleepy tone in his voice. “I think you were sleeping.â€Â, both boys say. Lee goes out by a sign Neji gives him and then Neji makes the “come†hand-movement. Naruto gets up and follows him out of his house to see Kakashi holding Sasuke on his back. “Kakashi found Sasuke death near the Valley of Death.†Naruto was just worried sick to see his enemy-friend-rival in that deadly position, until Sakura crossed his mind. “Lee, where’s Sakura?â€Â, Naruto said. “I haven’t seen her in a while since yesterday.†Naruto then just started looking for her. After ten minutes later of deep searching, he found Sakura at a secret lake just at the borders of the Village of Konoha. Naruto felt more confident that Sakura didn’t hit him in the face like other times just like an hour ago. Naruto shouted at her: “Hi, Sakura-chan!†“Uh? Oh! Hi Naruto!†“So, what are you doing in this place?†“My dad showed me this place when I had three. It always had been a very peaceful place for me to think.†“Yeah. It so peaceful in here. So, can I ask of what you were thyinking of?†“I was thinking why...well, I’m not sure that this is not necesary even to think.†“OK, if you don’t want to tell me...†There was a deep silence for a moment between Naruto and Sakura. Naruto was thinking that she was beautiful thinking, until he was clear of his answer of Kyuubi’s question. Naruto was now meditating aside Sakura. Sakura was still very happy that he had returned, that she said in a low voice that to herself, but actually Naruto blushed to hear this words. Well, at last, Naruto found himself again within with Kyuubi.
Sakura heard “Sasuke’s back!†from the village. Sakura quickly turned around and went again to the village.
Naruto stopped meditating because he felt a disturbance in the lake and he didn’t made it to tell Kyuubi his desicion. Anyway, Naruto saw the lake, and there was nothing strange, but then he suddenly saw that Sakura wasn’t there anymore. “She just waited for me to distract to go.â€Â, Naruto said, “But I’m sure I’ll get her one day.†Naruto quickly got up and went back to the village until he heard a voice coming from the lake. This time, when he approached the lake, a fish was moving in a circle. Naruto saw through the circle and saw something shiny. “Maybe it’s gold!â€Â, Naruto thought, “I can give this to Sakura!†Naruto quickly got off his orange jacket and dived in the water swimming to the shiny thing until he grabbed it and he quickly went to the surface. Naruto saw that the golden little bar said: “Lake of Kissing.†“Lake of Kissing? What a weird name to call a lake.†“It’s because it’s truth!†Kyuubi said inside of Naruto. “What? Kyuubi? Oh! Hello!†“This lake receives its name as it has a magical aura that make people fall in love.†“Oh...that’s cool!â€Â
Sakura saw Kakashi-sensei with Sasuke on his back. “Kakahi-sensei, what happened to him?!†“It seems that Sasuke was attacked by his brother. I’m taking him to the hospital. Do you want to get him company?†“Let me just call Naruto as well.†She just remembered she abandoned Naruto. Anyway, she went running to Naruto.
Naruto was looking for anything else written on the golden bar. “Geeze, Sakura will really like this!â€Â, he thought. Then he noticed Sakura came to the lake and took a sit just a side of him. (It’s a good question why she didn’t just call Naruto to the hospital.) Naruto blushed a little to feel Sakura just aside of him, and asked her: “So well, Sakura-chan, where did you go?†“I just went back to the village. Did you know Sasuke is back?†“Uh...yes. Actually I did know before coming here.†“Then...why didn’t you tell me?†“Because I thought of your reaction.†Naruto knew Sakura would had a negative feeling with this coming out of Naruto’s mouth, but Sakura just kept seeing to the lake. Suddenly, she grinned: “That was not the Naruto I knew.†“What?†“When I asked you to go to Sasuke, you put your feelings apart, remember? And know, you didn’t tell that Sasuke came because you cared of your feelings? Why’s that?†“I think you trust me now enough, and well...uh, well, I can’t talk right now.†Naruto was going to say he loved her, but, well, that needs too much courage. Anyways, Sakura noticed the golden bar on Naruto’s legs: “Naruto, what is this golden bar?†Naruto quickly gave it to her: “Here. Ah...I gain it for you. Do you like it?†“Oh, it’s beautiful!†Sakura was examining the golden bar and she saw: -Lake of Kissing-. Sakura just stared at the bar as Naruto saw at her being shoked. Sakura slowly turned to Naruto: “Naruto...I suddenly want to say that...I’m sorry. I’m sorry to reject you and ignore you. You were always there when I needed you, but also when I didn’t. Anyway, I’m rea...†her voice was interrumpted as Naruto plent her a gentle kiss in her lips. When Naruto got away kind of shoked too, Sakura just stayed shocked looking at the blue-eyed boy. Sakura then just smiled at the boy, making Naruto grin shyley. “I love you Sakura.†Naruto said softly. Sakura launched to him with a hug and kissed him. After this, she said: “I love you too!â€Â. They continued hugging. Naruto thought: ‘Sakura loves me? Since when the world turns the opposite side? Well, who cares?’ Sakura was thinking: ‘Since when I love him? I dunno, but I feel so good when he kisses me and hugs me. I wan’t to slap him, but I feel very good around his arms.’.
Why Sakura loves Naruto with such of a sudden? Don’t ask me. (duh, I wrote the story, you really should ask me.) Just imagine what Sakura would think. And remember the love aura from the lake.
In a future chapter, I want to make a pov of Sakura in the whole story.
CHAPTER 3: QUICK AND EASY, A NARUSAKU!
After too much thinking, Naruto opens his mouth to say something but the Dimension of Within vanishes, and Naruto opens his eyes and sees that Neji and Lee are shaking him to stop meditating. “I didn’t really expect you disturbed meditation, Neji.â€Â, Naruto said with a sleepy tone in his voice. “I think you were sleeping.â€Â, both boys say. Lee goes out by a sign Neji gives him and then Neji makes the “come†hand-movement. Naruto gets up and follows him out of his house to see Kakashi holding Sasuke on his back. “Kakashi found Sasuke death near the Valley of Death.†Naruto was just worried sick to see his enemy-friend-rival in that deadly position, until Sakura crossed his mind. “Lee, where’s Sakura?â€Â, Naruto said. “I haven’t seen her in a while since yesterday.†Naruto then just started looking for her. After ten minutes later of deep searching, he found Sakura at a secret lake just at the borders of the Village of Konoha. Naruto felt more confident that Sakura didn’t hit him in the face like other times just like an hour ago. Naruto shouted at her: “Hi, Sakura-chan!†“Uh? Oh! Hi Naruto!†“So, what are you doing in this place?†“My dad showed me this place when I had three. It always had been a very peaceful place for me to think.†“Yeah. It so peaceful in here. So, can I ask of what you were thyinking of?†“I was thinking why...well, I’m not sure that this is not necesary even to think.†“OK, if you don’t want to tell me...†There was a deep silence for a moment between Naruto and Sakura. Naruto was thinking that she was beautiful thinking, until he was clear of his answer of Kyuubi’s question. Naruto was now meditating aside Sakura. Sakura was still very happy that he had returned, that she said in a low voice that to herself, but actually Naruto blushed to hear this words. Well, at last, Naruto found himself again within with Kyuubi.
Sakura heard “Sasuke’s back!†from the village. Sakura quickly turned around and went again to the village.
Naruto stopped meditating because he felt a disturbance in the lake and he didn’t made it to tell Kyuubi his desicion. Anyway, Naruto saw the lake, and there was nothing strange, but then he suddenly saw that Sakura wasn’t there anymore. “She just waited for me to distract to go.â€Â, Naruto said, “But I’m sure I’ll get her one day.†Naruto quickly got up and went back to the village until he heard a voice coming from the lake. This time, when he approached the lake, a fish was moving in a circle. Naruto saw through the circle and saw something shiny. “Maybe it’s gold!â€Â, Naruto thought, “I can give this to Sakura!†Naruto quickly got off his orange jacket and dived in the water swimming to the shiny thing until he grabbed it and he quickly went to the surface. Naruto saw that the golden little bar said: “Lake of Kissing.†“Lake of Kissing? What a weird name to call a lake.†“It’s because it’s truth!†Kyuubi said inside of Naruto. “What? Kyuubi? Oh! Hello!†“This lake receives its name as it has a magical aura that make people fall in love.†“Oh...that’s cool!â€Â
Sakura saw Kakashi-sensei with Sasuke on his back. “Kakahi-sensei, what happened to him?!†“It seems that Sasuke was attacked by his brother. I’m taking him to the hospital. Do you want to get him company?†“Let me just call Naruto as well.†She just remembered she abandoned Naruto. Anyway, she went running to Naruto.
Naruto was looking for anything else written on the golden bar. “Geeze, Sakura will really like this!â€Â, he thought. Then he noticed Sakura came to the lake and took a sit just a side of him. (It’s a good question why she didn’t just call Naruto to the hospital.) Naruto blushed a little to feel Sakura just aside of him, and asked her: “So well, Sakura-chan, where did you go?†“I just went back to the village. Did you know Sasuke is back?†“Uh...yes. Actually I did know before coming here.†“Then...why didn’t you tell me?†“Because I thought of your reaction.†Naruto knew Sakura would had a negative feeling with this coming out of Naruto’s mouth, but Sakura just kept seeing to the lake. Suddenly, she grinned: “That was not the Naruto I knew.†“What?†“When I asked you to go to Sasuke, you put your feelings apart, remember? And know, you didn’t tell that Sasuke came because you cared of your feelings? Why’s that?†“I think you trust me now enough, and well...uh, well, I can’t talk right now.†Naruto was going to say he loved her, but, well, that needs too much courage. Anyways, Sakura noticed the golden bar on Naruto’s legs: “Naruto, what is this golden bar?†Naruto quickly gave it to her: “Here. Ah...I gain it for you. Do you like it?†“Oh, it’s beautiful!†Sakura was examining the golden bar and she saw: -Lake of Kissing-. Sakura just stared at the bar as Naruto saw at her being shoked. Sakura slowly turned to Naruto: “Naruto...I suddenly want to say that...I’m sorry. I’m sorry to reject you and ignore you. You were always there when I needed you, but also when I didn’t. Anyway, I’m rea...†her voice was interrumpted as Naruto plent her a gentle kiss in her lips. When Naruto got away kind of shoked too, Sakura just stayed shocked looking at the blue-eyed boy. Sakura then just smiled at the boy, making Naruto grin shyley. “I love you Sakura.†Naruto said softly. Sakura launched to him with a hug and kissed him. After this, she said: “I love you too!â€Â. They continued hugging. Naruto thought: ‘Sakura loves me? Since when the world turns the opposite side? Well, who cares?’ Sakura was thinking: ‘Since when I love him? I dunno, but I feel so good when he kisses me and hugs me. I wan’t to slap him, but I feel very good around his arms.’.
Why Sakura loves Naruto with such of a sudden? Don’t ask me. (duh, I wrote the story, you really should ask me.) Just imagine what Sakura would think. And remember the love aura from the lake.
In a future chapter, I want to make a pov of Sakura in the whole story.
In Topic: Weathering the Storm
02 September 2007 - 06:56 AM
I'm looking toward to your fic
I'll see it!
I'll see it!
In Topic: Seek Happiness or Seek Strength with Chapter 1 Already
31 August 2007 - 02:17 AM
Oof! I was able to finish off this chapter. I feel kind of sick, so if you don't like the story, is for my illness. Anyway, hope you like it please!
CHAPTER 2: DO YOU SEEK HAPPINESS OR STRENGHT?
After Naruto get back to Earth, Sakura began to walk again at Naruto’s house. Someway, she noticed the time had frozen. She got out and she saw everyone was acting as usual. She was the only shocked. (you may say Naruto and Sakura have a connection). Sakura entered Naruto’s house again. She then realized that Naruto had gone to look out for Sasuke. She quickly felt ashamed to enter another person’s house and went running outside the door until she tripped with something. When she saw that a book made her trip, she just felt the desire to read the book, as it said in the first pafe: “Naruto’s Diaryâ€Â. At first, Sakura though: “I bet it has Sakura, Sakura, Sakura and maybe I Hate Sasuke in every page.†But she felt a little bad judging Naruto that way. She wasn’t feeling she wasn’t hating Naruto as usual. With this, Sakura started reading his diary. What a great privacy!
Naruto saw Itachi’s fist just one inch from his face, and he quickly rised his hand to block it, but someone’s other hand blocked Itachi’s hit. It was Sasuke. Sasuke grabbed Itachi’s hand and tried to kick him in the face. Itachi saw the kick coming and evaded it and then he tried to hit Sasuke’s hand before he jumped out at Naruto’s side. “Do you think you can distract him enough so I can kill him?†Sasuke asked Naruto. “Sure!â€Â, said Naruto. Naruto ran to Itachi, and at half-way he thought about what Kyuubi had said. When Naruto realized Itachi’s was waving a kunai to his face, he barely dodged it and then he quickly punched Itachi’s back. Naruto’s hand got through Itachi, and Itachi became water that quickly fell to the lake. Suddenly, Itachi jumped from the water grabbing Naruto rising him up and Itachi quickly gets his kunai on Naruto’s chest. Itachi falls on the water not surprised, as he knows the Naruto he killed was just a clone. Itachi expected Naruto to come out. Itachi gazed at the wielder of the Chidori. It was now Naruto with the Chidori. “But how...then Sasuke...†Itachi quickly turns back at time to stop the kunai launched by Sasuke. Sasuke runs to him preparing Chidori. Naruto runs to him too with his Chidori. Itachi just makes patiently a chakra wall, and the next thing that happens is a great explosion. Itachi turns left and right, and the kids are not in sight. He then just lets the wind blow him away like sand.
Sasuke was on a tree with a flow of blood in his left hand. He was seeing how Naruto ran back to the village. At the same time they thought this: “Someday, I will show you who will win at the final showdown.â€Â
Sakura read the last page Naruto wrote. Strange, (very strange) but Naruto had a good caligraphy. “Hey Diary. Today Sasuke acted a little strange. I suspect he wants to leave. How I hope that happens, but of course after my final battle with him. Anyway, Iruka-sensei and Kakashi-sensei went talking through the streets until I jumped in front of them by surprise and I...†Suddenly Sakura heard footsteps, and she threw the diary under the table.
Naruto opened the door to see Sakura looking at him directly. “You should be asking why I was here,â€Â, she said blushing, “you see, Ino threw one shoe in your house and...†She was interrumpted when Naruto showed his mischievious grin: “I know you’re lying. Just like Kakashi-senei’s excuses.†Sakura had no other words to tell. ‘I love that face when she is shoked!’ Naruto thought. “Don’t worry,â€Â, Naruto told her gently “you don’t have to explain why you were here.†Sakura felt relieved, got up and said: “Thanks Naruto. For your comprehension and all.†She was going until Sasuke crossed his mind and she asked: “Where’s Sasuke?†“I didn’t manage to bring him back. You see, Itachi appeared and stole him, and look what he put on me!†Naruto shows her his new fox tail. “OK, that’s new.†“Sakura, I promise I will keep my promise!†Sakura stayed quit, until she smiled and gave a friendly hug to Naruto: “I’m still grateful you came with no so deep wounds.†Naruto felt so good that he returned the hug, and Sakura felt so...natural hugging him, until she got out Naruto’s house with a: “Thanks Naruto!†Naruto put on some bends in his broken hand, that wasn’t hurting much, and meditated for Kyuubi until he gets in the dimension of Within, as he will call it from now on. Naruto: “Hello, Kyuubi!†“Hi, Naruto! Look for sep 2, uh?†“Yes! I don’t this tail anymore.†“This is the hardest step boy. This comes with a hard choice for you, so I’ll just make it simple, OK?†“...OK.†“What do you seek the most? Happiness or strenght?†“What?†“What do you want the most? Sakura or power?†“Of course I want Sa...wait, but if I have the power enough, I might just protect her more and be mo...but what if they way to power will finish me just like Sasuke and...I love Sakura besides, but I swore to prote...then if I have power again...†“I told you it was hard boy.†“What should I do?â€Â
THE NEXT CHAPTER:
I promise Naruto and Sakura will be boyfriends in that chapter, but that doesn’t mean he chose the happiness exactly. The whole chapter will be of just Narusaku, so, well, don’t miss it please!
CHAPTER 2: DO YOU SEEK HAPPINESS OR STRENGHT?
After Naruto get back to Earth, Sakura began to walk again at Naruto’s house. Someway, she noticed the time had frozen. She got out and she saw everyone was acting as usual. She was the only shocked. (you may say Naruto and Sakura have a connection). Sakura entered Naruto’s house again. She then realized that Naruto had gone to look out for Sasuke. She quickly felt ashamed to enter another person’s house and went running outside the door until she tripped with something. When she saw that a book made her trip, she just felt the desire to read the book, as it said in the first pafe: “Naruto’s Diaryâ€Â. At first, Sakura though: “I bet it has Sakura, Sakura, Sakura and maybe I Hate Sasuke in every page.†But she felt a little bad judging Naruto that way. She wasn’t feeling she wasn’t hating Naruto as usual. With this, Sakura started reading his diary. What a great privacy!
Naruto saw Itachi’s fist just one inch from his face, and he quickly rised his hand to block it, but someone’s other hand blocked Itachi’s hit. It was Sasuke. Sasuke grabbed Itachi’s hand and tried to kick him in the face. Itachi saw the kick coming and evaded it and then he tried to hit Sasuke’s hand before he jumped out at Naruto’s side. “Do you think you can distract him enough so I can kill him?†Sasuke asked Naruto. “Sure!â€Â, said Naruto. Naruto ran to Itachi, and at half-way he thought about what Kyuubi had said. When Naruto realized Itachi’s was waving a kunai to his face, he barely dodged it and then he quickly punched Itachi’s back. Naruto’s hand got through Itachi, and Itachi became water that quickly fell to the lake. Suddenly, Itachi jumped from the water grabbing Naruto rising him up and Itachi quickly gets his kunai on Naruto’s chest. Itachi falls on the water not surprised, as he knows the Naruto he killed was just a clone. Itachi expected Naruto to come out. Itachi gazed at the wielder of the Chidori. It was now Naruto with the Chidori. “But how...then Sasuke...†Itachi quickly turns back at time to stop the kunai launched by Sasuke. Sasuke runs to him preparing Chidori. Naruto runs to him too with his Chidori. Itachi just makes patiently a chakra wall, and the next thing that happens is a great explosion. Itachi turns left and right, and the kids are not in sight. He then just lets the wind blow him away like sand.
Sasuke was on a tree with a flow of blood in his left hand. He was seeing how Naruto ran back to the village. At the same time they thought this: “Someday, I will show you who will win at the final showdown.â€Â
Sakura read the last page Naruto wrote. Strange, (very strange) but Naruto had a good caligraphy. “Hey Diary. Today Sasuke acted a little strange. I suspect he wants to leave. How I hope that happens, but of course after my final battle with him. Anyway, Iruka-sensei and Kakashi-sensei went talking through the streets until I jumped in front of them by surprise and I...†Suddenly Sakura heard footsteps, and she threw the diary under the table.
Naruto opened the door to see Sakura looking at him directly. “You should be asking why I was here,â€Â, she said blushing, “you see, Ino threw one shoe in your house and...†She was interrumpted when Naruto showed his mischievious grin: “I know you’re lying. Just like Kakashi-senei’s excuses.†Sakura had no other words to tell. ‘I love that face when she is shoked!’ Naruto thought. “Don’t worry,â€Â, Naruto told her gently “you don’t have to explain why you were here.†Sakura felt relieved, got up and said: “Thanks Naruto. For your comprehension and all.†She was going until Sasuke crossed his mind and she asked: “Where’s Sasuke?†“I didn’t manage to bring him back. You see, Itachi appeared and stole him, and look what he put on me!†Naruto shows her his new fox tail. “OK, that’s new.†“Sakura, I promise I will keep my promise!†Sakura stayed quit, until she smiled and gave a friendly hug to Naruto: “I’m still grateful you came with no so deep wounds.†Naruto felt so good that he returned the hug, and Sakura felt so...natural hugging him, until she got out Naruto’s house with a: “Thanks Naruto!†Naruto put on some bends in his broken hand, that wasn’t hurting much, and meditated for Kyuubi until he gets in the dimension of Within, as he will call it from now on. Naruto: “Hello, Kyuubi!†“Hi, Naruto! Look for sep 2, uh?†“Yes! I don’t this tail anymore.†“This is the hardest step boy. This comes with a hard choice for you, so I’ll just make it simple, OK?†“...OK.†“What do you seek the most? Happiness or strenght?†“What?†“What do you want the most? Sakura or power?†“Of course I want Sa...wait, but if I have the power enough, I might just protect her more and be mo...but what if they way to power will finish me just like Sasuke and...I love Sakura besides, but I swore to prote...then if I have power again...†“I told you it was hard boy.†“What should I do?â€Â
THE NEXT CHAPTER:
I promise Naruto and Sakura will be boyfriends in that chapter, but that doesn’t mean he chose the happiness exactly. The whole chapter will be of just Narusaku, so, well, don’t miss it please!
In Topic: -My only dream is to be with you- discussion
30 August 2007 - 08:54 PM


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