I'm not sure if this has been brought up, but one of my fanfiction pet peeves is how they destroy Sakura's character in some of them.....they make her into a total b*tch because that's how she was in the beginning, but now (and somewhere in the beginning of the Forest of Death (I think)), Sakura's personality changes of that of being a b*tch to being a nice girl with a small temper problem to Naruto.
Call me a fanboy, but I hate the injustice they bring onto Sakura for how she acted in the beginning.
She's not always screaming "Sasuke! Sasuke! oh my precious Sasuke!" or how she gets pissed at Naruto for bringing back a hurt Sasuke....what do they expect!? him to be perfectly fine, but unconcious?
God that kind of thing pisses me off to no end....if your going to bring someone back and you know they're going to end up fighting, one of them has to come back as a mess, maybe even both.
For Page 10 all I can say is.....GROPPAGE!!!!! heh...Naruto is copping a feel from what it looks like to me (to quote MasakoX from the abridged Series: "hehe....boobies.")
and for the new page...cute! very very cute...kick that freshman's ass for stealing your character....but don't get caught for kicking her ass (cause if you can kick a hole in a wall, you can kick a freshman's ass)