Thanks for your help Vyse. And yes, please everyone. I'd like this project to look as great as possible, so I did want to see as many artists as possible before making my decision. There won't be a time limit on when the doujin needs to get finished. I understand people have a life outside of computers. And for things to look good one always has to take time. Plus since it is a doujin I'd only want the cover in color. I'm aware that this might not appeal to many people, and since I'm in a sense going to be looking at other's peoples work and looking for someone trustworthy, I'll share what I worked on. Here's the completed storyboard/line for the doujin, please only read it if you'd be interested in doing the one-shot doujin, if not please don't read it. I'd like for everyone to enjoy it when it's a finished product.
complete spoilers ahead for sure otherwiseAnd thank you Tahaji,

. Unfortunately the project at hand does not lend itself to your talents, but I will keep you in mind for future projects that need animals to be drawn well.
And thank you for the offer Mr. Kennedy, but I'm going to wait until I get as many possibilities as possible before I make my decision.
As much that I rarely draw anything anymore, I have to say is that the story overall is good. There are some grammatical and spelling errors, though (ex. it is spells "kunai" not Kurenai -that's the character's name, not the weapon-).
Hopefully, the finished result will be good as well.