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Reservations for Gosu?


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#1 Rix the Very Affectionate Lego!

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Posted 14 December 2008 - 12:10 AM

I just got really into a certain song, I dont know if this had any real destination so I hope it doesnt turn out completely retarded xD <3

Please give me some sort of feedback if you do happen to read it xD Its really short

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His and Hers.


Her music always gave him comfort. Her song dulled the storms that forever rang in his ear. Storms of an unwanted past, and dreadful future. Quietly his clouded heart could confide in her lullaby, and her song would bring his tonight's beautiful chorus, and tomorrow's bittersweet symphony.

Edited by Gosu, 14 December 2008 - 12:13 AM.


#2 peanutbutter126

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Posted 14 December 2008 - 12:15 AM

Oooh, that was a pretty drabble.... hmm, maybe pretty isn't usually a word to describe writing, but this one certainly came off to me as 'pretty'. It's pretty deep, took me a few more reads to absorb it. Good work :thumbs:

#3 Rix the Very Affectionate Lego!

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Posted 14 December 2008 - 05:00 PM

Thanks PB, I know it wasnt long but I found myself adding something and quickly changing/deleting it =[. It took longer to edit than to think of it xD




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