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#1 peanutbutter126

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Posted 04 November 2008 - 08:33 AM

I'm not sure if this is in the right place, so if someone thinks it should belong in Writing Discussion or even Challenges, go ahead and move it.

Okies, so just an hour or so ago I started another story; it's called Did I Tell You. It's a... well, it's the first drabble chapter fic I've actually started. Yeah, so it's just a whole story made up of NaruSaku drabbles... don't look at me like that, I know there are a lot of them floating around but I was bored... huh.gif

I'm going to gather ideas for the chapters right here. You guys can request me to write a drabble for you (I'll explain the technicalities later) and I'll post it up here. If I like some of 'em I'll put them up as a chapter on FF.net. So basically you can fire off ideas at me and I'll (try to) turn them into reality. Great, now I'm starting to think this belongs in the Challenge thread...

Just something to keep in mind:
- The request must have the phrase 'Did I tell you' somewhere in it.

- It can't be paired with something unrelated to the chapter theme (e.g. chapter theme might be pregnancy, so you can't go ahead with Naruto saying something along the lines of "Ne, Sakura, did I tell you I slept in this morning?")

- Feel free to tell me if you already have a pictured scene in mind (God knows just how incredibly lazy I can be to even think of a suitable situation).

I think that's it... ah, no wait - one more thing. I know the first thing people might ask for is "Did I tell you I'm pregnant/I love you." I will write chapters for those and post them here but I probably won't put it up on FF.net until I feel the story has gone on for way too long and has to end. I mean, you can't have Sakura getting pregnant in the second chapter, can you?

I think I've rambled on for too long, haven't I? Yeah, I have. So here's the first chapter that I wrote to get started:
Kiss

“Aw, come on, Sakura – just one?”

She crossed her arms and looked down at him. “No, Naruto. My parents are just inside.” Seeing him beginning to pout, she added, “Besides, I just gave up my whole evening to eat at Ichiraku’s with you, isn’t that enough?”

“No!” He widened his eyes and Sakura had to sigh. Oh how she hated the Blue Eyes Jutsu. “Pleeease, Sakura? I won’t see you for a long time and I’ll miss you.”

“I’ll see you tomorrow morning, right here, at half past seven like any other day.”

“Yeah, but, but…” The corner of Sakura’s mouth twitched as his voice lowered into that enticing whine. God, why did they go through this every day?

“You’re being a baby, Naruto,” she said half-heartedly.

He grinned. “That’s why you love me so much.”

“I… just…” She threw up her hands, turning away to hide the flush of her cheeks. His smile widened. “Goodnight, Naruto.”

“Just a quick one?”

“You aren’t going to leave until I say yes, am I right?”

“Yup! You know me so well, Sakura. We’re made for each other, see?” he crowed, his voice rising.

“Shh! My parents will hear you!”

He gave her a sly grin. “So? It’s not like they don’t know already. I think they quite like me, actually. You should see how your mother looks at me…”

Sakura gritted her teeth. “You’re making this very difficult.”

“To resist me?”

Her mouth opened and closed before she could sputter out, “I-I’m going to ignore that.”

“You’re blushing,” he said in a singsong voice.

“Cut it out!” And he kept singing. She glanced down the street; there were a few late night walkers and they were smiling at the young couple. Sakura could have sworn that the old woman had whispered something along the lines of ‘young love’ or something to her husband. “Naruto, you… fine!”

He stopped singing and smiled up at her. “Fine what?”

“Just… just one more. Last one. Then you’re getting out of here, you hear me?”

“Yes ma’am!” He mock saluted her. Hell, he even had the nerve to pucker up his lips. “I’m ready,” he said in that voice that made Sakura shiver.

“But I get to stay on this step,” she said, placing her hands on his shoulders. Naruto was taller than her now. Even perched on the first step of her porch, she was just level with his face.

“Sure. Whatever makes you love-” His voice was cut off as Sakura pressed her lips against his. It was always like this, every night. They would spend the evening together, and when it was time to part ways, he would whine, she would reject, he would persist, and she would kiss.

If there was one thing Naruto Uzumaki truly believed in, it was that the last ones were the best.

They rested their foreheads together when the kiss ended, gazing into each other’s eyes. This lasted longer than the kiss itself. Neither of them would admit it, but it was this tranquil silence and mutual understanding that lit up the end of the day. It just felt… good.

“Did I tell you?” Sakura whispered.

“Tell me what?”

“That you taste like ramen.”

He stole another quick peck from her. She smacked his shoulder playfully but didn’t look away. He grinned. “And did I tell you?”

“What?”

“That you taste of me.”


And here's the link for the story if anyone actually wants to check it out: Did I Tell You

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Posted 04 November 2008 - 08:38 AM

I was just about ready to hit the bed when I saw this, I too have been up Fanficing! Im jumping on this bandwagon so fast... Ill have an Idea for you soon, and feel free to fire he Ideas right back.

Anyways, I just read the story on FF.net and enjoyed the banter, I loved the whole feeling to it.

Ideas comming soon...Sleep comming now...


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Posted 04 November 2008 - 07:22 PM

Very nice one-shot.

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Posted 04 November 2008 - 09:11 PM

Ok Im game.

The theme: comfort and friendship

The Did I tell you: Kiba feeling a bit mischievious half mentions to Sakura " Did I tell you I saw Naruto and Ino hugging."

The premise: naruto comes across a crying Ino, who in a 24 hour span has had a horrible date with a real octopus of a guy, cant seem to talk to Shikamru about her feleings for him, Had a solo mission go bad earning her a lecture from the hokage, and its the anniversery of Asumas death. all this has proven too much for Ino and Naruto comforts her as a friend hugging her and making her feel safe, but also giving her her courage back.

Sakura of course goes little green monster ballistic

story to end with lots of naruto kissing Sakura out of her shoes, and Ino rolling on the floor laughing about it while shikamaru mutters troublesome LOL.

there that should be a fun one.
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Posted 04 November 2008 - 09:16 PM

^^^
I like his idea.

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Posted 04 November 2008 - 10:06 PM

QUOTE (Kyuudaime @ Nov 4 2008, 03:16 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
^^^
I like his idea.

Second.

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Posted 05 November 2008 - 08:42 AM

I'm finished! Except I don't think I got it the way catsi had in mind. It's not exactly humorous with a major dose of hurt and comfort. For some reason, I just can't write humour fics. I couldn't even write that last bit with Ino laughing and Shikamaru going "Troublesome" as catsi suggested, so I had to leave it out. Sorry guys, I guess humour is just not my forte.

Aside from that and my major impressions of inadequacy, I might even post this up on FF.net after a few more drabbles... see if anyone still wants to give me ideas after I reveal this monstrosity.

Here it is (turned out to be a bit longer than I intended...)

Jealous

Sakura blinked up and down the street as she left the hospital. Strange… Naruto wasn’t even here. He was usually waiting by the time she left the building, and he hadn’t missed a day picking her up from work since… well, since they had become a bit more than good friends.

“Looking for someone?”

She looked around for the owner of the husky voice a bit more eagerly than she liked. A small ball of disappointment made itself comfortable in the pit of her stomach. “Oh. Kiba. Hi.” Akamaru twined his large body around her legs in greeting and she stroked his head. “Hello, Akamaru.”

“He likes girls that smell like flowers,” Kiba chuckled.

“I should smell more like blood, I think.”

He whistled. “Whoa, you found out already?”

“What?” Sakura blinked. “I just came out of an operation.”

The smile faded. “Oh, right. So you don’t know yet?”

“Know what?” she asked, confused.

Heavens, Kiba grinned just like Naruto. “Nah, nothing.”

Her eyebrow rose. Then, deciding that he was just pulling off a Naruto and being an idiot, she shook her head. “Whatever. Have you seen Naruto?”

He burst out laughing. “Hell, this is priceless!”

Sakura frowned. “What is up with you today, Kiba? Spit it out already!”

“Ha… heh, he’s at the park.”

All annoyance at the Inuzuka ebbed away. “He is? I wonder what he’s doing… he usually comes to get me after my shift… why are you staring at me like that?”

He composed himself solemnly despite the corner of his mouth continuously tugging upward. “Sakura, did I tell you I saw Naruto and Ino hugging?”

Silence. Sakura’s chest clenched uncomfortably. “So what?” she managed to force out.

Kiba stared incredulously at her. “What, you don’t mind?”

“Of… of course not! Ino is his friend, too.”

“True… but he’s your boyfriend,” he emphasised.

God, he’s right… Sakura shook her head. “You can’t expect me to keep him under a leash…” Really? a rebellious voice whispered in the back of her mind. “Talk about leashes, shouldn’t you be getting home, Kiba?”

His knowing chuckle irked her more than it should. “Come on, Akamaru. Never stick around a girl about to blow. See you around, Haruno.”

“Go away, Inuzuka.” Sakura knew she was a little too irritated by this latest… development. Naruto was a pretty open guy after all. He gave away as many hugs as he ate ramen. But usually she was the one in his arms, and even though she knew the likelihood that he was… unfaithful… was pretty low, Sakura could not help but be…

And to Ino of all people…

For a few minutes, she just stood there, brow furrowed in indecision. Then, with more determination than she felt, Sakura walked off.

Where had Kiba said her boyfriend was?
-

“Do you sometimes feel like life is crushing you, Naruto?”

“Mm, sometimes. Usually when Sakura is angry.”

She chuckled softly and shifted her head onto a more comfortable position on his lap. “What exactly is love, do you think?”

“Love?” He leaned back, palms pressing against the grass, and tilted his head back to gaze at the ethereal orange of the setting sun. “Just… loving someone, I suppose.”

“Which letter of ‘exactly’ is missing from your dictionary, Mr State the Obvious?”

“Eh? But that’s so hard… ow! Don’t pinch!” Naruto grumbled as he rubbed his thigh. “Okay, fine; to me, it’s thinking of that special person every day, every minute, every second.” His features melted into a soft smile. “When she’s sad, you wish you could swap places and take the pain for her. And when she’s happy it’s like your world is lighting up…”

Ino rolled her eyes. “Don’t tell me this is how you made Forehead fall for you.”

“Something like that,” he grinned.

“Why do you have it so easy?” She huffed at her bangs, succeeding only in having them flop back onto her face. Naruto reached forward and tucked the strands behind her ear. She stared into his eyes for a moment, her lips forming a wistful smile. “I wish the guy from yesterday was like you, Naruto Uzumaki.”

“Should I be flattered?”

“Mm hmm. He was a real octopus.”

“That many arms?”

“You know what I mean.”

“Ne… why don’t you just tell him?”

“That he’s ugly and totally inconsiderate of a beautiful woman’s feelings? Yeah, I think I might… wait, I don’t even know his name. That might be a problem…”

“I was talking about Shikamaru.”

Naruto had to jerk his head back as Ino suddenly sat up, twisting around to gawk at him. “What, are you kidding?” she said in disbelief. “I can’t just go tell him!”

“Why not?”

“Well, for starters, he’s a lazy old bum who’s only interested in some stupid board game!”

“But you like him,” Naruto pointed out, grinning.

“What? I… I don’t like him!” Ino sputtered, her cheeks going red. After a pointed look from her companion, she grudgingly added, “Okay, maybe I do… a bit. Fine, fine! He’s more of a man than I thought. But… oh God, I just don’t know anymore!”

He rubbed her back soothingly. “Are you sure you thought about this enough?”

“Enough?” She laughed miserably. “I’ve been thinking about it for weeks! You actually think I can’t handle a bunch of desperate missing-nin? I was distracted!”

“You shouldn’t let your emotions affect your missions, Ino.”

You’re talking,” she shot back. He grinned sheepishly. Ino sighed and tapped her forehead with her fingers. “I guess I should go find him anyway because… you know. Chouji, too.”

“Ah. I think I’ll come along later.”

She gave him a small smile. “Thanks.” Her gaze focused on something in the distance, and she chuckled. “Well, I think I smell something sour.”

“Huh?” Naruto was confused.

“Have fun.” She patted his shoulder and got up.

“Sure you’re okay?”

“I’ll have to be, right?”

“I’m here if you need me, Ino,” he promised.

She flashed him a grateful smile. Then she was gone. Naruto watched her leave. She faded into the trees and disappeared from his sight.

“I’m not intruding, am I?”

Naruto jumped. He turned. There, standing over him, was a wistful Sakura. “Oh crap!” he exclaimed, getting quickly to his feet. “Sakura, I’m sorry! I forgot… I’m sorry! Look, I’ll make it up to you. How about-”

“What were you doing with Ino?”

His hands lowered. “Oh. You saw that?”

“Was I not supposed to?”

“No no! It wasn’t like that!” It was frightening how emotionless her face was. “She was having a bad day – I was just helping out.”

“Really? How, exactly?”

“Sakura…?”

She seemed to deflate. She sighed heavily. “I know, I know,” she muttered. “I’m being unreasonable, aren’t I? It’s not that I don’t trust you… it’s just… God, I sound like some girl out of Icha Icha Paradise!”

“I can see the resemblance,” Naruto agreed.

Sakura stared at him for a moment, and then slapped him lightly on the shoulder. “Naruto!” she scolded, blushing. Her tone loosened a little, her shoulders unclenching.

He cupped her chin in his large hand and tilted her face up to his. They locked gazes. “You were jealous, weren’t you?” he asked softly.

She tired to look away. “What are you talking about? Why would I be jealous? I’m not jealous…”

“Sakura,” he said in an uncharacteristically serious tone. She made herself look at him; his eyes were deep, smouldering, and they lured her in. “Getting all protective over me is good, don’t get me wrong, but you really don’t need to worry like that.”

“Protective? Who’s being protective?”

“Don’t be silly,” he sighed, and drew her into his arms. Sakura automatically laid her head on his chest and listened to his heartbeat, his deep breathing. He was warm. “How does this feel?”

“Nice,” she answered without thinking. “No, wait – I didn’t mean… you were hugging Ino like this!” There, it was out.

If he was surprised, he didn’t show it. Hell, he wasn’t even guilty! “What if I told you I wasn’t holding her like this?” he asked. “How do you feel about that?”

She felt assured, safe, because it was just too easy to believe Naruto. But… “What about Ino?”

“You think too much, Sakura. She’s been going through a hard time. Granny gave her a long talk about that last mission, and today with Asuma-sensei’s anniversary – she just needed a hug, that’s all.”

She hesitated. “That’s it?”

“I wouldn’t lie to you, Sakura. You know I love you.”

“Mm… what about me?”

“Huh?”

“If Ino got a hug, where’s mine?”

“Oh. You don’t get one.”

Sakura jerked away. “What?”

He laughed and pulled her back. “So you are jealous,” he said teasingly.

“I’m not jealous!” She could feel her face heating.

“Uh huh,” he replied sceptically.

“You… just shut up, Naruto.”

His grin widened. “Shut up and what?”

“… Shut up and kiss me.”


Edited by peanutbutter126, 05 November 2008 - 10:38 AM.


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Posted 08 November 2008 - 09:05 AM

Aha! I got an idea... not sure if it's all that great, but yeah....

Say Sakura was pulled into babysitting Ino's mischievous son, who has a massive crush on her. The kid in his eight year old glory, hits on Sakura and even goes so far to ask her to marry him.

Sakura in the end tells him sorry along with "Did I tell you I have a boyfriend?"

Cue Naruto's entrance, who decided to stop by and pick up Sakura.

"And he's the Hokage?" Sakura continues. Er.. yeah... you can end the drabble/story however you like happy.gif

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Posted 08 November 2008 - 09:33 AM

Haha! I think I can write something like that. Where did you get that idea from anyway, Onionhead?

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Posted 08 November 2008 - 09:40 AM

QUOTE (peanutbutter126 @ Nov 8 2008, 01:33 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Haha! I think I can write something like that. Where did you get that idea from anyway, Onionhead?


I think I've seen it done quite a few times for a few stories of different categories that I have read in the past and I thought that it'd be cute to have a NaruSaku version. I don't really remember, but those stories always amuse me.

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Posted 08 November 2008 - 12:38 PM

QUOTE (peanutbutter126 @ Nov 5 2008, 08:42 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Here it is (turned out to be a bit longer than I intended...)

Jealous

Sakura blinked up and down the street as she left the hospital. Strange… Naruto wasn’t even here. He was usually waiting by the time she left the building, and he hadn’t missed a day picking her up from work since… well, since they had become a bit more than good friends.

“Looking for someone?”

She looked around for the owner of the husky voice a bit more eagerly than she liked. A small ball of disappointment made itself comfortable in the pit of her stomach. “Oh. Kiba. Hi.” Akamaru twined his large body around her legs in greeting and she stroked his head. “Hello, Akamaru.”

“He likes girls that smell like flowers,” Kiba chuckled.

“I should smell more like blood, I think.”

He whistled. “Whoa, you found out already?”

“What?” Sakura blinked. “I just came out of an operation.”

The smile faded. “Oh, right. So you don’t know yet?”

“Know what?” she asked, confused.

Heavens, Kiba grinned just like Naruto. “Nah, nothing.”

Her eyebrow rose. Then, deciding that he was just pulling off a Naruto and being an idiot, she shook her head. “Whatever. Have you seen Naruto?”

He burst out laughing. “Hell, this is priceless!”

Sakura frowned. “What is up with you today, Kiba? Spit it out already!”

“Ha… heh, he’s at the park.”

All annoyance at the Inuzuka ebbed away. “He is? I wonder what he’s doing… he usually comes to get me after my shift… why are you staring at me like that?”

He composed himself solemnly despite the corner of his mouth continuously tugging upward. “Sakura, did I tell you I saw Naruto and Ino hugging?”

Silence. Sakura’s chest clenched uncomfortably. “So what?” she managed to force out.

Kiba stared incredulously at her. “What, you don’t mind?”

“Of… of course not! Ino is his friend, too.”

“True… but he’s your boyfriend,” he emphasised.

God, he’s right… Sakura shook her head. “You can’t expect me to keep him under a leash…” Really? a rebellious voice whispered in the back of her mind. “Talk about leashes, shouldn’t you be getting home, Kiba?”

His knowing chuckle irked her more than it should. “Come on, Akamaru. Never stick around a girl about to blow. See you around, Haruno.”

“Go away, Inuzuka.” Sakura knew she was a little too irritated by this latest… development. Naruto was a pretty open guy after all. He gave away as many hugs as he ate ramen. But usually she was the one in his arms, and even though she knew the likelihood that he was… unfaithful… was pretty low, Sakura could not help but be…

And to Ino of all people…

For a few minutes, she just stood there, brow furrowed in indecision. Then, with more determination than she felt, Sakura walked off.

Where had Kiba said her boyfriend was?
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“Do you sometimes feel like life is crushing you, Naruto?”

“Mm, sometimes. Usually when Sakura is angry.”

She chuckled softly and shifted her head onto a more comfortable position on his lap. “What exactly is love, do you think?”

“Love?” He leaned back, palms pressing against the grass, and tilted his head back to gaze at the ethereal orange of the setting sun. “Just… loving someone, I suppose.”

“Which letter of ‘exactly’ is missing from your dictionary, Mr State the Obvious?”

“Eh? But that’s so hard… ow! Don’t pinch!” Naruto grumbled as he rubbed his thigh. “Okay, fine; to me, it’s thinking of that special person every day, every minute, every second.” His features melted into a soft smile. “When she’s sad, you wish you could swap places and take the pain for her. And when she’s happy it’s like your world is lighting up…”

Ino rolled her eyes. “Don’t tell me this is how you made Forehead fall for you.”

“Something like that,” he grinned.

“Why do you have it so easy?” She huffed at her bangs, succeeding only in having them flop back onto her face. Naruto reached forward and tucked the strands behind her ear. She stared into his eyes for a moment, her lips forming a wistful smile. “I wish the guy from yesterday was like you, Naruto Uzumaki.”

“Should I be flattered?”

“Mm hmm. He was a real octopus.”

“That many arms?”

“You know what I mean.”

“Ne… why don’t you just tell him?”

“That he’s ugly and totally inconsiderate of a beautiful woman’s feelings? Yeah, I think I might… wait, I don’t even know his name. That might be a problem…”

“I was talking about Shikamaru.”

Naruto had to jerk his head back as Ino suddenly sat up, twisting around to gawk at him. “What, are you kidding?” she said in disbelief. “I can’t just go tell him!”

“Why not?”

“Well, for starters, he’s a lazy old bum who’s only interested in some stupid board game!”

“But you like him,” Naruto pointed out, grinning.

“What? I… I don’t like him!” Ino sputtered, her cheeks going red. After a pointed look from her companion, she grudgingly added, “Okay, maybe I do… a bit. Fine, fine! He’s more of a man than I thought. But… oh God, I just don’t know anymore!”

He rubbed her back soothingly. “Are you sure you thought about this enough?”

“Enough?” She laughed miserably. “I’ve been thinking about it for weeks! You actually think I can’t handle a bunch of desperate missing-nin? I was distracted!”

“You shouldn’t let your emotions affect your missions, Ino.”

You’re talking,” she shot back. He grinned sheepishly. Ino sighed and tapped her forehead with her fingers. “I guess I should go find him anyway because… you know. Chouji, too.”

“Ah. I think I’ll come along later.”

She gave him a small smile. “Thanks.” Her gaze focused on something in the distance, and she chuckled. “Well, I think I smell something sour.”

“Huh?” Naruto was confused.

“Have fun.” She patted his shoulder and got up.

“Sure you’re okay?”

“I’ll have to be, right?”

“I’m here if you need me, Ino,” he promised.

She flashed him a grateful smile. Then she was gone. Naruto watched her leave. She faded into the trees and disappeared from his sight.

“I’m not intruding, am I?”

Naruto jumped. He turned. There, standing over him, was a wistful Sakura. “Oh crap!” he exclaimed, getting quickly to his feet. “Sakura, I’m sorry! I forgot… I’m sorry! Look, I’ll make it up to you. How about-”

“What were you doing with Ino?”

His hands lowered. “Oh. You saw that?”

“Was I not supposed to?”

“No no! It wasn’t like that!” It was frightening how emotionless her face was. “She was having a bad day – I was just helping out.”

“Really? How, exactly?”

“Sakura…?”

She seemed to deflate. She sighed heavily. “I know, I know,” she muttered. “I’m being unreasonable, aren’t I? It’s not that I don’t trust you… it’s just… God, I sound like some girl out of Icha Icha Paradise!”

“I can see the resemblance,” Naruto agreed.

Sakura stared at him for a moment, and then slapped him lightly on the shoulder. “Naruto!” she scolded, blushing. Her tone loosened a little, her shoulders unclenching.

He cupped her chin in his large hand and tilted her face up to his. They locked gazes. “You were jealous, weren’t you?” he asked softly.

She tired to look away. “What are you talking about? Why would I be jealous? I’m not jealous…”

“Sakura,” he said in an uncharacteristically serious tone. She made herself look at him; his eyes were deep, smouldering, and they lured her in. “Getting all protective over me is good, don’t get me wrong, but you really don’t need to worry like that.”

“Protective? Who’s being protective?”

“Don’t be silly,” he sighed, and drew her into his arms. Sakura automatically laid her head on his chest and listened to his heartbeat, his deep breathing. He was warm. “How does this feel?”

“Nice,” she answered without thinking. “No, wait – I didn’t mean… you were hugging Ino like this!” There, it was out.

If he was surprised, he didn’t show it. Hell, he wasn’t even guilty! “What if I told you I wasn’t holding her like this?” he asked. “How do you feel about that?”

She felt assured, safe, because it was just too easy to believe Naruto. But… “What about Ino?”

“You think too much, Sakura. She’s been going through a hard time. Granny gave her a long talk about that last mission, and today with Asuma-sensei’s anniversary – she just needed a hug, that’s all.”

She hesitated. “That’s it?”

“I wouldn’t lie to you, Sakura. You know I love you.”

“Mm… what about me?”

“Huh?”

“If Ino got a hug, where’s mine?”

“Oh. You don’t get one.”

Sakura jerked away. “What?”

He laughed and pulled her back. “So you are jealous,” he said teasingly.

“I’m not jealous!” She could feel her face heating.

“Uh huh,” he replied sceptically.

“You… just shut up, Naruto.”

His grin widened. “Shut up and what?”

“… Shut up and kiss me.”



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Posted 08 November 2008 - 06:20 PM

QUOTE (peanutbutter126 @ Nov 5 2008, 03:42 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I'm finished! Except I don't think I got it the way catsi had in mind. It's not exactly humorous with a major dose of hurt and comfort. For some reason, I just can't write humour fics. I couldn't even write that last bit with Ino laughing and Shikamaru going "Troublesome" as catsi suggested, so I had to leave it out. Sorry guys, I guess humour is just not my forte.

Aside from that and my major impressions of inadequacy, I might even post this up on FF.net after a few more drabbles... see if anyone still wants to give me ideas after I reveal this monstrosity.

Here it is (turned out to be a bit longer than I intended...)

Jealous

Sakura blinked up and down the street as she left the hospital. Strange… Naruto wasn’t even here. He was usually waiting by the time she left the building, and he hadn’t missed a day picking her up from work since… well, since they had become a bit more than good friends.

“Looking for someone?”

She looked around for the owner of the husky voice a bit more eagerly than she liked. A small ball of disappointment made itself comfortable in the pit of her stomach. “Oh. Kiba. Hi.” Akamaru twined his large body around her legs in greeting and she stroked his head. “Hello, Akamaru.”

“He likes girls that smell like flowers,” Kiba chuckled.

“I should smell more like blood, I think.”

He whistled. “Whoa, you found out already?”

“What?” Sakura blinked. “I just came out of an operation.”

The smile faded. “Oh, right. So you don’t know yet?”

“Know what?” she asked, confused.

Heavens, Kiba grinned just like Naruto. “Nah, nothing.”

Her eyebrow rose. Then, deciding that he was just pulling off a Naruto and being an idiot, she shook her head. “Whatever. Have you seen Naruto?”

He burst out laughing. “Hell, this is priceless!”

Sakura frowned. “What is up with you today, Kiba? Spit it out already!”

“Ha… heh, he’s at the park.”

All annoyance at the Inuzuka ebbed away. “He is? I wonder what he’s doing… he usually comes to get me after my shift… why are you staring at me like that?”

He composed himself solemnly despite the corner of his mouth continuously tugging upward. “Sakura, did I tell you I saw Naruto and Ino hugging?”

Silence. Sakura’s chest clenched uncomfortably. “So what?” she managed to force out.

Kiba stared incredulously at her. “What, you don’t mind?”

“Of… of course not! Ino is his friend, too.”

“True… but he’s your boyfriend,” he emphasised.

God, he’s right… Sakura shook her head. “You can’t expect me to keep him under a leash…” Really? a rebellious voice whispered in the back of her mind. “Talk about leashes, shouldn’t you be getting home, Kiba?”

His knowing chuckle irked her more than it should. “Come on, Akamaru. Never stick around a girl about to blow. See you around, Haruno.”

“Go away, Inuzuka.” Sakura knew she was a little too irritated by this latest… development. Naruto was a pretty open guy after all. He gave away as many hugs as he ate ramen. But usually she was the one in his arms, and even though she knew the likelihood that he was… unfaithful… was pretty low, Sakura could not help but be…

And to Ino of all people…

For a few minutes, she just stood there, brow furrowed in indecision. Then, with more determination than she felt, Sakura walked off.

Where had Kiba said her boyfriend was?
-
“Do you sometimes feel like life is crushing you, Naruto?”

“Mm, sometimes. Usually when Sakura is angry.”

She chuckled softly and shifted her head onto a more comfortable position on his lap. “What exactly is love, do you think?”

“Love?” He leaned back, palms pressing against the grass, and tilted his head back to gaze at the ethereal orange of the setting sun. “Just… loving someone, I suppose.”

“Which letter of ‘exactly’ is missing from your dictionary, Mr State the Obvious?”

“Eh? But that’s so hard… ow! Don’t pinch!” Naruto grumbled as he rubbed his thigh. “Okay, fine; to me, it’s thinking of that special person every day, every minute, every second.” His features melted into a soft smile. “When she’s sad, you wish you could swap places and take the pain for her. And when she’s happy it’s like your world is lighting up…”

Ino rolled her eyes. “Don’t tell me this is how you made Forehead fall for you.”

“Something like that,” he grinned.

“Why do you have it so easy?” She huffed at her bangs, succeeding only in having them flop back onto her face. Naruto reached forward and tucked the strands behind her ear. She stared into his eyes for a moment, her lips forming a wistful smile. “I wish the guy from yesterday was like you, Naruto Uzumaki.”

“Should I be flattered?”

“Mm hmm. He was a real octopus.”

“That many arms?”

“You know what I mean.”

“Ne… why don’t you just tell him?”

“That he’s ugly and totally inconsiderate of a beautiful woman’s feelings? Yeah, I think I might… wait, I don’t even know his name. That might be a problem…”

“I was talking about Shikamaru.”

Naruto had to jerk his head back as Ino suddenly sat up, twisting around to gawk at him. “What, are you kidding?” she said in disbelief. “I can’t just go tell him!”

“Why not?”

“Well, for starters, he’s a lazy old bum who’s only interested in some stupid board game!”

“But you like him,” Naruto pointed out, grinning.

“What? I… I don’t like him!” Ino sputtered, her cheeks going red. After a pointed look from her companion, she grudgingly added, “Okay, maybe I do… a bit. Fine, fine! He’s more of a man than I thought. But… oh God, I just don’t know anymore!”

He rubbed her back soothingly. “Are you sure you thought about this enough?”

“Enough?” She laughed miserably. “I’ve been thinking about it for weeks! You actually think I can’t handle a bunch of desperate missing-nin? I was distracted!”

“You shouldn’t let your emotions affect your missions, Ino.”

You’re talking,” she shot back. He grinned sheepishly. Ino sighed and tapped her forehead with her fingers. “I guess I should go find him anyway because… you know. Chouji, too.”

“Ah. I think I’ll come along later.”

She gave him a small smile. “Thanks.” Her gaze focused on something in the distance, and she chuckled. “Well, I think I smell something sour.”

“Huh?” Naruto was confused.

“Have fun.” She patted his shoulder and got up.

“Sure you’re okay?”

“I’ll have to be, right?”

“I’m here if you need me, Ino,” he promised.

She flashed him a grateful smile. Then she was gone. Naruto watched her leave. She faded into the trees and disappeared from his sight.

“I’m not intruding, am I?”

Naruto jumped. He turned. There, standing over him, was a wistful Sakura. “Oh crap!” he exclaimed, getting quickly to his feet. “Sakura, I’m sorry! I forgot… I’m sorry! Look, I’ll make it up to you. How about-”

“What were you doing with Ino?”

His hands lowered. “Oh. You saw that?”

“Was I not supposed to?”

“No no! It wasn’t like that!” It was frightening how emotionless her face was. “She was having a bad day – I was just helping out.”

“Really? How, exactly?”

“Sakura…?”

She seemed to deflate. She sighed heavily. “I know, I know,” she muttered. “I’m being unreasonable, aren’t I? It’s not that I don’t trust you… it’s just… God, I sound like some girl out of Icha Icha Paradise!”

“I can see the resemblance,” Naruto agreed.

Sakura stared at him for a moment, and then slapped him lightly on the shoulder. “Naruto!” she scolded, blushing. Her tone loosened a little, her shoulders unclenching.

He cupped her chin in his large hand and tilted her face up to his. They locked gazes. “You were jealous, weren’t you?” he asked softly.

She tired to look away. “What are you talking about? Why would I be jealous? I’m not jealous…”

“Sakura,” he said in an uncharacteristically serious tone. She made herself look at him; his eyes were deep, smouldering, and they lured her in. “Getting all protective over me is good, don’t get me wrong, but you really don’t need to worry like that.”

“Protective? Who’s being protective?”

“Don’t be silly,” he sighed, and drew her into his arms. Sakura automatically laid her head on his chest and listened to his heartbeat, his deep breathing. He was warm. “How does this feel?”

“Nice,” she answered without thinking. “No, wait – I didn’t mean… you were hugging Ino like this!” There, it was out.

If he was surprised, he didn’t show it. Hell, he wasn’t even guilty! “What if I told you I wasn’t holding her like this?” he asked. “How do you feel about that?”

She felt assured, safe, because it was just too easy to believe Naruto. But… “What about Ino?”

“You think too much, Sakura. She’s been going through a hard time. Granny gave her a long talk about that last mission, and today with Asuma-sensei’s anniversary – she just needed a hug, that’s all.”

She hesitated. “That’s it?”

“I wouldn’t lie to you, Sakura. You know I love you.”

“Mm… what about me?”

“Huh?”

“If Ino got a hug, where’s mine?”

“Oh. You don’t get one.”

Sakura jerked away. “What?”

He laughed and pulled her back. “So you are jealous,” he said teasingly.

“I’m not jealous!” She could feel her face heating.

“Uh huh,” he replied sceptically.

“You… just shut up, Naruto.”

His grin widened. “Shut up and what?”

“… Shut up and kiss me.”



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Posted 09 November 2008 - 12:49 AM

Here you go! Again, turned out longer than I intended. I don't suppose 'drabbles' would be the correct terminology anymore... sweatdrop.gif

Children

“Gum.”

“I would prefer ‘pretty’.”

“Gum.”

“You’re making ‘pink’ sound very desirable, Akiko.”

The child tugged insistently on Sakura’s hair as she tried to change the two year old’s nappy. “Gum!”

“Gee,” the jounin said wryly, “you are Ino’s kid after all. There – all done!” She picked up Akiko and sat her on the counter. Big blue eyes goggled at her. Sakura resisted the urge to squeal “Kawaii!” and suffocate the adorable thing.

“Mama,” Akiko said, frowning at her babysitter.

“Your mother is working with your daddy on a project, Akiko.” Sakura casually made a shadow clone to watch the child while she poked around the discarded toys in the kitchen’s playpen. For some reason, she didn’t think Akiko Nara should be allowed possession of a rattle; the kid was too enthusiastic. The fact that a jounin’s shadow clone was having difficulties holding back a two year old child from crawling onto the nearest chair was enough supporting evidence.

“Look what I’ve got?” Sakura asked a moment later. Her clone disappeared with a relieved sigh as Akiko was handed back to her rightful temporary guardian.

“Dolly!” Akiko shrieked, grappling for the fluffy thing in Sakura’s hand.

“Okay, okay,” the pink-haired woman laughed, releasing her hold on the desired item. “I swear, you got more out of Ino’s genes than you should have. Her spitting image, too.”

Ever the intelligent little girl, Akiko stopped hassling her toy at the mention of her mother’s name. She stared at Sakura so intently that the jounin raised an eyebrow. Then she pointed at Sakura’s face. “Not Mama.”

“No, I’m not your mama,” Sakura agreed. “I suppose the hair colour is a bit of a giveaway, huh?”

She realised shortly that she should not have mentioned the word ‘hair’. The deer doll was promptly abandoned as Akiko resumed her previous interest. Sakura sighed as she gently tugged her long hair away from a curious mouth.

Akiko pouted. “Gum,” she whined.

Ino, you sooo owe me one.

I think your hair is pretty.”

Sakura turned just as Akiko – finally – abandoned chewing her hair in favour of greeting the newcomer. “’Rata!” she gurgled. “’Rata!”

“Hello, Arata,” Sakura smiled. “Finished showering?”

“I don’t think I cleaned myself properly,” he answered. His height made him the perfect target for some Akiko hair-tugging, but he ignored it. Apparently, brother and sister went through this quite often. “I couldn’t scrub my back because you weren’t there, Sakura.”

“I haven’t done that since you were four,” she chuckled. “I’m sure you’ll be hitting the age where you start thinking that girls give you cooties soon. You won’t like me so much after that.”

“Yeah I will,” he said stubbornly. “I’ll like you no matter what.”

Sakura relieved his hair of their spiky freedom as she picked up Akiko and deposited the child in the playpen. “That’s sweet, Arata, but don’t make promises you can’t keep. Can you watch over your sister for me while I wash the dishes? Thanks.”

He looked reluctant. “I want to help,” he began, but his sister obviously had other ideas. “Ow! Aki, cut it out! OW! Not the bangs, Aki! Not the bangs!”

Sakura smiled at the sight. Although he was six years her elder, Arata and Akiko made a cute sibling pair. In fact, since the both of them took on the appearances of their parents’ younger selves, it was almost like watching Ino tease Shikamaru all over again.

To think that Ino was the first to have kids…

“I’ll help.”

She looked down. “Hmm? Arata?” She chuckled. “Untangled yourself already? Do you need to wash your hair again?”

His cheeks flushed, but only for a moment. He was tall for a boy his age and didn’t even have to get onto his tiptoes to reach the sink. “I’ll help,” he said again, tugging the sponge out of her hand.

“It’s alright. I can get it done a lot faster than you.”

“Yeah,” he answered, grinning. “But I don’t want your hands to get all rough.”

Sakura laughed and relented, wiping her hands on a paper towel. “Who taught you that line?”

“No one. But really, your hands are so pretty everyone would want to keep them that way.”

She started giggling. “Haha… you’re good, Arata!”

He looked very proud of himself. “Sakura?”

“Mm?” A quick glance ensured that, through the suffering of her surrounding toys, Akiko was kept happy and entertained.

“Do you like me?”

She blinked, then laughed again. “Of course I like you.” She ruffled his hair affectionately. “You’re my best friend’s son. I’ve watched you all your life. I love you.”

Dishes were forgotten as Arata grinned widely. “That’s good, ‘cause I like you too.”

“You cute little thing.” Sakura leaned over a dropped a casual kiss on the top of his head, not noticing that the boy had turned a triumphant beetroot red. She looked over the counter at Akiko. “Hm, I’d better rescue Ino’s flowers – even if they are fake.” Just as she was going to walk away, a small hand grabbed hers and pulled her back. “Huh? Arata? What’s wrong?”

He hesitated, and put on a convincing smile. “Why don’t you marry me?”

She patted his head. “You’ve been saying that since you were five, Arata,” she said teasingly. “Don’t you get bored of it?”

“Yeah, but this time I’m serious!”

After a short pause, she bent down to his eye level. “How serious?”

He fumbled. “I-I really like you because you’re so nice and you’re really pretty… Aki likes you too!”

“Mm hmm. And do you like Akiko, Arata?”

He was surprised by the question, but the genes of Shikamaru’s brilliant mind had not yet awakened and Arata suspected nothing. “She keeps trying to eat my hair, and when I want to practice my target training in the yard Mom and Dad always makes me look after her. But when she’s not trying to be annoying she’s alright.”

Sakura nodded. “Then why don’t you ask Akiko to marry you?”

“She’s my sister!” he sputtered.

She raised an eyebrow. “And you think someone who is three times older than you is much better?”

“Yes!” He tugged on her hand. “Marry me!”

“Persistent little thing, aren’t you?” Sakura chuckled. She straightened, looking down at him. “Sorry, Arata, but I don’t think your parents would approve.”

“So?” he asked stubbornly. “I don’t care what they think.”

“Do you care about what the Hokage thinks? I doubt the leader of the village would be very happy either.”

For the first time, Arata’s certainty slipped. “What’s that got to do with anything?”

“Um… did I tell you I have a boyfriend?”

“Yeah. So?”

“My boyfriend is-” Sakura’s head snapped around as she heard voices at the front door. It sounded like Shikamaru was home, accompanied by… she turned back to Arata and gave him a small smile. “We’ll talk about this later. Look after your sister,” she called over her shoulder as she walked away.

He was in the lounge room. A bright smile split his face when he saw her leaning against the door frame. Shikamaru paused in his sentence and glanced over. He rolled his eyes as Naruto gave him a pleading look. “Fine, fine,” he grumbled. “You have my permission.”

Naruto whooped and a moment later, Sakura found herself off the ground, held up by his strong arms, her hands resting on his shoulders. He lowered her slightly and nuzzled her cheek. “Did you miss me?” he whispered, his eyes glittering.

“No.” But she was smiling.

He looked hurt. “No?” He set her carefully on her feet and gave her the puppy dog face. “And here I thought I’d come home with Shikamaru to pick you up…” He glanced at where his old friend was shaking his head. “You’re not having an affair with him while Ino’s still working with Ibiki, are you?”

“What?” she laughed, slapping his shoulder. “No!”

“Really?”

“Really.”

That was cue enough for him to start moistening his lips. “So…”

Sakura lowered her head to hide her blush. “Ask Shikamaru,” she mumbled.

Naruto grinned. “Oi, Shikamaru! Clearance for level two?”

To his credit, Shikamaru actually had to think about it. Being a father had changed him in more ways than extra mutterings of more duties. “Yeah, whatever,” he shrugged finally. “Not when Ino’s here, though. She’ll start complaining about how unromantic I am.”

But his friends weren’t listening. They were a bit busy figuring out what the other had for lunch.

Too bad it only lasted a few seconds.

Naruto jerked away and started hopping on the spot. “Ow!” he complained. Sakura blinked in surprise. She was quite certain that she hadn’t bit his lip, let alone his foot. Her confusion was dissipated when Naruto looked down and glared. “What was that for, gaki?”

“Stupid blondie!” Arata shouted.

“What?! What did you just call me?”

“I’ll be the next Hokage, just you watch! Then Sakura will be mine!”

Naruto blinked and glanced at his girlfriend. “Huh?” But he was quickly distracted by a kick to the shins. “Arghh! Shikamaru!

“Tch. So troublesome…”

-

“Ohhhh… is that what happened?”

“Yes.” Sakura nudged the man beside her good-naturedly. “You have competition, Lord Hokage.”

“Pah! I won’t lose out to some kid! You’re mine, Sakura! Mine!” He grabbed for her before she could dodge away. A squeal escaped Sakura’s lips as she found herself in Naruto’s arms, the one hand holding up her legs fluttering away at her ticklish spot.

“Ah! Stop it!” she laughed. “That tickles!”

It went on for another minute, and by then the couple had already disturbed a whole block of disgruntled sleepers. “Sorry!” Naruto grinned as he passed each curious face that poked out of the houses they passed. “My wife was a little naughty!”

“I am not your wife, Uzumaki!”

He chuckled. Then he leaned down close to her face and murmured, “But you are mine, Sakura Haruno.”

She latched her arms around his neck. “Only if you can keep me,” she whispered in his ear.

His laughter rumbled in his chest. Sakura nestled contently in his arms. The evening was perfect.

“Hey… Naruto?”

“Hmm?”

“If – and I mean if…” Sakura blushed. “If we had a child, do you want it to be a boy or a girl?”

He kissed her forehead. “Tonight?” he asked mischievously.

“N-No! Just… just answer the question!”

“… Girl. Definitely a girl.”

Edited by peanutbutter126, 09 November 2008 - 01:28 AM.


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Posted 09 November 2008 - 01:08 AM

LOL, kicks to the shin! Naughty little kid ain't he?

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Posted 13 November 2008 - 07:54 AM

Okay, wrote this on a whim when I was sniffling my nose off.

Pregnant

Naruto bounded across the rooftops, frowning. He hated it when he was approached by random with a message that Sakura was waiting for him and where; it was almost guaranteed that by the time he was informed, he was already late.

As it turned out, he was.

She grabbed him by the collar and viciously yanked him toward her before he even got an apology spitted out. “You,” she said coldly.

He gulped and raised his hands in a sign of peace and surrender. “Ne, ne, Sakura, I was only-”

“You’ll be taking responsibility, won’t you?”

His eyes widened. “F-for what?”

Suddenly, she let go of him, as if she had just remembered something, and started regulating her breathing. She had her back to him and all Naruto could do was hover anxiously behind her, fingers lacing nervously together. She was silent for a long time. It was killing him.

“Um… Sakura?” he asked in a frightened whisper. “Is everything… okay?”

“No,” she growled, making him recoil. “Everything is not okay.”

He hadn’t seen her this mad since that time she had caught him in the book shop with reservations for a special edition Icha Icha volume.

She took a deep shuddering breath that reminded Naruto of occasions where a solid fist would deck his guts. He was almost tempted to turn and run when she cursed and started wringing her shirt, a habit she had developed to portrayed how annoyed she was. “Okay, I can’t do this,” she said shakily. “Naruto, hold me.”

“Uh…”

“Just do it!” she snapped.

He hastened to oblige. His arms snaked behind her and encircled her waist. Almost immediately, she relaxed and leaned against him, burrowing her face into his neck. Despite his confusion, Naruto found himself smiling with content, and rested his chin gently on the top of her head. For a few minutes, they just swayed lightly on the spot.

Then she dropped the bombshell.

“I’m pregnant.”

He stiffened. No, he froze. His breath caught in his chest and if not for his demon tenant, he might have forgotten how to inhale. They had stopped swaying.

“Oh,” he ended up whispering.

She frowned. “Is that an oh as in ‘Oh damn, what are we going to do about it?’ or an oh as in ‘Oh, this will be great,’?”

“Oh as in ‘Oh, congratulations’.”

She tugged his arms away and turned around to stare at him. “What?”

He shrugged, smiling weakly. “I get it, Sakura. I understand. And really, I’m happy for you.”

“What are you on about?”

He returned her stare, and then turned away. “We haven’t been together long enough for it to be steady, huh? I thought… but it seems like…” He shook his head sadly. “So who is it?”

“Who is who?” Sakura asked back, brow furrowing.

“Geez, Sakura, I’m not that fragile. Just tell me; I swear I won’t kill him.”

“Tell you what?”

His teeth gritted together and he sighed. She was making this very difficult. “You know what I’m talking about.”

“No I don’t.”

“The father! Who’s the kid’s father?” he practically shouted in chagrin. His chest was heaving like he had just run ten laps around the Fire country.

She stared at him like he had just sprouted a tenth tail. Then she took a step back, shaking her head. “Oh, no. No, no, no, no, no!”

“No what?” he mumbled.

“Naruto… you…” Sakura covered her face with her hand and groaned. “God, you are such an idiot!”

He blinked in confusion. “What?”

“You thought… did I tell you that the baby was yours?”

Time froze. Everything – the whistling of the wind, rustling of the leaves, distant bustle of the village – everything tuned out. All he saw was her, and his eyes grew even wider. She had lowered her head. He reached out and gently tipped her face up so that they could lock gazes.

“Is it really…?” he murmured.

She bit her lip, and then nodded. “It’s ours,” she confirmed softly.

For a moment, Naruto was overwhelmed by the multitude of emotions that stampeded into his mind. His chest felt very compacted. “But I thought… we only did it once…”

Sakura blushed. “You.”

“Sorry?”

“You,” she repeated, gazing deep into his cerulean eyes. “You were my first, the only one I… yeah.” Inhale. Exhale. Remember to breathe, Haruno. “It’s yours, Naruto Uzumaki. I… I won’t let it be anyone else’s.”

“… Oh.”

Exp​ressions twisted into a familiar scowl. “What does that mean now?”

“Oh.”

“Oh what?”

He folded her into his arms and kissed her forehead, his eyes closed. “Oh I love you so much, Sakura Haruno.”

The creases on her face melted. “Baka,” she whispered.

“I know.”

“I am so not ready for this.”

“I know.”

“But it can’t be wrong. Shishou and Shizune said… God, Naruto, why did we…?”

“Because we love each other?”

“… I hate it when you’re right.”

“The Hokage is always right.”

“Be glad you’ve got it easy. You’re not the one who has to become a planet.”

“If you’re a planet, then I’m a moon.”

“Um, why?”

“You attract me – and it’s not gravity, I tell you. My life revolves around you.”

“… You are so corny.”

He grinned. “But you love me, right?”

She placed her hand against his cheek and smiled softly. He returned the smile and drew her closer to his chest.

There really was no need for words.

Edited by peanutbutter126, 29 November 2008 - 07:30 AM.


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Posted 13 November 2008 - 08:12 AM

=^__^= Love it. Sweet, corny, goofy all in one. straight up NaruSaku jsut as it should be.

Edited by catsi563, 13 November 2008 - 08:13 AM.

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#17 peanutbutter126

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Posted 28 November 2008 - 11:14 AM

Another drabble. Based off this corny thing my Mum always tells me. She's always telling me how to pick the guys. happy.gif

Roses

There were many stars scattered across the sky tonight, Sakura noticed. The moon curved in a lustrous crescent, seeming to glow brighter than usual. It was the perfect night.

Something light brushed against her hand. Subtly, Sakura tucked her arm to her side and withdrew. She didn’t need to look to know that Naruto’s hand was wrenching in mock dismay and making moves to find hers. They were both looking in the opposite direction; Naruto even whistled that ridiculous tune of his.

“Ne, Sakura,” he said casually.

“Yes?”

“The moon looks close tonight, doesn’t it?” Again, his skin brushed against hers, and her fingers twitched because he was warm and she had always liked the way his hand was big and closed strongly on hers.

Sakura pretended not to notice.

“The stars are out tonight,” she agreed.

“Yeah…” He raised his arm and pointed overhead. “See those two stars over there? See how close they are?” And his pinky teasingly hooked onto hers. It was almost as if they were making a childish promise… but they didn’t base their pledges on such symbolism. The roots of their bond were entrenched on something neither of them could explain, and even if they could would never voice such a delicate thing.

“They must be brother and sister. Twins, maybe.”

“Or maybe they’re not brother and sister,” he suggested. “Maybe they’re friends. Really, really close friends.” Prising, gently. She opened up. He was warm. “Maybe they’re us.”

“Maybe.” Still not looking at each other.

A pause. Her neck was starting to feel stiff. “Nah,” Naruto said. “That’s not us.”

It took a moment. When it registered that what had left her boyfriend’s lips was not remotely romantic or corny at all, Sakura turned to look at him in surprise and faint vestiges of hurt. She frowned. “What…” Her voice trailed off when she met his gaze. His eyes. They were blue and clear and crinkled at the edges when he smiled. Which was what he was doing right now.

“Nothing shines like Sakura,” he said, grinning. “Only Sakura is bright enough to catch my attention.”

“You baka.” Relaxed and allowed herself to press against his side as they walked down the path. She was aware that she was smiling.

Yes, it was the perfect night. Now, if only… Sakura shook her head. It would come. It wasn’t like Naruto would forget. He never forgot. He was just biding his time, waiting for the right moment. She just had to be patient.

But, half an hour later, and by that time they had to be at least halfway to their nameless destination, he still hadn’t made a move toward anything. Patience, Sakura told herself. Patience.

They climbed to the top of the Hokage Stone. Sat together, her leaning against him, and gazed down at the village. Sakura located their old training ground below them. She imagined that she could see the three stumps, with twelve-year-old Naruto tied to the middle and she and Sasuke sitting against the other two. That was where everything had started. The start of what was still drawing to an end. Back then, they had been Team Seven.

And now… it was just the two of them. Sakura pressed closer to Naruto’s side and he drew his arm around her, protectively, as if he knew exactly what she was thinking of. There was a way to deal. There always was. Maybe… maybe just the two of them was enough.

“It’s getting late, isn’t it?” Naruto’s voice was soft as he murmured into her hair. He was still the loudest ninja Sakura knew she would ever come across, but he was always quieter, somehow gentler, when he was with her. She liked this side of him, because only she was witness to the Naruto Uzumaki she had fallen for.

“Mm hmm.” She waited.

“You want to go home now?”

She hesitated. “Already?” she asked. “Isn’t it a bit… early?”

He chuckled. “Sakura, it’s almost midnight.”

“Really?” She sat up and stared up at the sky. He was right. Just how long had they been sitting here? “But…”

“But what?”

Biting her lip. “Aren’t you… aren’t you missing something?” He couldn’t have forgotten. He would never forget…

He blinked at her. “Missing what? Sakura?”

Sakura stared at him. She was… well, she was dumbfounded. He forgot. He forgot. Her fingers clenched into a solid fist. “Did I tell you,” she said slowly, through gritted teeth. How high was the Hokage Stone again? Tall enough. “Did I tell you,” she repeated, looking into his eyes, “that today was my birthday?”

He gazed back at her, unflinching. “Nope!” Naruto said cheerfully, grinning.

Shaking, now. “You-”

“I figured it out myself, remember?” he said smoothly. That smile made her falter. “You wouldn’t tell me when I asked you. We were still in the Academy. I asked around. Ino. Ami. I asked everyone. That’s how I found out. You didn’t tell me.”

She thought back, knew he was lying. How could she have never told him? Impossible! Sakura searched her archive of memories… and realised that she had, not once in her life, told Naruto of her birthday. But… still! “I told you just now,” she rebutted. “And even when I didn’t tell you, you still remembered.” Brandishing the fist. “I waited all day, all day… you… you…” How could he have forgotten? He wasn’t supposed to forget. He was Naruto. Naruto always remembered. Naruto loved her.

Naruto was smiling at her. “Ino and Lee gave you presents this morning,” he said. Her eyes widened. “Yeah, I saw that. Why’s my present so important to you?”

Sakura could feel her cheeks heating up. “B-because,” she sputtered. “Just because!”

“But why?”

“You’re… different.”

“How different?” he persisted. He was leaning forward, looking expectantly, curiously, at her, smiling. The corner of her mouth twitched and she pulled back.

“You know what I mean.”

“No I don’t.”

“Yes you do.”

“Of course not.”
“You…” She was losing it. “You’re my boyfriend!”

God, that smile! “What difference does that make?”

“It makes you… special,” she offered weakly.

“Okay, so I’m different and I’m special. What else is on today’s agenda, miss?”

Sakura groped around for something, anything. “Naruto – you…” All intelligent rebuttals abandoned her. Raised her fist. “I can’t believe you-”

Grabbed her wrist. Pressed his lips against hers. Immobilised her. Sakura’s arm began to drop.

Then they broke apart. “Happy birthday, Sakura.” And he was holding a bouquet of roses that had definitely not been there before.

“Na… Naruto…” She accepted them, smelt them. The buds glistened in the moonlight. Sakura smiled faintly at the young man. “Just a bunch of roses? You cheapskate.”

“Oh, they’re nothing,” Naruto said dismissively, waving his hand. “Ino gave them to me for free.”

“… What?”

“Hey, hey, calm down. Hear me out first, okay?”

She considered. Then she lowered her fist. “Talk.”

He grinned. “I’ll love you until the last one dies.”

She narrowed her eyes. “Not much of a claim, is it?”

“Look closer.”

And she did. She saw it. “One of them is…” She picked it out. “A fake.”

He was suddenly behind her. His arms wrapped around her waist, pulling her against him. His head rested on her shoulder, his face touching hers. She heard him clearly despite the whisper.

“Exactly, Sakura… exactly.”

“… Baka.”

“But you love me,” he pointed out.

She only smiled and twirled the stiff, unperishable rose in her fingers.

Edited by peanutbutter126, 29 November 2008 - 12:39 AM.


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Posted 28 November 2008 - 11:35 AM

=^__^= a cute one PB.

oh and as a side note.

Happy birthday you. hope its filled with all sorts of fun and good stuff.

*gives pb cake*
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Posted 28 November 2008 - 11:41 AM

QUOTE (catsi563 @ Nov 28 2008, 10:35 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
=^__^= a cute one PB.

oh and as a side note.

Happy birthday you. hope its filled with all sorts of fun and good stuff.

*gives pb cake*

Thank you, catsi!

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Posted 28 November 2008 - 10:38 PM

Haha... that one was cute, PB.

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