This is just a one-shot I came up with. I don't think its very good, but please read and review. I want to know what you guys think
You're never alone
You're never alone
Started by SakuNaruLover, Dec 20 2007 12:45 PM
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SakuNaruLover
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Posted 20 December 2007 - 12:45 PM
Well, with the contest coming up and with the many requests that I start writing again, I finally decided to get into writing mood again.
This is just a one-shot I came up with. I don't think its very good, but please read and review. I want to know what you guys think
You're never alone
This is just a one-shot I came up with. I don't think its very good, but please read and review. I want to know what you guys think
You're never alone
I am neither good nor evil, I am awake yet I dream
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Fly away to Dotzland! :D
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Posted 20 December 2007 - 03:20 PM
I decided to read this whole thing this morning and what I must say first is... Bleh, not good, yeah right!! It was very good, Danny! :thumbs: I can't honesty critique because I don't write much myself but I thought overall it was good. Something light to read. (And I'm not just saying that because I'm being nice, it's what I honestly think).
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StellarMind
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Posted 20 December 2007 - 05:41 PM
nice one! although I'm not a good writer I can say that yours is really good..
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Posted 20 December 2007 - 10:47 PM
Great job! I've read it several times!
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hehe...
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Posted 21 December 2007 - 12:37 AM
that was a good one-shot. I don't like too much one-shots but this one was good. 
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Posted 21 December 2007 - 06:36 PM
Excellent, Danny!!! :thumbs: :thumbs: :thumbs: WAY, WAY up!!!
What's Happening with the Naruto series as of now!
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Posted 21 December 2007 - 07:36 PM
Wow!! Thank you for all the nice comments, everyone! 
I seriously didn't expect such positive feedback. It means a lot to me
I just reread the story and I see that there are quite a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes in the fic. So I will beta the fic tomorrow or sunday.
And once again, thank you for the comments
I seriously didn't expect such positive feedback. It means a lot to me
I just reread the story and I see that there are quite a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes in the fic. So I will beta the fic tomorrow or sunday.
And once again, thank you for the comments
I am neither good nor evil, I am awake yet I dream
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Posted 22 December 2007 - 04:23 AM
Nya Nya~
I know who's it foooor.
*cough*
I know who's it foooor.
*cough*
LOVE IS WAR,
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Posted 25 December 2007 - 07:17 AM
that was really good 
i liked it a lot :thumbs:
i liked it a lot :thumbs:
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Posted 26 December 2007 - 08:14 PM
I've just read this and i have to say this story is in my top 2, only being behind a warming love! IT was so beauitful and heart warming. It's so good i've put a link of your story on my devart account so that everybody will enjoy this story as much as i did.
AND I AM NOT STEALING YOUR STORY! They're scum beyond scum.
AND I AM NOT STEALING YOUR STORY! They're scum beyond scum.
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Posted 26 December 2007 - 11:35 PM
Wow, talk about ironic. I read the story on fanfiction before looking at your post on here. I didn't even realize you wrote it. Great job, if you want to know just how much I loved it, look at the review I left. This was a real heart warmer. Sasuke's back in town, and everyone showed up for the party. Gah, want a wonderful story. I loved the whole scene with Naruto and Sakura on the Hokage Mountainside, that was my favorite part. You truly have a gift in this kind of category of writing. The whole emotional experience between the two was touching. I think I put this in my favorites...but if I didn't, I'll do it soon...after I come back from work tonight... 
. I seriously meant what I said though, I've read quite a few oneshots in my time on fanfiction, and this is one I can say deserves recognition. For that, you get a huge thumbs up! :thumbs:
. I seriously meant what I said though, I've read quite a few oneshots in my time on fanfiction, and this is one I can say deserves recognition. For that, you get a huge thumbs up! :thumbs:
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