So seeing that alot of the memebers here read my story I guess I can let you guys talk about it, give me ideas (I'm always open for ideas even if they are 100% stupid)
The current plan for this story is sorta unknown right now, although as you guys have seen that the first installment 'Saving the Promise' is indeed going to be about our Naruto and Sakura saving the promise they made to each other in the second chapter. (And Kyuubi is going to play a rather large role in that part). Therefore the first story is going to have the 'soul' break (hence the 'Broken Soul').
Anyway Enough chatter from me; when we reach the end of this story I'll write a small bit on the second story.
Broken Soul: Saving the Promise
Chapter One: I'm Sorry
Chapter Two: It's a Promise
Chapter Three: The Mission, Kage Bunshin, and Kyuubi
Chapter Four: Dreaming of Kyuubi
Chapter Five: The Mission and Meeting Iris
Chapter Six: Leaving and Reunited that Day
Chapter Seven: I'll Spill My Heart for You
Chapter Eight: I'm Home
Chapter Nine: Chuunin Exams
Chapter Ten: Challenge in the Sand
Chapter Eleven: Confession
Chapter Twelve: Raw Breath of Danger
Chapter Thirteen: Innoccent Flower
Chapter Fourteen: Crashing Ino's
Chapter Fifteen: Chuunin Exams...Begin!
Chapter Sixteen: Sakura Fubuki, Snow Storm of Cherry Blossoms
Broken Soul: Filling the Plot Holes
The One with the Yellow Hair
The One with the Grey Goose
The One with the Orange Jacket
The One with the Nightmare (On going link Fic with friend)
Chapter One: Sakura; Awakening
Chapter Two: Ino; Annoyance
Chapter Three: Sakura; Fustration
Broken Soul: Update Warning Thread
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Posted 09 July 2006 - 01:49 PM
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Posted 14 July 2006 - 06:10 PM
YAY go on Shouri-chan!
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Posted 15 July 2006 - 12:31 AM
shouri-chan! i haven't seen you in a while! did you disappear? 
or may be i just haven't been here in a while. anyways, i'll definitely read it!!! 
or may be i just haven't been here in a while. anyways, i'll definitely read it!!!
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Posted 15 July 2006 - 01:52 PM
Yea I Disappeared...working my butt off for this chapter so I could it done before my trip, then my trip got cancelled (THANK GOD).
Then I remembered I forgot to proofread that chapter...so it's my worst one to date...
Then I remembered I forgot to proofread that chapter...so it's my worst one to date...
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Posted 17 July 2006 - 08:28 AM
Yeah the story is awesome!!!!!!!!
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Let light be our guide towards victory
Whenever there's despair there's a darkness, whenever there's hope there's a light and it's up to us to bring in that light.
Let light be our guide towards victory
Whenever there's despair there's a darkness, whenever there's hope there's a light and it's up to us to bring in that light.
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Posted 17 July 2006 - 09:14 PM
i see. yeah, i agree. good story.
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Posted 21 July 2006 - 04:25 AM
I think I died again...usually by now I would have half the chapter done...*looks at toolbar...a document isn't open*
Ok so after that last chapter I lost a tad of my motivation...so I'm just trying to clear my mind a little before it become too fustrated with it...
actually I need ideas...Iris is going to go postal but I just don't know how to put it in words...
Ok so after that last chapter I lost a tad of my motivation...so I'm just trying to clear my mind a little before it become too fustrated with it...
actually I need ideas...Iris is going to go postal but I just don't know how to put it in words...
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Posted 25 July 2006 - 06:07 PM
okay okay if anyone read these I need ideas?
Has it been stated that Sakura is actually a good cook?
Has it been stated that Sakura is actually a good cook?
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Posted 01 August 2006 - 07:59 AM
not that i know of (in canon at least) but like 99% of the fan fics out there make her a good (or at least halfway decent) cook.
Think about it this way:
You're the author (a.k.a. God in this case)
Want Sakura to be a good cook?
BAM!
She's the next Emeril.
And nobody will hold it against you.
keep up the awesome story!
Think about it this way:
You're the author (a.k.a. God in this case)
Want Sakura to be a good cook?
BAM!
She's the next Emeril.
And nobody will hold it against you.
keep up the awesome story!
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Posted 08 August 2006 - 03:27 PM
wow sorry for this chapter being so slow in release...i've been in the middle of packing and moving and unpacking, although for the next two days I'm gone to the cottage so no interweb (internet) therefore a perfect enviroment to write (no distractions lol)
I'm currently at seven pages and Sakura is indeed a SPOILER cook.
I'm not going to spoil it for you.
I'm currently at seven pages and Sakura is indeed a SPOILER cook.
I'm not going to spoil it for you.
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Posted 12 August 2006 - 02:40 PM
Chapter Six is posted!
Chapter Six: Leaving and Reunited that Day
And Sakura is indeed a Kitchen Klutz!
Chapter Six: Leaving and Reunited that Day
And Sakura is indeed a Kitchen Klutz!
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Posted 12 August 2006 - 09:00 PM
I wonder kind of action will their be in the wave country this time.
Hey can you make Naruto & Sakura accidentially kiss beforethey part ways again. Then have oftenly on eah others minds during their training with the sannins. Meet up again when Sakura's on a mission causing a case of sexual tension in the air.
Now that will be sweet!
Hey can you make Naruto & Sakura accidentially kiss beforethey part ways again. Then have oftenly on eah others minds during their training with the sannins. Meet up again when Sakura's on a mission causing a case of sexual tension in the air.
Now that will be sweet!
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Let light be our guide towards victory
Whenever there's despair there's a darkness, whenever there's hope there's a light and it's up to us to bring in that light.
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Posted 16 August 2006 - 09:49 PM
good idea...but let's keep this story a T rated one...
if there are any questions according to suffixes..just ask cuz I know someone has already...
if there are any questions according to suffixes..just ask cuz I know someone has already...
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Posted 16 August 2006 - 10:42 PM
Has Sakura called Naruto Naruto-kun yet?
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Let light be our guide towards victory
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Posted 17 August 2006 - 07:42 AM
Oi, your story is turning out really well. Way to go
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Posted 19 August 2006 - 01:16 AM
So is this like an AU take on the post-Sasuke battle and the timeskip?
Joe Is Gonna Kill You.
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Posted 21 August 2006 - 01:24 AM
QUOTE (Hopestar @ Aug 16 2006, 06:42 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Has Sakura called Naruto Naruto-kun yet?
No she hasn't and she never will...as stated, she will be skipping the '-kun' stage and just keep calling him Naruto, because actually calling someone without a suffix actually is a step up, so calling him -kun would be a step down...it's confusing but eventually Naruto will start calling Sakura just Sakura...unless you want 'Naruto-chan'
QUOTE (TheVileOne @ Aug 18 2006, 09:16 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
So is this like an AU take on the post-Sasuke battle and the timeskip?
Yes it is...um yea
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So the guys are back in the Country of Wave, they have discovered the name of the bridge! So any ideas to give out? I've already written a fair scene and the re-introduction to Tazuna and co...although I think I forgot Inari....
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Posted 31 August 2006 - 10:55 PM
Bunny: Sasuke, join me.
Sasuke: What will I receive if I join you?
Bunny: POWER! UNLIMITED POWER!
Sasuke: Sweet! what do I do?
Orochimaru: Sssssssssssssaaaaaaasssssssssukkkkkkeeeeeee-kkkuuuuuunnnn!
Sasuke: oh f***
Sono nantomo ienai sekushii na oshiri wo ore no kokan ni okittensukete rizumu ni awasete kosurinasai = Back that ass up.
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