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#1 Uzumaki Naruto

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Posted 11 November 2004 - 03:22 AM

Sakura's Turn
By: Uzumaki Naruto
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You were annoying everyday. I thought this was end of my life. But there was always Sasuke-kun?There was always Sasuke-kun who always made me cry and always made me fall
It was a nightmare?it was a disaster.
I had become a loss cause and always watched your backs.
I looked as you both walked past me quickly. Stronger you both got and only one made me cry as the other made me smile

It was a nightmare?it was a disaster. I was a lost and I didn?t know what was the cause.
Then he left and you made a promise and I realized, you always knew!
Why did it have to be you, why couldn?t it have been Sasuke?
Why did you have to be the one who knew what I want, why did you have to be the one that made me happy.

I thought you were a loss cause, I thought you were a nightmare, a disaster. It was what I always said.
You were a loss cause, not a hero. That is what I always thought.
But you always seemed to be against that, you always said Hokage this and Hokage that.
You had no place to go and no place to run, the only path you followed was the way to becoming Hokage.
You weren?t just part of a ninja, you were you. You were Uzumaki Naruto.

You were a nightmare, a disaster, you always annoyed me and I hated you.
But the truth was, I was the nightmare, I was disaster and I was the annoying one.
I wanted to protect you, I wanted to see my back, but even then I did not get to far.

You never judged me?you never made me cry. I thought you were annoying and always in the way.
The truth is you helped me; you helped me so much that it hurts that I can?t help you.
You would always say one day you would be Hokage, that is what you always said.
I would always look at you and believe you couldn?t make it, but you would never give up and I know you can prove me wrong!

I thought I knew it all, but I was always wrong, I don?t know you Naruto, and you still love me after all I have done.
You always prove me wrong and you still fought against everyone to prove your strength.
You always change the way I feel in my heart; you make me excited and happy.
I thought I knew you but I was wrong.

I thought you were not a hero, always trying to steal the spotlight from Sasuke, but I was wrong?
You saved my life Naruto?how can I ever pay you back for that?how can I ever pay you for the love you have in your heart for me!
As much as I don?t want to?as much as I don?t want you to win, you have my heart and I will not let you be alone or sad anymore.

I won?t be a victim anymore. I wont be a nightmare or a disaster.
No longer a loss cause, but a hero. I will prove everyone wrong and I will gain acknowledgement from you!
I won?t shove any more thoughts of Sasuke in my head anymore.

I thought I knew it all, I thought you were a nightmare, a disaster, a loser that could never beat Sasuke, but I was wrong.
You went up against everything I thought of you, you destroyed it and showed me the true Uzumaki Naruto.
My insults never affected you; all you did was have care and love for me.
Naruto you will never let me win in the battle of me saying no, because you have already won.

You are a nightmare, a disaster that is what I always said, you were a loss cause, not a hero, and you always annoyed me.
But you proved me wrong and you went against that and won my heart!

You changed the feelings in my heart, you made me so happy, every prank I wanted to laugh, every joke made me tear with joy, every time you won a fight,
I would feel so happy and thrilled. You cannot change these feelings in my heart because I finally understand.

You?re not a nightmare; you?re not a disaster. That is what I say now. You are not a loss cause, you are a hero, and you will make it on your own!
Because?because you are Uzuamaki Naruto and you will become Hokage!
When that happens Naruto, I hope to be by your side, I want to see you accomplish that dream and as your biggest prize, I hope you will accept a kiss from my lips.
Naruto?I thought I would never fall in love with you?but I did? it brings tears to my eyes and joy to my heart, you take my pain away.
You are Uzumaki Naruto, a proud man, a future Hokage, and one day?maybe one day something more then just friends with me.

I am Haruno Sakura, and Naruto, one day you will see my back, and I will show you how much I love you too.

#2 hokuten

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Posted 11 November 2004 - 03:33 AM

really nice! geez you keep pumping out all these fics/sonnets/poems/monologues!? XD

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#3 Wrathchylde

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Posted 11 November 2004 - 05:08 AM

Another Good one, UN. One thing though. It's "lost cause" not "loss cause". Other than that, it's quite spiffy.

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Posted 11 November 2004 - 07:03 AM

Hey, you finished first! Not that I have already started mine or anything LOL.

It's a nice fic. I like it.
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Posted 11 November 2004 - 09:58 AM

I like this fic too. happy.gif Would be cool if Sakura was thinking that way in the manga, hehe.

A couple of mistakes, but they were already pointed out by Wrath. happy.gif

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Posted 20 November 2004 - 03:02 PM

WOW THAT KICKED ASS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I LOVED IT!!!!!!! biggrin.gif good job man biggrin.gif


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