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#1 tricksie

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Posted 15 November 2014 - 04:49 AM

Not ready to post to ff.net, but thought I'd post it here as a pick-me-up! First chapter of a new fic, The Night Market. AU, modern, NS vic - Naruto is a master pickpocket/thief in modern day Konoha, and Sakura is a ramen cook and med student. Let me know what you think!

 

 

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#2 Torxe

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Posted 15 November 2014 - 12:42 PM

awesome, looking forward to the rest of the story

 

just out of curiousity will there be any fighting in the story? I do not really prefer one answer above the other, just curious ^^


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Posted 15 November 2014 - 01:01 PM

:) Um, no real fighting. Not like in the manga. Though there will be some scenes of violence — Naruto getting beat up, etc. — but more like real world stuff. Not people brawling at every turn. There'll be yakuza-type scenes, dive bars and strip clubs. The seedy underbelly of a modern-day Konoha. 



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Posted 15 November 2014 - 03:48 PM

Really interested. I'm looking forward to reading more!



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Posted 15 November 2014 - 04:07 PM

This is really cool! I like it.


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Why do people NOT ship these two? I just don't get it.

Probably cause they hate Sakura. When she's probably the most developed female character in the whole show.

I respect Hinata, but Sakura deserves some too.


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Posted 15 November 2014 - 07:22 PM

:) Um, no real fighting. Not like in the manga. Though there will be some scenes of violence — Naruto getting beat up, etc. — but more like real world stuff. Not people brawling at every turn. There'll be yakuza-type scenes, dive bars and strip clubs. The seedy underbelly of a modern-day Konoha. 

 

Awesome, was thinking Naruto would keep outwitting the people following him like that.

Thx for the 'preview' ^^.


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Posted 15 November 2014 - 07:40 PM

This is great. Hm, by any chance, were you inspired by an Aladdin scene? Because I swear the imagery in this strongly reminded me of the scene where he's chased. Haha. just me...?

 

Anyway, I really do like this. The characters are placed in such a different situation. Kinda leaves me wanting more. Please continue.  :smile:



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Posted 16 November 2014 - 03:20 AM

This is great. Hm, by any chance, were you inspired by an Aladdin scene? Because I swear the imagery in this strongly reminded me of the scene where he's chased. Haha. just me...?

 

Anyway, I really do like this. The characters are placed in such a different situation. Kinda leaves me wanting more. Please continue.  :smile:

 

:) No, but I know exactly what you're talking about! I don't remember exactly what started the this plot bunny — possibly Naruto as a pick pocket, but I think it was Sakura as a ramen cook — but the idea for the night market is from seeing a tv show about a night market in Bangkok. People loved it, and there were night markets in lots of Asian cities. So the idea came from there. The night market becomes this place of freedom where the rules are relaxed for Naruto and eventually Sakura. It's truly a modern fic, so it won't have the addition of demons or ninjas, but it will have other tough modern challenges. Glad you like it!  :D



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Posted 16 November 2014 - 04:03 AM

 

:) No, but I know exactly what you're talking about! I don't remember exactly what started the this plot bunny — possibly Naruto as a pick pocket, but I think it was Sakura as a ramen cook — but the idea for the night market is from seeing a tv show about a night market in Bangkok. People loved it, and there were night markets in lots of Asian cities. So the idea came from there. The night market becomes this place of freedom where the rules are relaxed for Naruto and eventually Sakura. It's truly a modern fic, so it won't have the addition of demons or ninjas, but it will have other tough modern challenges. Glad you like it!  :D

I hope you will continue to wow us with it :)



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Posted 16 November 2014 - 04:48 AM

"And it had the same warming effect as the ramen did — it left him wanting a little more."

 

It goes for me too, I WANT MORE.

 

I love how this version of Sakura really has a lot of street smarts. Not that our actual Sakura doesn't, she definitely has her moments, but this one has it down to a 'T.' Hopefully this version of Naruto will also have the same unpredictable traits, using some nifty ninja-ish (but not really NINJA ninja, since this is modern AU) tricks to get out of trouble every now and then, like what happened here. This version of Naruto seems to revel in his more prankster mischevious side, which was something I would've liked to see more of in canon.

 

This might be really REALLY random, but one particular scene that stood out to me was when Sakura threw her apron over the stack of textbooks. I didn't actually read the short description up top where you mentioned she was a med-student, so when I read this scene, I liked how you showed she was actually studying for something, in a very "passing-detail" sort of manner.

 

I don't know, it's strange of me to notice something like that, but yeah.

 

Anyways, you somehow managed to combine my mental image of Sakura and Ayame (whom I secretly ship with Naruto on the side. Serious. IT MAKES SO MUCH SENSE) what with Sakura being a ramen chef, and as much as I'm hoping to see Ayame here, it's probably not gonna happen, if not as a cameo but yeah...I'm just rambling randomly now.

 

Anyways, thanks for the great read! And sorry for the random review, lol.






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