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Fanfic: Goodbye Days( a post epilogue story)
Started by Luna, Nov 08 2014 07:20 PM
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Posted 08 November 2014 - 08:51 PM
I have read it. It is good so far.
My only regret is having to hear Sakura dwelling on her mistakes and how she had behaved like a blithering idiot when Sasuke returned. Alas, that is the prize to pay when canon is utterly wrecked and you are trying to fix it and salvage it rather ignore the stupidities, the ooc-ness, the plots with no resolution, the out-of-nowhere happenings (Do you know that I have seen people that supports this travesty arguing that "Maybe Sakura is a medic and works in the hospital but we did not see it"? It is funny how we have to imagine, guess and assume all kind of explications and rationalizations in order to explain everything away. You would think that explaining plot points and twists is the author's job, not ours, and it would be done in the original material)...
I am not sure of how I feel about Ensalada-... Sarada being Karin's child. Then again, She DOES resemble Karin, and Sakura has put up with so much muck of Sasuke -the man that she got married to because she thought that he was cool when they were eight- that raising her husband's lover's daughter is lame in comparision and actually makes her seeming stronger (or a bigger masochist).
I hope that you continue this. It has been encouraging.
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