I wrote a short fanfiction; Sakura's POV (chapter 1) and then Naruto's POV (chapter 2).
It's short, but it's very angsty (at least I think it is) and rated M due to touchy subjects (rape).
I wrote it because I wanted to see how far I could go (how much feeling I could write in a story).
So I'm embarrassed to ask, but if anyone likes to read angst/rated M/touchy subjected stories, could you please read mine and perhaps tell me what you think? What I could do differently? What I could add to it?
A couple comments for my fanfic think I went a little too far, lol... but isn't that what makes a good story? when it can make someone feel uncomfortable and upset?
Should I delete it? or work on it?
Please read under your own discretion.
Here's the link: https://www.fanficti...e-Land-of-Irony
Thanks :)
I have not read your fic, but I'll try to give some advice as best I can.
I think the only one who can decide if you've gone "too far" is yourself. When dealing with touchy subjects (like rape) people are prone to extreme reactions. However if they've been thoroughly warned about the subject matter and read anyway, I don't think they have any right to really complain -- they chose to read, knowing what the story contained and in that case it's really on them. Writers can't please everyone and we have to take the criticism with the praise. But, you also have to enter into writing about these more sensitive topics with an awareness of possible reader reactions and keep that in mind when deciding how to approach it.
For example, a fic I'm currently working on for the series Soul Eater, deals with the topic of adultery. In that series the main character's father cheats on her mother and this leads to divorce and has a strong effect in shaping the main character's view of men in general and leaves her resentful of her father. While the subject in never delved into too deeply in the manga, I found it very relatable on a personal level and decided to explore it in a fic, partially as a cathartic exercise. Since I'm writing from the main character's perspective as a young child, I've tried to keep in mind the way the situation would appear through her eyes, and at the same time not making her father out to be the "bad guy", but a flawed human being.
It's not the same topic, but both are 'touchy' ones to tackle. Rape in particular is a tough one. I can't tell you how many times I've come across fics that promote rape as an okay thing and it's no surprise with the way modern culture as become so passive to the idea of rape that to many it doesn't seem like a big deal. It should never be made out to be okay or acceptable, and those that do are the ones taking it "too far" (I'm not saying that's what you did; like I said, I haven't read it.) But it is possible that maybe the readers who felt you'd gone too far felt that maybe you had not dealt with the subject matter respectfully enough? I'm only guessing. 
One of my favorite novels -- which deals with the subject of rape and depression -- is Speak, by Laurie Halse Anderson. When I read this book for the first time in my teens, it had a profound effect on me in shaping my outlook on the world, in a very positive and eye-opening way. But many still criticize the book as "child pornography and promoting rape". It does no such thing, but instead shows the very real and devastating effects rape has on the victim.
The thing to keep in mind, I think, is that rape is a very real, very horrible crime that isn't about sex, but power. It objectifies the victim and it's not something they heal from emotionally very easily. Try to make sure you are treating the subject matter with the respect and seriousness it deserves, and I think you'll do just fine. 
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