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#1 Skilatry

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Posted 18 July 2013 - 10:34 PM

I'm in the middle of writing a NaruSaku fanfic which focuses on a different aspect of the pairing in each chapter. I'm trying to make Naruto and Sakura as IC as possible. One chapter will be them going on a date, another will focus on their marriage, another will focus on their children etc.

 

Now I have reached a point where I want a sex scene between the two.

 

It might sound strange but I'd like to know what you think Sakura's underwear preference is, what you think she'd where on a regular day. Cotton underwear, boyshorts, thongs, or something else?

 

I hope I don't sound too hentai asking this question. I'd just like to know what would be IC for Sakura.

 

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Posted 18 July 2013 - 10:44 PM

The underwear she uses in RTN is sorta cute.

 

But it's no biggie, as long as the dialogue, body language etc are IC.

 

Can you link to the fic? Sounds so adorable ~~ :wibble:


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Posted 18 July 2013 - 10:58 PM

I havent uploaded it yet as I'm still in the middle of writing it. Its actually the first fic I've done so I'm a bit tentative to let other people see it at the moment, when its done however I'll be sure to send you a link.

 

What underwear are you referring to in RTN btw?


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Posted 18 July 2013 - 11:04 PM

The one she wears right before Sasuke knocks on her door with a rose.

 

Can't find a picture. :excited:


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Posted 18 July 2013 - 11:22 PM

Oh yeah that one, I don't really think she would wear something like that normally though lol



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Posted 18 July 2013 - 11:23 PM

Then take a pink panty.

 

Don't concern yourself with tiny details, or else you'll never get the fic up.


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Posted 18 July 2013 - 11:29 PM

I personally have Sakura wear cotton panties and I think in one chapter I had her in a thong. In some cases I look at her personalty and then I think about the average women, myself included, and my underwear selection is a little bit of everything. Ask yourself how you want the scene to go. Are you looking for a sexy sensual scene? If so go for sexy underwear. Same goes if its more mushy and cute. Good luck!


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Posted 19 July 2013 - 10:13 PM

I think her's would be a cotton panty with a bunny print on the front......

 

Well, either that or the bloomers in RTN

 

Good luck in figuring out your fanfic!



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Posted 19 July 2013 - 10:31 PM

I think her's would be a cotton panty with a bunny print on the front......

 

Well, either that or the bloomers in RTN

 

Good luck in figuring out your fanfic!

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Posted 19 July 2013 - 11:38 PM



I think her's would be a cotton panty with a bunny print on the front......

 

Well, either that or the bloomers in RTN

 

Good luck in figuring out your fanfic!

 

 

For whatever reason I saw this image of Gohan and his "secret" when you mentioned animal print underwear.

 

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Posted 20 July 2013 - 03:00 PM

I'm in the middle of writing a NaruSaku fanfic which focuses on a different aspect of the pairing in each chapter. I'm trying to make Naruto and Sakura as IC as possible. One chapter will be them going on a date, another will focus on their marriage, another will focus on their children etc.
 
Now I have reached a point where I want a sex scene between the two.
 
It might sound strange but I'd like to know what you think Sakura's underwear preference is, what you think she'd where on a regular day. Cotton underwear, boyshorts, thongs, or something else?
 
I hope I don't sound too hentai asking this question. I'd just like to know what would be IC for Sakura.
 
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As long as it is about them both enjoying it I'm fine.  :P And no, you're not. Or else A lot of writers are consider peverts. Cause A lot of novels have those scenes in it anyway. That said, I can't say what is IC for Sakura with that sort of thing. It'd be interesting to see so Give it a shot first.  :D You will always be appreciated for trying. And Hentai is a western overgeneralization of adult situations (If you know what I mean). to be technically correct it means grotesque or weird. feel free to correct me if I'm wrong anyone.  :sweatdrop:  


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#12 Skilatry

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Posted 21 July 2013 - 01:51 AM

Hentai is actually a Japanese word for pervert.



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Posted 25 July 2013 - 01:16 AM

Well from what I read it wasn't, traditionally. I think it was a recent thing. Anyway, I would not say it is hentai if it is done with realistic intimacy and mutual consent.  :smile: So what I'm getting at is don't do the scene just for the sake of the scene.  :happy:


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#14 Skilatry

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Posted 28 July 2013 - 04:27 AM

I wasnt really being that literal when I said Hentai :mellow:. I just meant I hope I didnt sound too perverted asking the question lol. Anyway I hope more people would give their 2 cents and say what feels IC for Sakura.



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Posted 29 July 2013 - 06:06 AM

OH. Well then , lets see........ just some suggestions.

 

1. Sakura being a bit flustered and hits Naruto in embarrassment in the middle of of it.

2. She says " B-Be more gentle!! Idiot..............

3. After they're done she turns red.... and hits  Naruto again. 

 

:smug: And now I'm branded as a pervert........ :argh:  :P


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Posted 29 July 2013 - 06:24 AM

Sakura pretty well seems like a normal girl to me in regards to sexual situations, and thusly would react in pretty well normal ways.

 

shes been shown canonically to be a bit of a pervert or to have a perverted side so I highly doubt shed be shy, or if she did--first timer-- shed get over it pretty darned quickly.

 

undy wise like Konahakitten said above as a normal girl I imagine shed have a fair to decent selection of various panties, and such. I also imagine she might have a few choice elements given her best friend is Ino who strikes me as someone who would make sure sakura was prepared for just such an occasion.

 

Lastly I see Sakura being perfectly willing to be the aggressor in an intimate encounter. contrary to many fan fiction portrayals. She is very much a woman, and was quite willing to hug Naruto twice in front of people, as well as kiss Naruto--disguised as Sasuke-- at the bench. Such a forward nature is someone willing to initiate an encounter and push the issue to its climax.


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Posted 29 July 2013 - 07:19 PM

Yeah, my suggestions are for first timers.  :chuckle:


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