Dart Tension

Whats that type of scene you have trouble doing? Whether it be action, humor, a dramtic scene, trouble planning a character death, Ect.


For me, I think I have trouble with action scenes...not sure.

Does anyone agree with me that the filler anime arc with Naruto and Sakura journeying into the rice country had some nice narusaku moments? I havent seen it in a while, but I saw a NaruSaku AMV and saw some scenes from that arc and they were pretty cute. I feel like watching it again.

I was on deviant looking for some narusaku pics. I found some pretty good ones but man some people are ruthless against this pair (which I love to death by the way). Man it felt like my skin was melting off the longer I stayed there.

*huddles back into safetyness of this forum in deepest darkest hole*

Well seeing as how I recently discovered the art of narusaku mushyness. After reading a bunch of fics for about a week now. (A week nonstop seriously) I've decided to write a fic of my own. A problem is it conflicts with a story I'm currently typing about a superhero. This story is nonstop so I'm not abandoning it it just means I'm spending less time on it.

Anyways the fic willbe narusaku obviusly. however for a year now I've had this crazy fantasy where I would miraculously arrive in the naruto universe and become friends with the ninja of konoha (or konohagure sp?) especially naruto and sakura. Now I actually plan on putting this fantasy in words.

I will not have my own name but the name of the super hero in my other story, Dart Tension! (copyrighted by me! ) Dart Tension is a teenaged boy that is based off me in both stories. He had powers such as strength, speed, ect. However in the fic, Dart Tension is me, just a different name. (hope I'm not confusing)

Anyways it will start off with me in my room and after a certain occurence of events I will find my self in the naruto world just after team seven gets back from the lands of waves arc with zabuza. After a while I discover I have powers and become a part of team 7. The story will be very humorous focusing some of the story on me but at the same time revolving around the relationship of Naruto and Sakura.
I soon realize that my presence in the naruto world makes things that were supposed to happen in the anime and manga can be changed by me. I also am trying to get naruto and sakura together like suggesting they go somewhere alone and stuff like that.


Some of you may realize that is somewhat similar to "Saotome Naruto". It's true I have read that fic and it's brilliant but I am not stealing any ideas besides the fact of a person arriving in a different universe thing.

Also like some naruto episodes before it starts or after it ends where they have a little bonus where a certain character talks about something. (Seen alot in naruto shippuden) This will occur alot too!


Any thoughts or ideas? I have a pretty solid idea on how to start it and am going to start it in a few minutes.
Wish me luck!!!!!!

(Also I would very much appreciate it if some explains honorifics sp? to me. Example naruto-kun, sakura-chan. I would like to have certain japanese phrases in there too. After watching subs I'm quite familiar with some of them but I feel I should have a couple common phrases like: sorry, hi, I love you and small stuff like that. I don't need them however but it would be cool since Dart is american and is trying to learn japanese byhimself.)


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3568661/1/

Here is the story.