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At least his face is cute..... :((

I am afraid we both will have to agree on disagreeing with this one. 

Sasuke has been stripped of the appearance of power. He looks like a wino with his ratty poncho and his beads and his toilet-paper headwrapping. He looks nothing like the powerhouse that has been consistenly craftier than his adversaries and the only one as powerful as Naruto without having a tailed demon stuck in him. No he's a traveling hobo. (Again this is all to make Naruto look good — because if Sasuke was out wandering around still looking as powerful as ever, then there would be no doubt Sasuke was going to be the next Madara).

Lol !!! So true. All the new character designs look really weird to me, but Sasuke is one of the worst.

Thanks for putting up the link. It works and I can finally enjoy your work. Some suggestions though.

1) Divide the work in chapters. Then release them regularly or simultaneously, that is up to you. I think 23k + words in a single chapter would be very intimidating for many. I would recommend regularly releasing chapters so that users have time to come to grips with what they read and to leave their thoughts on it.

2) Give the story character filters. As it is, many people who search fiction through character filters would be unable to find this. I would recommend using Naruto and Sakura in a pairing when using the filters. That would ensure maximum exposure to the most relevant audience.

3) A summary that is more accurate and tells what the story is about would be more appropriate I think.

Cheers.

You forget to put any links . . . 

After by JulianAR https://www.fanficti...0820437/1/After

Goodbye Days by HaveManners https://www.fanficti.../1/Goodbye-Days

both are POST EPILOGUE but have very interesting twists.

Alternate endings:

Say you'll haunt me https://www.fanficti...You-ll-Haunt-Me

Hand in hand https://www.fanficti.../1/Hand-in-Hand

Finally https://www.fanficti...07569/1/Finally

It is what it is https://www.fanficti...t-Is-What-It-Is

What should have been, but couldn't be https://www.fanficti...but-Couldn-t-Be

Amas, Amas, Amant https://www.fanficti.../amo-amas-amant

996 007 https://www.fanficti...31248/1/996-007

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