I recently have been trying to get reacquainted with my pencil, and paper.
Figured I would try to learn to draw, any tips? I am more than open to anything constructive.
http://img10.imagesh...ewthisshit.jpg/This is an older picture, I really never got around to fixing the eyebrows, or the lining. >.>
http://img34.imagesh.../photo0018m.jpgAhhh the more i look at the second one, the more I notice smaller problems Q.Q
I usually just try to use a picture as an example, since its hard for me to just free draw.. if that makes sense o.o
Well I'm certainly not the best drawer but people tend to say I'm a critic in every aspect of the word. So I'm going to try my best beeing constructive.
I suppose that the first picture is Naruto when he failed to recover Sasuke?
I don't think that his hair grows al the way over his neck and that his whiskers are a bit longer.
The eyebrows look pretty good actually
In the second one I think you've forgotten the kanine-teeth (can't really tell by the quality of the scan, it's a little to dark)
And perhaps in both pictures (more the 2nd than the 1st though) flatten naruto's face a little more. (make it less heigh, if I would need to describe the actual form of his face (if I look at manga):
if you make a rectangle out of it, it would have about the same relationships height/width as the front end of a shoe box (with his hair added on top) with the lid pointing up.
just to make sure: I'm not character bashing on Naruto. Just trying to describe the form of his face. (I think the word is abstract not sure though, I'm dutch
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hope you got something out of my rambling,
keep up the good work and good luck with future drawings
Edited by Torxe, 10 February 2011 - 12:17 PM.
