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Soflateam

Member Since 06 Mar 2008
Offline Last Active Nov 06 2014 10:19 PM

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My First Storything

06 May 2008 - 06:30 AM

Why hello thar!

*Points to name at the top left corner of this post*

As you can see, my name is Soflateam. I've been lurking these boards for quite a while now, and only posted a couple of things. *Looks down and shuffles feet* I am ashamed of myself.

*Looks back towards the growing crowd of Heaven & Earther's and smiles* biggrin.gif

Anyways, I would like your opinions on this new story of mine! The first piece of creative writing I have ever written!

*Points to linky*

Legends in the Making

It's a NaruSaku romance/adventure story containing the following:
1. Hopefully cute and fluffy NaruSaku scenes (I'm trying!)
2. Eventual butt-kickin' of all of their enemies
3. Possible Ino involvement!
4. Some comedy? (I try to be a funny guy, but I don't always succeed)

It's an AU, so it's not all exactly canon, but don't ya worry! Hopefully I made it interesting enough to not need the canon influence! :thumbs:

I'd most definitely appreciate it if you could take a minute and review if you were to read it. I'd love any tips and constructive criticisms I can get in order to improve on my writing.

*Looks around the crowd for a moment*

Umm, have any of you seen my sanity? I heard we were supposed to leave it at the door, but when I did, the door went poof! and disappeared. Probably a way of trapping us here, but that doesn't matter, this place is awesome! mwahaha.gif

*Walks over Kishi's house and directs him to the forums, and then points him to the smiley below*

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See Kishi?! That is what should be going on in the manga right now!

(Err, yeah. I've had quite a bit of caffeine just now. Was trying to stay awake long enough to finish chapter 5 of my story.)