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Well, I sat down and wrote this out of nowhere today. I guess I've just been playing too much Knights of the Old Republic lately. But if somebody would sit down and read/critique this, that would be awesome. The story LSF/GSF (Lightside Female/ Greyside Female) Revan, with flashbacks to her time as a Sith, LSF/GSF Exile. I don't even know if there are going to BE pairings yet, much less what they'll be if I have them.
shiroihato
Member Since 07 Jun 2007Offline Last Active Jan 08 2009 05:46 AM
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Thin Stretched Bonds
29 September 2007 - 08:31 PM
Hey, well, for those of you reading The Kekkei Genkai Curse, I finally updated. If you read the a/n, you understand why it took me so long. But anways, I wrote a poem (or at least, that's what I'm calling it) in my "spare time" (a.ka. 4th period math thru Seventh Period Study Hall 
). Light NaruSaku, but it mostly focuses on Team Seven Friendship. It's not the best thing I've ever done, and ff.net's dumb formatting wouldn't let me seperate each stanza, despite the fact I've done it a million times. Still, I'd like it if some on could give me a little advice on how to improve the quality or just plain comment. Here's the link:
http://www.fanfictio...Stretched_Bonds
). Light NaruSaku, but it mostly focuses on Team Seven Friendship. It's not the best thing I've ever done, and ff.net's dumb formatting wouldn't let me seperate each stanza, despite the fact I've done it a million times. Still, I'd like it if some on could give me a little advice on how to improve the quality or just plain comment. Here's the link:http://www.fanfictio...Stretched_Bonds
