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[Shouri no Hana]

Well the Rockman crossover was to be different from most, only Subaru and Netto hold the full cross, but as soon as the chuunin exams is done they are pretty much out of the picture unless demanded.

well I am pretty consistant with the no suffix and I do mention it when I add it, but I can go over older chapters and fix them if you wish.

For the cornyness, well there are the moments such was Bring Your Own Banana and newspapering the Hokage's office, but the most of it will remain in the drabbles.

The drabble plans:

The One with the Yellow Hair
The One with the Grey Goose
The One with the ..........................no idea..........you guys can give them!

[karasu]

The No suffix is fine as you said it's a sign of familiarity and I only mentioned the consistency cuz many other authors make that mistake writing one thing then changing it later. I think I even saw a sakura-kun once.....coulda sworn -kun was for males usually and -chan was for females and younger people.

So far you done a good story with consistency and not over doing things. Seriousness,drama, even some originality to it. Now just waiting for the continuation after the drabbles though the drabbles are cute as well. I wanna know the secret she told him! let alone the finish to his "do" question.

Looking forward to the next one!

[Shouri no Hana]

XD well most of this was written on the go, but I'm changing Sai to Kiba, because Sai has not shown up in the actual fic yet, I don't want to hold off hooking them up any longer.

So instead of this drabble occuring after the intro to Sai, it take place before the current arc. kay?

[karasu]

Won't see me complaining about when you hook them up it is your story. I'm just here to see what happens and be a pest while doing that. :thumbs: Lucky you huh? But otherwise it's a decent story looking forward to the next evolutions of your tale. Though I must admit I'm like a kid on christmas I hate waiting for the next chapters of the stories I am reading. Patience wasn't my virtue I guess. I'll be waiting. :devil:

[Shouri no Hana]

Status update:

Chapter 11: done....just not posted

Chapter 12: 1/3 done

Drabbles: None written, ideas a floatin'

[Shouri no Hana]

Because no one cares: Status Update

Chapter 11: Confession

Chapter 12: Sitting at 10 pages, trying to figure out how to close it, (the chapter, not story)

The One with the Grey Goose: I'm really screwed eh?

The One with the Year of the Ino: >.> disscussing this one with a friend

[Shouri no Hana]

I want to cry.....

Chapter Twelve: Raw Breath of Danger

read the author notes if thou wish to.

[Kazama-san]

that chapter was great shouri i cant wait for ur next chapter...BTW this is on my favs XD

[Shouri no Hana]

Thank You for your words of support, however with my schedule sitting the way it is, I will not be able to start writing the next chapter until after Febuary 6th at the earilest, too many test and essays that I've been holding off.

However, I'll try to squeeze the odd drabble to hold you down, I'm just editing the lastest on.

[Kazama-san]

take as long as u want the longer you take the better the chapter will be.

[Shouri no Hana]

New drabble uploaded, probably the only thing I'll ever get a beta for. XD

The One with the Grey Goose

Uhh...yea...

[Shouri no Hana]

*Goes and hides in the corner*

Chapter Thirteen: Innoccent Flower

The One with the Orange Jacket

[Shouri no Hana]

Simply because Hurricane Chronicles is released. I bet you can't find any chapter as realistic as this one.

Chapter Fourteen: Crashing Ino's

No idea how to start 15, I think...I've actually hit a block...

XD

[Shouri no Hana]

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Chapter Fifteen: Chuunin Exams...Begin!

A poll was started in Chapter 14, however I forgot to add it into Chapter 15....oh well it's too earily into the fic anyway for the sequel direction to be decided but...to hell with it

Poll status:

A) Unkown Anime/Game Crossover - 0

B) Slight Time Skip - 0

C) No Sequel - 0

D) Time Travel - 1

[Shouri no Hana]

well I'm in the right mind to stop posting updates for this story...zero response...well...new Story Linked to the series

The One with the Nightmare (On going link Fic with friend)

Chapter One: Sakura; Awakening
Chapter Two: Ino; Annoyance

Chapter Sixteen; Sakura Fubuki, should be out soon, I'm trying out a new speech style with Naruto and also...I have no idea what to do with Sakura's history...once you read the chapter you'll understand...

[jaquesparblue]

All fine and dandy...

But, no offense, please cut down on Naruto saying 'dattebayo'. It's really _really_ annoying.