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#21 Gena kumo

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Posted 29 November 2008 - 03:48 AM

like onionhead said, ADORABLE PB! happy.gif
(and somehow,it reminds me of a certain H&Eers icon...
Hmm...XD)

Aw, just teasing ya. :3 The corny phrase works well enough.
(plus, if Sakura-chan liked it, then ANY woman should...right? ;D)

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Posted 09 December 2008 - 05:02 AM

QUOTE (Gena kumo @ Nov 29 2008, 02:48 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
like onionhead said, ADORABLE PB! happy.gif
(and somehow,it reminds me of a certain H&Eers icon...
Hmm...XD)

Aw, just teasing ya. :3 The corny phrase works well enough.
(plus, if Sakura-chan liked it, then ANY woman should...right? ;D)

Oh? Who's this H&Eer? Very curious happy.gif I might have glimpsed their icon somewhere and had it shoved in the back of my mind along with my mum's annoying teachings, so this person may have had a hand in inspiring that drabble. wow.png

I did this one in ten minutes last night or something. It's the shortest drabble I've done (so basically the others don't really qualify as drabbles since I can't squish them under 1K smile.gif) at just under 400 words. Got the idea from my longer oneshot, Ice Cream, but it's not really related.

Ice Cream

He liked watching her in the kitchen. He liked her in an apron, too. She sort of glided fluidly from the cupboard to the sink to the counter. Distracting her, she had warned once, was forbidden, especially when she was cooking. He’d learned the first time. The walls still didn’t look quite the same shade of colour they had started out. No, he really had learned. This time, he just leaned against the door frame and admired her.

Hips turning this way and that, hair brushing against the small of her back, the small furrow of her brow in concentration… Naruto was enjoying himself.

But of course, all good things come to an end.

She turned, saw him standing there, shook her head with the sort of exp​ression a mother would scold her child with. “Naruto, what are you doing there? Come help me.”

“No distractions, you said,” he pointed out, grinning.

Sakura stuck her tongue out at him. Then she returned her attention back to the bowl of batter in her arms, and stirred with vigour. There were streaks of it on her cheeks, and Naruto was just contemplating their flavour when she said, “Can you pass me the ice cream please, Naruto?”

He froze. Ice cream? Crap.

“Er, I don’t think-”

“It’s in the fridge.”

He walked up to her, twisting his fingers behind his back. That stare, Kami, it made him cower. “Did I tell you that I, uh, ate it?”

Eyes narrowed. Dangerously. “When?”

“When you were in the shower.” Whimpering now. Gulping. She was… oh kitten, she was putting down the bowl… “Ah, Sakura!” Naruto stammered, waving his hands in front of him. “I was hungry and I just, I just thought-” She grabbed him by the collar. “Please don’t ki-”

Yanked him down. And punished him.

They didn’t close their eyes. Not this time. Gazed into each other’s. Naruto saw something smouldering in Sakura’s.

Maybe he should get himself in trouble with her more often.

Then they pulled away. Sakura, breathing heavily, smiled mischievously as she ran her tongue along her lips. “Mm… vanilla, thought so.”

Naruto stared blankly at her. “Sa… Sakura?”

She stroked a finger along his jawline. The unmade cake was forgotten.

“I’ll go buy some more tomorrow.”

And I'm running out of ideas, being all blank and stuff. Help me here, people. Request? Ideas? Any at all? arg.gif

Edited by peanutbutter126, 09 December 2008 - 05:28 AM.


#23 Onionhead Attacks

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Posted 09 December 2008 - 06:43 AM

I'm surprised you got another drabble out and it's not a "did I tell you" one either! Not that I'm complaining... XD

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Posted 09 December 2008 - 06:47 AM

QUOTE (Onionhead Attacks @ Dec 9 2008, 05:43 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I'm surprised you got another drabble out and it's not a "did I tell you" one either! Not that I'm complaining... XD

I just write things at funny intervals. Still struggling with the next chapter of another fic. Oh, and there is a 'did I tell you' in there somewhere. It's just ninja-ing. 8DD

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Posted 09 December 2008 - 07:42 AM

QUOTE (peanutbutter126 @ Dec 8 2008, 10:47 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I just write things at funny intervals. Still struggling with the next chapter of another fic. Oh, and there is a 'did I tell you' in there somewhere. It's just ninja-ing. 8DD


Ah... I see it now! It's not prominent, so yea... it was "ninja-ing" !! XD

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Posted 11 December 2008 - 11:51 AM

Oh man, I just had an idea for a request but I forgot.

-w-

Will get back to ya later with that.

But, awesome job so far PB <3 I liked I ce Cream. ^~^

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Posted 11 December 2008 - 10:13 PM

Ooooh, it's Dei-Dei! th_glomp.gif Feels like ages since I last 'seen' you.

lol, don't worry, just take your time... REMEMBER!!!!! biggrin.gif

Sank you :33

Yummy yummy ice cream~ laugh.gif




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