Quality I can't actually compare, yours follow more or less the original story but with a few major changes to the plot.
while the others I read where entirely fiction (forgive me for not crediting the author atm I will look him/her up this evening and edit):
fly me to the moon for example.
It had me clustered on the text like I was actually reading a book.
If I really needed to compare it's like (on lvl of story) reading the manga and if I read yours it was like watching the anime
(although with drastic changes and without the crappy animation from time to time or hinata worship and all those flaws of the anime),
you could more or less guess the development of the story, you did surprise me however when you let Shikamaru devise a plan to kill Sasuke WITH the aid of Naruto. But that was about the only surprise the story brought for me thus far.
while those other fanfics are like a totally new story kind of like the sensation of a new chapter you just read as fast as u can to find out what happens in the story.
So do your best to keep me reading your story... (not going to be that hard though really looking forward to chapter 4).