Konoha'sCrimsonFox

 

Okay, guys here it is a brand new page for all of us to enjoy and I think this is another good page.
 

I mean that look Sakura is giving Naruto right now

 
First of all, its good that this site never got shutdown because it was down during the cloudware purge of manga websites. 
 
Pros: I find this page reminds of the very first arc of Part the Sunakagure Arc where Sakura healed Gaara's brother. That Arc was the most highlighted of Sakura's character because Kishi during that time really portray her to be 100% FML. Her medic and combat skills were at the peak just before Kishi gave into popularity polls (one of the very first Part 2 interviews he states that Sakura was not popular).
 
Overall, the NaruSaku scene was very cute. this Sakura has not only grown but accepted her feelings towards Naruto. In the past as her kid or teenage self, she would get annoyed and in most cases SP would turn her into a Tsundere and hit Naruto (I admit. It was one of the few things I ever like about SP writing Sakura's character lol). Or maybe it's because Naruto's facial expression and sleep talking did not display any perverted thought or him being in heat 
 
Cons: This has never bothered me in the past because I know Tokai is a one-man job. He does not have a crew like a professional mangaka would have at his/hers side.
 
And on top of that, Chinese Wuxia light novels adapted to manhua (Chinese comics) commonly has a very fast pacing and normally skips a lot of detail from the novel itself. For an example take a 5000 chapter LN. It's manhua counter part can  can cover over a 100 novel chapter within 10 comic chapters of illustration. Most cases, readers that have not read the original would get very confused because the story is jumping from one place to another. It just personal preference that I don't mind the pacing
 
But I feel like Tokai should not have skipped the NaruSaku scene. The con of this page is how did Shika and Sai got here? If I remember correctly, Naruto and Sakura got spit up from them at the bonefire/camp and went after Hinata. If I recalled correctly, they were no where near NaruSaku pair (the fight with Toneri), especially, when they fell into the crater which is now the cave. This current page feels like Tokai skipped an entire chapter on NaruSaku scene and Shika/Sai discovering them in the crater.
 
Overall, it presumably to say that the NaruSaku scene that that was high anticipated was off screen. Or maybe Shika and Sai was right behind them all this time and we have yet to have the NaruSaku scene where in the original was the NaruSaku scene of separation. At this point I'm completely lost at the current pacing of the story 

Early Christmas present:
 

 
The moon fell apart. Going by the title, I doesn't seem like the NS scene will be dragged out in the long duration. So I now don't expect to see any drama build up. Now the question will we experienced a kissing scene being attempted by NaruSaku 
 

she was there during that kitten ass NH wedding. People try to use her as a reason as to why NH is actually legitimate basically saying, she wasnt such a NS parallel after all. And she supports NH. Just because she looked like a mind controlled drone in the movie.

 
Lol. 

Marry Christmas to you all 

Who's Eddie Ferguson?

 
My web novel male protagonist. And an American like Naruto Uzumaki. Original art by Pume.
 

Happy birthday Naruto Uzumaki and Eddie Ferguson 

I can easily picture the last panel (blackout) of how they will look like in bed  Sakura has been the one to hug him lately. My wager is that she will initiate the first kiss scene just like back in chapter 3 the bench scene     

Okay every here it is a brand new page and I think that as NS fans and Naruto fans we are all going to love this page I know I did.
 

 
This is really the first true hug since the end of the Pain Arc (not counting the failed-confession). Good way to kick-off the NaruSaku fest no matter the result being either romantic or a fall out drama.

Now, with this upcoming pages, it will be a perfect opportunity to stick it to Sakura anti-fanbase about her being totally "useless" by having her to cushion the fall like summoning Katsuyuu (Tsunade's summoning slug) or use the Strength of 100 Seal to decrease the acceleration of their descent, besides the healing scene.

There's a lot of people out there who still like Sakura. I know I still do, I just HATE what she's become due to bad writing and the bad ending.

 
She really got hated by most of the creators (not Kishi) is because Kishi made Sakura the female lead in part 2. SP along with most of Kishi's assistants did not like that because they invested a lot on money in the post part 1 filler arcs of making Naruto and Hinata interact with one another off the manga. Sakura's role as the female lead was diminished when Kishi fell victim to lies that Sakura was not popular after the Sasori Arc. Sakura was  still the female lead at that time and was pushed to a more supportive role? Why.? Kishi's first editor also claimed that they focus and build on Sasuke's character to bring in more fans. 
 
Her character was then pushed to the sidelines for business and profits. Not for the plot. As I mentioned before several years ago, the reason why they had Kishi down played Sakura's character was to prevent her from having significant impact on the manga and limit her interactions with Naruto. Her character growth equals to NaruSaku happening and they could not allow.
 
And it was also said that the heroine change was another business decision for the New Project Era called The Burrito the next generation.

I mean, why would a man want to write about his wife ending up with another man? That's basically what he did when he wrote Sakura-Chan ending up with Sasuke over Naruto. And we have to ask ourselves, how can they just gloss over the bench scene like it wasn't really Naruto who stole her heart in chapter 3. That tells us what we need to know.

 
The worse thing about is that the other man happens to be his twin brother    Kishi pointed out couple of times that Sasuke was like his brother. That's why there was a lot of narusasu bromance.

@Chatte It's been five years since I've seen you posted here. How have you been 

Ah yes, the garbage fest of hypocrisy, and killing of NaruSaku not only as a ship even but for anyone that bothers to pay attention to the series, the obliteration of their friendship and the notion THAT THEY WERE EVER FRIENDS. That scene makes it sound like that Nardo and Sakura never cared about each other as individuals,  they just stuck together for their mutual Sasukegasms. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ Hopefully this fanfic can correct this miscourse, but from what I see, that is not gonna be a problem:smile:

 
My concern for this scene is that Tokai will skip Naruto's heart demon. It is a its a Chinese wuxia reference when one's heart is filled with negative emotions (which is is seen in many Chinese cultivation novels). Naruto has been traumatized since childhood from Sakura's infatuation over Sasuke. From the hospital scene in part 1 to chapter 693.
 
He needs vent out these negative emotion otherwise its going to be a repeat. He's going to be the same way to Sakura just as he's done in the canon to Hinata... drink his life away and neglect his NS child or children.
 
Naruto had experienced Sakura's feelings in the Genjutsu. although, he will not deny Sakura's feeling, that heart demon will devour his sanity because he will be questioning himself "what if Sasuke and Sakura become close". Because there will be times when Sakura and Sasuke will be alone as friends or part of a two man cell team when Naruto becomes Hokage and marries Sakura. 
 
This will be the perfect scene for Naruto to vanquish the heart demon and just vent his frustrations. It should be something like the canon version, but different and more logical approach. I'm sure Naruto is going to repeat his phrase "I hate when people lie to themselves". Of course it should set off a chain reaction for Sakura to get angry, but she knows Naruto had suffered greatly from her childhood crush.
 
That's more than enough to break her heart and make her cry. She might or might not retort back at her second failed confession before leaving Naruto alone. Naruto on the other hand, noticed that he broke Sakura's heart. Going by the canon, the reason why never confessed to Sakura because he wanted to make Sakura happy because her feelings towards Sasuke and what he said to sai and what was also said in that chapter 693. 
 
Guilt is the first step of vanquishing the demon heart and make Naruto trust her more. And off course the usual patch up romance scene at the conclusion. That's how i would have write it if i was the author 

Well up next is her healing him and having that speech. If it doesn't happen now it won't happen at all.

 
So much Tokai can do he can be more like Mashima and ad in so ecchie scene to spice things up. Visiting the past NS comic relieve scene such as Naruto wanting to take a leak in the woods but Sakura stops him. She blushes when Naruto told her that. A completely different scenario than part 1 Sakura where she obviously want nothing to do with Naruto physically. 
 
Tokai can use this scene some where in the cave after Naruto wakes up from healing and needs to to the bathroom and Sakura catches him unzipping his pants 
Another alternative is that Sakura finds a hot spring and decides to wash off and Naruto accidentally discovers her bathing upon waking up and roams the cave. This could easily set up Naruto to give Sakura an second impression from the opening Part 2 where Sakura asked him that if she looked "more womanly" when he sees her in the nude   . These tropes usually is followed up by a tsundere beat down. Overall, NS pairing needs some RomCom because there is too much drama in the canon.
 
I don't expected to see a full on nude if this scene were to take place because the private parts will usually be clouded out which is normal censorship in Shonen manga.

Well, the Doujin don't called it "The Last" for nothing. There are pros and cons. The usual cons are mostly from the original.