Excellent start, firegirl. You've made an interesting plot and a round set of characters that are very fun to read about. I probably like Ichigo, Minato and Obito the most right now. I like how you made Sakura still play an integral part in a second generation fic, so many writers seem to dial down the role of the mothers and focus on the fathers in these types of fics, so I'm thankful for that. I have to say, I like the relationship between Obito and Ichigo the best right now, they have a deeper connection, imho. I await your next update.
Find content
Female
