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Born from a NaruSaku Lemon

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In Topic: Wouldn't Warnings be nice?

24 June 2010 - 06:41 PM

Alright, so this time I doubt there is a mistake with this story.

Oh Baby! by FreeFalling456

The story once again has good grammar, and the plot seems thought out. Betrayal isn't as obvious in this story but
It's still there --Click here to view--
Sakura is pregnant and doesn't know who the father is since she's been sleeping with three different guys at the same time. She's taken Naruto for granted in a sense and now turns to him not knowing what to do. he's hurt but doesn't show it too much.


The story might be good for those that can look past this but I'm one whose put off by this sort of thing. Active intimacy is one thing, as is pregnancy, but making the character be with three people at once and then turn to Naruto in the end is something completely different.

In Topic: Wouldn't Warnings be nice?

20 June 2010 - 09:39 PM

QUOTE (Gravenimage @ Jun 20 2010, 03:48 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
So the story is good again? if it is then I would like to read it.

i don't know. so far it seems that it was all a misunderstanding. if u want to read a drama story then that story seems to deliver. i'm still gonna tread lightly with the fic though. but it doesn't seem so bad anymore.

In Topic: Wouldn't Warnings be nice?

20 June 2010 - 05:34 PM

Well, don't I feel dumb.

Turns out that Seeking freedom wasn't so bad. In the newest chapter, it was revealed that nothing really happened. I

guess I should have waited before posting this, seeing as how the story had just started. Though this is the first time I've seen this happen, and the author had made the previous chapters in a way that everyone who knew about it assumed it had really happened.

In Topic: do you keep your identity as a fanfiction author a secret in real life?

18 June 2010 - 11:13 AM

I usually don't bother to tell people about my stories unless they somehow bring them up. I'm not embarrassed or anything it's just that my friends don't really read these types of things. I'd say only about 3% of my friends know I write.

In Topic: Looking for quality NaruSaku Stories

18 June 2010 - 11:08 AM

http://www.fanfictio...NaruSaku/49302/

that's my list of narusaku stories, though it hasn't been updated with any recent stories which i really should do.
  1. Heaven & Earth
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