Very nice! I have tried many a times to draw this good during english class... and have yet to succeed. A combination of lack of time and lack of ability to draw faces. I can make eyes, but not faces.
I must say... this story is amazing. I have never played WoW or any Warcraft game in general (was more a Starcraft and Diablo person myself) but the author has a great way of letting those unfamiliar with the game be able to connect to this story.
And I promised myself I wouldn't get addicted to a MMO until I start college next year but damn... an extremely well written story such as this is making that promise hard to keep with talk of races and classes and flashy spells and epic battles... gah... why must MMOs be so good yet so evil?
Anyways, can't wait for next chapter. Interested to see how he follows up such an amazing battle.