Samsu

Hi there. Just thought I would post my story up here, becuase, well this is a NarutoxSakura board. If you dont want it posted up here then ill take it down...if i can, Argh so nervous.
Its the first part of a two part one shot.....if that makes sense. Please feel free to leave feedback if you wish, i read through and spell checked but again there could be mistakes in there so i apologize,
I hope that you enjoy reading it.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3248435/1/


P.s : Seriously, best board ever.

This is only my second post so I am a little scared but anyway, Hi, more than glad that I found this fan board.

I have to agree with most of the points others have made in this, especially self insertion and authors notes inserted into the actual story, they break the natural flow of the story.
I once came across what was promising to be a good story which had this happen continuously over the two chapters I read, but I had to stop after I reached one that was five lines of text and in bold, and to due to the fact I woke up my flat mate by releasing a three worded outburst at my screen. Authors notes have their place at the beginning an ending of a chapter, no acceptations, well that’s the rule I follow when writing anyway.
I normally wince when I come across an OC, I prefer the author to stay within the realms of the universe set down by the original author, but that said if the character is developed enough I am normally happy.
One thing that is not so much a hate, but that I find a shame, is when the author goes into too much detail when explaining what is happening, or more so what has happened, I get bored. Argh I’ll try and explain.
I like to have certain things only partially explained so that I can have my own thoughts and musings on how the event could have happened, . This is probably because I enjoy stories told from the perspective of no more than two people and thus from reading through their experiences any mystery to that character is a mystery to me as is any revelation to them is a revelation to me also. When you understand what going on and a character doesn’t I find myself thinking,
“Come on, figure it out already.”
OK, now I am rambling, if anyone understands what I am trying to get at and can explain it in an easy to read manner please do.

Cool, found this site today and my story is already up, thanks Josh32 you rule.