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#1 Uzumaki Naruto

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Posted 29 September 2004 - 02:02 AM

Orphan Naruto
Chapter 1: Death and the future.
By: Uzumaki Naruto
I would like to thank sharingank for the help Ash-chan gave me. Thank you!

A woman with beautiful blond hair and blue eyes was being rushed into the hospital. She was young and still a young teenager and she was pregnant. She could be heard screeching in pain all through the hospital as they rushed her to the right room so they could help her give birth. Things had turned to the worse while she was giving birth, she came in late and the baby was ready to leave her womb. The doctors had no time to examine her as the mother began pushing the baby out. As the baby was coming the doctor became shocked.
?It?s a breech birth!? He yelled out as the mother was dieing and the baby was being born. The doctors and nurses rushed and did their best to try to keep the mother alive while the baby was being born.

In the end a beautiful baby was born but the mother had died. There had seemed to be no father to the mother?s child and her parents were not present. The hospital contacted the parents about their grandchild and daughters death. They quickly rushed to the hospital with out concentrating on the road, they only cared about getting to the hospital as quickly as possible, but because of their lack of patience, they were put into a fatal car accident while heading up a hill. They were going 70mph up the hill and had barely anyway to see the drunk driver on the wrong side of the road. In the end the drunk driver and the grandparents of the newborn had died. There were no other relations and the hospital knew they could not keep the baby there.

The hospital took care of the baby until they decided to put the baby in an orphanage. The baby was sent to a new orphanage in the town of Konoha. The baby?s mother had named him before her death. With her last ounce of breath she had named him ?Naruto.? He was also given her last name ?Uzumaki.? The baby was the first orphan to enter the orphanage and was raised there.

Slowly more children came to the orphanage as Naruto remained only as a baby. Most of them were young boys and girls who were around five to eight years old. They hated Naruto because time to time he would cry and it annoyed them. Soon they made fun of Naruto and called him a demon fox that was not born like a normal kid. As more kids came to the orphanage they began to follow the older kids in making fun of Naruto even as Naruto grew older, they would stay away from him calling him a monster with no parents from the beginning. As the kids taught other kids to hate Naruto, he became more lonely had no one to play with.

Naruto grew older and the orphanage adults began teaching the children to educate them for their future. During this time Naruto was picked on even more for not being the smartest in the class. Naruto then began making pranks just to gain a little attention from everyone and it only worked a little but he always ended up in trouble by the teacher. As time passed Iruka who was once an orphan at a different orphanage long ago had watched Naruto and became closer to him. He became Naruto?s first friend.

Two Years later and Naruto and the cast are five.

Sakura cried as she stood in front of her father?s grave. Her mother was just as worse. Tears overflowed her eyes as she looked at her father?s grave. Her mother tried did her best to stop her tears but they kept flowing, smoothly sliding down her face. The water crystals fell to the ground causing little splashes but Sakura and her mother could not help it. Sakura stopped sniffing and kept her head down. Her emerald green eyes looked sad and broken. She watched as her mother tears fell from her face.
?Mommy, why did daddy have to go?? Sakura asked as she felt more tears coming to her eyes. Her mother began to control her emotions as she looked into Sakura?s eyes and made a soft smile to her.
?Your daddy just had to go Sakura.? Her mother said and they both stood in front of the grave a bit longer before they left.

When Sakura went back to school she had her head down looking at her feet as she walked. People had always made fun of her big forehead and she was too depressed to take more insults about her forehead. She heard the kids whisper and make fun of her and she did her best to ignore all of it. The pain in her chest was to much, all Sakura waned was to be left alone.

?Hey Sakura!? A girl called out and Sakura slowly began to raise her head and tried to hold her tears in, she was near the edge of breaking down. The girl ran towards her and smiled.
?You should really try to move your hair out of your face.? The girl said with a smile. Sakura just gave her a blank look and stared into her blue eyes and taking some notice to her blond hair. The girl just sighed and took a ribbon out and put her hands toward Sakura. Sakura felt nervous and scared as the strange girl began playing with her hair. Sakura felt the girl?s hands slowly move away from her hair and she looked up at her. She looked at the girl smile at her giving a look of approval.
?There, you shouldn?t let your hair cover your forehead, it just makes people want to make fun of you more and make it seem as your forehead is bigger.? The girl said and Sakura gave her a wide smile.
?Thank you um??? Sakura said and Ino just smiled and replied,
?My name is Ino.? and Sakura made her first friend.
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One year later and the cast are six. Itachi is twelve.

Sasuke and Itachi lived happily with their parents until they were killed. The murderer was never caught and attempted to kidnap Itachi and Sasuke but ran away instead because Itachi was able to call the police on time. The man failed in taking Itachi and Sasuke but had escaped the police. Itachi promised himself to take care of Sasuke and some day kill that man one day. Sasuke was in shock and would only stay near his brother.

They were both put into a new orphanage. Itachi requested to be able to continue public school with his brother and the orphanage let them continue their education at the public school. Sasuke and Itachi had inherited all the money from their parent?s life insurance and the money they had left for them in their will. They were a rich family and well known. Sasuke and Itachi were only at the orphanage in the afternoon and would not be seen in the mornings unless it was on a weekend or the school had a break.

?Brother, why does everyone stay away from that kid?? Sasuke asked Itachi as they sat down on the coach talking and watching the other kids play. Itachi looked at the person Sasuke was talking about and saw Naruto.
?They say he was born with no parents and is a fox demon. That?s not true though. They only hate him because the older kids did not like him because he would cry all night, and then when he got older, he seemed weird to everyone, but the case is, he is just different, so they always make fun of him. His name is Uzumaki Naruto.? Itachi looked at Naruto sadly.
Sasuke left his seat and went towards to Naruto. He was stopped by one of the kids before he reached him.
?Hey kid what are you doing?? A kid asked. Sasuke stared at him and back at Naruto.
?I am going to talk to Naruto.? He said and the kid just glared.
?Don?t waste your time, the kid is a jerk, he always plays pranks and makes everyone mad. He is the dumbest kid you can meet here.? The kid said as he glared at Naruto. Sasuke began to glare at Naruto too, he hated jerks and pranksters, and they annoyed him. Itachi knew this and looked sadly at Sasuke.

Sasuke watched Naruto play with blocks and make little jokes and began playing a game only for little kids with many dreams. It sickened Sasuke to the very end to see such a stupid daydreamer playing childish games, but the truth is, Naruto and him were still children and Sasuke watched as people just walked past Naruto kicking his blocks and insulting him. Some would actually hit Naruto.

?Stop it!? Naruto yelled as he glared at all of them. They all looked into Naruto?s eyes hating and despising the look he gave them. Sasuke just glared and walked away from Naruto. He didn?t care about Naruto anymore. Itachi disappeared from the scene as Sasuke went back and he began to look for his older brother.

Itachi walked disappointed and further watched Naruto play with his blocks. Itachi looked sadly at the blond and walked towards Iruka to talk to him.
Iruka?s office

?What brings you here Itachi.? Iruka said.
?Iruka-sensei, I was wondering if Naruto could join me and Sasuke to a normal school.? Itachi asked. Iruka jumped in surprise from this.
?What?? Iruka asked and Itachi sighed and replied,
?I want Naruto to join me and Sasuke in normal school.? Itachi said. Iruka sighed and looked sadly at Itachi,
?Why do you want Naruto to join a normal school?? Iruka asked and Itachi looked carefully into Iruka?s eyes.
?Maybe he can make friends there and make some friends. The kids here pick on him, and I was hoping maybe he would like going to a normal school.? Itachi thought. Iruka sighed and smiled.
?I like the idea, ok Itachi, but can I trust you to watch over him also?? Iruka smiled. Itachi nodded his head and Iruka looked at him proudly.
?Ok, this week I will go to your school to talk about registering Naruto, I will send him with you and Sasuke next week to begin, is that all right?? Iruka said and Itachi nodded happily and left Iruka?s office.

Iruka walked up to Naruto and asked him to come to his office, Naruto nodded his head and walked away from his blocks and followed Iruka.
?Yes Iruka-sensei?? Naruto asked and Iruka looked at Naruto seriously.
?How would you like to go to a normal school Naruto?? Iruka asked. Naruto jumped from his seat and looked into Iruka?s eyes.
?I want to go!? Naruto answered happily with a wild grin. The microwave dinged and Iruka made Naruto sit as he went to bring some ramen. Naruto jumped with excitement as he saw the beautiful cups of ramen that Iruka brought. He ate his ramen fast as Iruka slowly ate his.
?Next week you begin going to a normal school.? Iruka said and Naruto smiled happily. He couldn?t wait, to go. He knew no one would know him or make fun of him when he goes.

#2 Smiter

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Posted 29 September 2004 - 09:16 AM

Nice start. happy.gif This is a pretty interesting AU so far!

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Posted 29 September 2004 - 01:02 PM

OOOO!!! I'm looking forward to seeing more of this, uzumaki!! happy.gif

(and you're welcome)

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#4 Uzumaki Naruto

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Posted 29 September 2004 - 05:34 PM

Gladly accepts hug from Ash =)



EDIT: I fixed chapter 1 for the better! Chapter 2 will come soon hopefully!




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