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#1 Greed-Sama

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Posted 20 February 2011 - 05:13 AM

So have careful planning and deliberation, and some persuasion to write a fanfic with an OC (There was a reason I needed the persuasion), I decided to take up the reigns on the challenge.

I have created a series that based around an OC who is a conduit for the storyteller.

A couple of notes: He is not a Mary Sue. He is human just as much as everyone else, and will have the same issues that the other characters have.
That being said. He is an intricately woven into the plot. He is important, but he is not the main character. He is a plot device if anything.

The story will start in the Digital Universe. (Digimon), then proceed to some others like Naruto, Mass Effect, Halo, and Avatar: The Last Airbender. In some stories he will inserted into canon and others will be inserted after canon. I do want him to have a romance with "one" --- I will repeat it "ONE" character from "ONE" of these universes. I think I have an idea who, but that's still up in the air.

Note: He will not touch the pairings that I feel should be left alone (i.e.) NaruSaku.

So I would like to see what you guys think. For some this might be atrocious, but for others you might like the idea of me weaving things.

Also note: Things don't always end up happy for everyone and for some of these universes I have tragic consequences in mind to further build this original character.

So without further ado: I present The Dimesional Paths: Digital Problems
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“Dear, I don’t pretend to know it all. Solis is a land of hardship and unfairness,

a land of cruelty and despair, but it is a land that still has many stories to tell.

Promise that whatever happens, you won’t give up.”

~ Queen Laura Sinclair

 


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Posted 22 February 2011 - 09:46 AM

The Theory of Relativity --Click here to view--
Kari and Barrett become closer acquainted and Barrett's first bond is established in the world.

Gennai tells Izzy and Tai the consequences of Barrett's arrival.

Tai is taken to a club?


So Chapter Two has finally been plotted out completely, and the spoilers are up above. Also I've plotted out the basic story line for this story.

Updates: One Digidestined will be eliminated in future chapters. I've decided on the romance character, and it is a Naruto character. I've also plotted out the timeline and which universes will be visited first.

First is Digimon, then Naruto, then Halo, then Avatar: The Last Airbender, and then Mass Effect.

(Of course this is tentative. If you would like me to take Barrett into a universe let me know, and I'll see if I can fit into the story.)

Pairings that'll be showcased: Taiora, NaruSaku (duh), none for Halo (at least none that I'm aware of), for Avatar (this is the arc I've planned the least, and so I'm not sure where Barrett is being inserted. I'm thinking about moving Katara with Zuko even though I don't support the pairing, it works for my story.), and Mass Effect (don't really have any ideas how this will even relate to the story so I might not even touch it)

Feel free to comment on this thread about things you might want to see, people and places I could cameo, and other stuff like that. Oh and reviews are a good thing too. smile.gif
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“Dear, I don’t pretend to know it all. Solis is a land of hardship and unfairness,

a land of cruelty and despair, but it is a land that still has many stories to tell.

Promise that whatever happens, you won’t give up.”

~ Queen Laura Sinclair

 


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Posted 27 February 2011 - 06:15 AM

Have many hours of writing, planning and such.

I present The Dimensional Paths: Digital Problems

Chapter 2: The Theory of Relativity
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“Dear, I don’t pretend to know it all. Solis is a land of hardship and unfairness,

a land of cruelty and despair, but it is a land that still has many stories to tell.

Promise that whatever happens, you won’t give up.”

~ Queen Laura Sinclair

 


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Posted 28 February 2011 - 01:22 PM

Think my question fiths better here:

How many chapters 'till you reach the Naruto part?

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Posted 28 February 2011 - 03:08 PM

QUOTE (Torxe @ Feb 28 2011, 07:22 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Think my question fiths better here:

How many chapters 'till you reach the Naruto part?


I have 13 planned chapters for the first part.
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“Dear, I don’t pretend to know it all. Solis is a land of hardship and unfairness,

a land of cruelty and despair, but it is a land that still has many stories to tell.

Promise that whatever happens, you won’t give up.”

~ Queen Laura Sinclair

 


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Posted 28 February 2011 - 03:20 PM

k thx

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Posted 28 February 2011 - 03:52 PM

QUOTE (Torxe @ Feb 28 2011, 09:20 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
k thx


Well I'm not really sure if that's a good or bad thing, but I hope I answered your question.
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“Dear, I don’t pretend to know it all. Solis is a land of hardship and unfairness,

a land of cruelty and despair, but it is a land that still has many stories to tell.

Promise that whatever happens, you won’t give up.”

~ Queen Laura Sinclair

 


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Posted 28 February 2011 - 04:13 PM

well I thanked you so you can consider that a good thing tongue.gif

about the 13 chapters that's about 2.5/3 months? => I can live with that

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Posted 28 February 2011 - 04:15 PM

QUOTE (Torxe @ Feb 28 2011, 10:13 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
well I thanked you so you can consider that a good thing tongue.gif

about the 13 chapters that's about 2.5/3 months? => I can live with that


So are you skipping part 1?
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“Dear, I don’t pretend to know it all. Solis is a land of hardship and unfairness,

a land of cruelty and despair, but it is a land that still has many stories to tell.

Promise that whatever happens, you won’t give up.”

~ Queen Laura Sinclair

 


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Posted 28 February 2011 - 04:19 PM

yeah I'm not interested in other fanfics.

And tbh I've never been interested in digimon I thought of the whole concept as lame (no offence) from the first episode I ever saw. smthng about a little pet that suddenly grew in a T-rex only to spit some kind of ball and shrink again. WTF? huh.gif

Well, it's a mather of interest I guess.

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Posted 28 February 2011 - 04:23 PM

Chapter 3 spoilers are here --Click here to view--
Barrett and Tai have some bonding time together after Barrett visits the Kamiya residence.

The younger Digidestined learn that the barrier isn't the only problem and that the Digital World's fabric is deteriorating.

Investigating the cause the Digidestined are attacked and one is killed.


So update: I've finally decided on the romance (it is in the Naruto verse). It's set in stone now, and I've planned the entire first arc to almost the finest details.
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“Dear, I don’t pretend to know it all. Solis is a land of hardship and unfairness,

a land of cruelty and despair, but it is a land that still has many stories to tell.

Promise that whatever happens, you won’t give up.”

~ Queen Laura Sinclair

 


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Posted 28 February 2011 - 04:24 PM

QUOTE (Torxe @ Feb 28 2011, 10:19 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
yeah I'm not interested in other fanfics.

And tbh I've never been interested in digimon I thought of the whole concept as lame (no offence) from the first episode I ever saw. smthng about a little pet that suddenly grew in a T-rex only to spit some kind of ball and shrink again. WTF? huh.gif

Well, it's a mather of interest I guess.


Then I highly suggest skipping this. You will be lost.
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“Dear, I don’t pretend to know it all. Solis is a land of hardship and unfairness,

a land of cruelty and despair, but it is a land that still has many stories to tell.

Promise that whatever happens, you won’t give up.”

~ Queen Laura Sinclair

 


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Posted 01 March 2011 - 07:40 AM

ok, sorry I don't share your opinion on digimon...

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Posted 01 March 2011 - 06:39 PM

QUOTE (Torxe @ Mar 1 2011, 01:40 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
ok, sorry I don't share your opinion on digimon...


I honestly don't care. I'm just saying that you will be lost.
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“Dear, I don’t pretend to know it all. Solis is a land of hardship and unfairness,

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Promise that whatever happens, you won’t give up.”

~ Queen Laura Sinclair

 


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Posted 07 March 2011 - 01:26 AM

Chapter 3: Fade Away has been posted.
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“Dear, I don’t pretend to know it all. Solis is a land of hardship and unfairness,

a land of cruelty and despair, but it is a land that still has many stories to tell.

Promise that whatever happens, you won’t give up.”

~ Queen Laura Sinclair

 


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Posted 19 April 2011 - 04:41 AM

Chapter 4:Farewells and Salutations has been updated

along with

Chapter 5: At The Gates
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“Dear, I don’t pretend to know it all. Solis is a land of hardship and unfairness,

a land of cruelty and despair, but it is a land that still has many stories to tell.

Promise that whatever happens, you won’t give up.”

~ Queen Laura Sinclair

 





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