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[DazeDreamer]

Okay to understand anything I'm about to say you have to read my story. Which is here: Their Point of Views Now I'm going to revise my 3rd chapter which is ch. 2 rewritten. Now I have to, once again, revise my 2nd ch. Anyway after that I'm pretty stuck. I dont know exactly how to introduce the KibaHina (or HinaSasu) couple into the whole thing, or how the other characters come in. So please help me out.

[MonkeysTotallyRock]

all right. well, firstly, to make it easier to read, ya might want to put separators... i have bad spelling. anyways, okay. it's good. just go with the flow. it depends on your writing style. i just sit at my computer -- completely randomly -- and just start typing what's in my mind. it's how you feel it and how you want it.

1) kiba and hinata are complete opposites, so they would easily attract. remember, they're on a team, so an easy way would be to say kiba helped hinata when she got hurt or something. but remember, hinata is in love with naruto, so it would be kiba who fell in love first, and as hinata's love for naruto decreased, she would notice kiba more.

2), other things such as social events could help. hinata COMPLETELY embarrasses herself (again, my spelling is terrible) and kiba helps her out, or something like that -- or sasuke, just to get a moment's peace away from sakura who's been bugging him, goes and helps hinata, and they have their first meeting. i dunno, just ideas.

yeah, i'm doing it for true freedom (my fic); i deleted the second chapter and i'm redoing the first. well, hope this helps!

[DazeDreamer]

Yeah it does! Thankies! Anyway since I have writer's block I've been doing fics that I've planned to publish but never got into writing it. Anyway I've deleted ch.2+3 (that was only a revised version). Anyway yeah I've been editing and I've put seperators.

[Shouri no Hana]

no idea how to help you...I'm sitting on the third chapter my my fic myself..(but I'm writting that and making TWO music vids at the same time...along with playing BN 6 CG)

Um...my fic doesn't have a defined plot (yet) but it has an ending idea. (hence the name Broken Soul, the first fic sets it up, the second...why am I telling you this?)

I use music to help inspire me, 'One Winged Angel' from FFVII Advent Childern has been said to be really good for fight scenes (I haven't written one myself yet) and I like to use slow songs just as 'Crystal' by Clair for them fuffly or sappy scenes (haven't written one myself but it gave me ideas...that I forgot...)

Write what you feel is the best...I'm still making Sakura act a little OOC but thankfully I have Naruto to bug the hell out of her...

"Okay, who are you, and what did you do with Sakura-chan!"

I'm lazy ok? It's the easiest way to snap Sakura back into her character!