Alright, I'm still a novice as a writer. So I need some nice people to read and reiw my plot line. every rpg needs a good plotline.
BTW: Think of a nice title for it.
NOTE: In this alternate naruto Universe, Kin Tsuchi and Haku are alive.
Tsuchi has defected from sound, and Haku is in wave assisting Tazuna.
Alrite.......prologue...... Jiraiya and Tsunade in a sake joint. discussing the recent events.
( Note, this is just after Tsunade become the Hokage.)
Jiraiya sits patiently while Tsunade rants about her workload.
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Tsunade: Why did I agree to come with you in the first place? The workload is killing me!
Tsunade: Theres the huge stacks of paperwork....
Tsunade: Theres the hospital work. The Lee kid is nice enough but the Uchiha sits there and wallows in angst, while the pink haired girl sits there and attempts conversation.
Tsunade: And theres the council. They're the worst of the lot. All of them, except the Hyuuga, Inuzaka, Aburame and the Akimachi , wanted to have a hero's festival for Uchiha boy for defeating Shukaku. The Bastards. They think I don't know who defeated the demon.
Jiraiya: Thats the council for you. They want a festival to boost the village's morale, but they refuse to honor the "demon brat"
Tsunade: At least he has earned respect from the clans that count.
Jiraiya: Anyway, what are you going to do about the genin teams? The village sill is'nt in very good shape
Tsunade: Don't worry, I have a mission for them.......
( End Prologue)
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So, The rookies, Naruto, Sakura, sasuke, Kiba, Shino, Hinata, Ino, Choji( Shikamaru is chunin and has other duties), Neji and tenten ( Lee still hospitalised)
with their Jounin senseis head to Wave country, where Tazuna is hard pressed defending his village from armed thugs.
Antagonists.
( Note: Antagonist featured here are a figment of my wild imagination,and are in no way connected to the manga.
01) Gate (Gah-te) With the death of gatoh, Gatoh corp was thrown into arnarchy, but in the end, the remnats of gatoh core have banded under Gate. Gate has set his sights on the strategicly located Wave country, and with Konohagure weakened in the Sand-Sound War , Gate has no reservations about terrorising Wave in a bid for control. Gate has Akatsuki connections.
02) Mari (Mah-ri) Class S nuke-nin from Sword Country( my creation lol. I do'nt know much about other hidden villages so I made my own) Seeks entry to Akatsuki. Has been hired by gate for now, but mostlikely wants to use his Akatsuki connections.
Recruiting. Since the Nuke nin is From Sword, does anyone want to be fetured as a Sword hunter-nin? If you wish so, post your charcters or yourself here. I highly encourage it. saves me charater design. No god-modding please.
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MBKon
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Posted 03 March 2006 - 12:49 PM
I sure as hell do!
Maruko Kobayashi. 16 years old.
Kekkai Genkai: Not really one, is the countainer of Hokou no Inu.
Isnt good taijutsu fighter neighter Genjutsu or Kobojutsu, specializes on weapons, summons and ninjutsu. Never wears a mask. Is mostly cool, calm and collected. When someone pisses him off,... beware. The 6 tailed demon dog gives him power to summon wolfs and dogs. When its full moon the demon gains control and summons himself.
thats it. btw, is it goin' to have a bit NaruSaku?
Maruko Kobayashi. 16 years old.
Kekkai Genkai: Not really one, is the countainer of Hokou no Inu.
Isnt good taijutsu fighter neighter Genjutsu or Kobojutsu, specializes on weapons, summons and ninjutsu. Never wears a mask. Is mostly cool, calm and collected. When someone pisses him off,... beware. The 6 tailed demon dog gives him power to summon wolfs and dogs. When its full moon the demon gains control and summons himself.
thats it. btw, is it goin' to have a bit NaruSaku?
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Posted 04 March 2006 - 01:27 PM
I want to be one of the Sword Nins... 
Name: Hanzo
Fighting style: Poison specialist. Can also blend colors with the shadow, but it pressures his body a lot and he can only use it for a maximum of one minute per use. He has poison breath and poison darts, and carries a poison sword.
Name: Hanzo
Fighting style: Poison specialist. Can also blend colors with the shadow, but it pressures his body a lot and he can only use it for a maximum of one minute per use. He has poison breath and poison darts, and carries a poison sword.
Nothing is more reassuring than Kakashi saying "They'll be alright. Pakkun is with them."
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Posted 10 March 2006 - 05:48 PM
make me a blade warrior!
Name: Raiko, only Raiko
Fighting style: Blades Of Dispear. Mainly a Tai-justsu type person, is weak in the field of genjustsu, and is highly skilled in ninjustu
Weapon: One sword like raiper, long, big, curves around my fist when i hold it, is made up of 2 seperate blades, Denstuki and Rainko.
Speacial features: Final attack, Dieresta, causes all fellow fighters to gain angelic/demonic type wings.
Kekkai Genkai: Neos Des Dianocal(dont know what it says, but it looks cool) basically, turns into Kyuubi type state, but loks like a dragon.
When in Kyuubi form: Weapons are claws, can control the area around him, wings of a devil.
When defeated, will sing Barney song to annoy killers to death
Past: Much is unknown about his past, but there are a few thingss that people know for sure.
1. He talks of a game no one has heard aout, Kingdom Hearts.
2. He hates Barney, and no one know who THAT is either
3. The Kyuubi form is huggable and VERRRY fluffy
4. He's a joker
5. He snores ALOT
Name: Raiko, only Raiko
Fighting style: Blades Of Dispear. Mainly a Tai-justsu type person, is weak in the field of genjustsu, and is highly skilled in ninjustu
Weapon: One sword like raiper, long, big, curves around my fist when i hold it, is made up of 2 seperate blades, Denstuki and Rainko.
Speacial features: Final attack, Dieresta, causes all fellow fighters to gain angelic/demonic type wings.
Kekkai Genkai: Neos Des Dianocal(dont know what it says, but it looks cool) basically, turns into Kyuubi type state, but loks like a dragon.
When in Kyuubi form: Weapons are claws, can control the area around him, wings of a devil.
When defeated, will sing Barney song to annoy killers to death
Past: Much is unknown about his past, but there are a few thingss that people know for sure.
1. He talks of a game no one has heard aout, Kingdom Hearts.
2. He hates Barney, and no one know who THAT is either
3. The Kyuubi form is huggable and VERRRY fluffy
4. He's a joker
5. He snores ALOT
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Posted 10 March 2006 - 09:20 PM
Sword hunter-nin
Name: Akki kouzetsu (Devil's Tongue)
Gender: Female
Fighting style: Akki uses two steel claws attached to chains for short or long range(Kinda like the demon brothers). She is highly skilled in Taijutsu, because she is a berserker (durable, crazy, strong, dangerous, but slow in battle plans. Though in the end she has no memory of what she did in berserker mode). She's very poor in Ninjutsu because she doesn't have enough chakra for it. She's ok in Genjutsu.
Special Features: Her Berserker mode (A curse) and her ablility to manipulate the direction of her chained claws.
Personalities: Sweet, cheerful, supportive, caring, kind, naive, and a bit dense in things (She wouldn't hurt a fly), but crazy, sadistic, potty-mouthed, and ignorant about safety in berserker mode.
Bio: Akki got her name from her adopted father after he found out about her nartural abilities . When you say a certain word (Wave) or anger her (which is really hard) she goes berserk.
She became a berserk (age: 8) when her whole family was slaughtered by missing-nins, she fought back in hatred, but got knocked on the head, loosing her memories of that day. So now whenever she hears the word "wave" she'll go crazy because her familly was killed in the wave country. The only way to stop her in berserker mode is by calming her down, knocking her out or killing her.
People see her as a valuable asset as a hunter-nin, but fears her other side.
Is this detailed enough?
Name: Akki kouzetsu (Devil's Tongue)
Gender: Female
Fighting style: Akki uses two steel claws attached to chains for short or long range(Kinda like the demon brothers). She is highly skilled in Taijutsu, because she is a berserker (durable, crazy, strong, dangerous, but slow in battle plans. Though in the end she has no memory of what she did in berserker mode). She's very poor in Ninjutsu because she doesn't have enough chakra for it. She's ok in Genjutsu.
Special Features: Her Berserker mode (A curse) and her ablility to manipulate the direction of her chained claws.
Personalities: Sweet, cheerful, supportive, caring, kind, naive, and a bit dense in things (She wouldn't hurt a fly), but crazy, sadistic, potty-mouthed, and ignorant about safety in berserker mode.
Bio: Akki got her name from her adopted father after he found out about her nartural abilities . When you say a certain word (Wave) or anger her (which is really hard) she goes berserk.
She became a berserk (age: 8) when her whole family was slaughtered by missing-nins, she fought back in hatred, but got knocked on the head, loosing her memories of that day. So now whenever she hears the word "wave" she'll go crazy because her familly was killed in the wave country. The only way to stop her in berserker mode is by calming her down, knocking her out or killing her.
People see her as a valuable asset as a hunter-nin, but fears her other side.
Is this detailed enough?
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Posted 11 March 2006 - 01:12 AM
Hm......how bout i help you in the fights? i could help on that..... oh yea, i am already working on the story, but i'll keep it to myself
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