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[MonkeysTotallyRock]

so... i'm just allowed to put my topic up here about my story, right? okay! so, as some of you may know, my story is True Freedom. okay, so i need ideas. if yall have any narusaku moments you'd be willing to let me borrow, or just sparks, ideas, random thoughts, they'd be well appreciated.

[Danni]

here's one narusaku monent Fear at orichimarua.
when naruto is fighting kibuto and sakura is there, and kibuto tied naruto w/ these string thing. And sakura cut the string apart from the 2.
naruto flys and hits the ground, Then sakura runs over to see if naruto okay. And he doesnt move or anything, Then she starts crying cause she thinks that naruto is dead.

Hope that helps a little in your story.

[MonkeysTotallyRock]

hmmm... yeah, that'll work! cuz they will be facing orochimaru later on anyways. yeah, thanks.

[Danni]

or something about how naruto was allways there for her.

More moments of NS hmm what about where sakura started crying when naruto made the promise of a lifetime.

Oh dont mention it MTR.

[Sono]

Whenever I write my own fanfics I decide to take the love intrest as slow as I can, which is pretty much what you're doing. Spread out, but only to an extent. To be honest I find it almost cuter when you have Naruto and Sakura in love at the age of 13 and not like... 19. It's really good, though. Waiting for update. (Love the beginning and how you made Naruto serious.)

[MonkeysTotallyRock]

i was just wondering, but, you guys would kill me if made sakura die, wouldn't you... i didn't even have to ask. well, there goes that part of the storyline! ''^^