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#1 Reo

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Posted 09 June 2006 - 12:25 AM

I have a fic called Zabuza's Apprentice. I have gotten the first Chapter up yet even though i have planned out the story I can't seem to write the second chapter. Believe me i have tried I must have written 4 different Chapter 2s yet all of them do not fit what i am going towards.

I only have Note Pad not Microsoft Word so that limits me. I need a Beta too. Im in a rough situation and I probably shouldn't have started a giant project yet I feel sure of myself since I have written many stories that have won Young Authors(thats a writing contest at my school).

So could I have any comments or advice for me?

#2 MonkeysTotallyRock

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Posted 15 July 2006 - 12:37 AM

oh! i have young author's projects at my school! (we'll ignore the fact that i never won... sad.gif ) this may sound stupid, what's a beta? i never really understood it. anyways, i shall read your story to give you ideas. heck, i'm writing stories and all i have is a notepad, not ever word. so it's all good. but anyways, from the sounds of it, ya gotta writer's block. so, only one thing to do. *gulp* ya gotta take a break. *sigh* see, that wasn't that bad, now was it? ''^^ it happens to me. i ended up completely tearing apart my story True Freedom, and redoing it all over. anyways, tkae a break. if you have multiple versions, see which one is best for the one you want to go. choose it. and then begin editing that one alone. and, who knows? may be it'll turn out good. may be it won't. we all have our good/bad chapters. e.g. my other story, Naruto's Legacy, one chapter i got 8 reviews... another one i got 45. so it sometimes varies. (well, that chapter was shorter, too, but... anyways...) so just take a break. be easy on yourself. remember this isn't a fight; it's a hobby. so chill. happy.gif




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