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[Danni]

ok tell me if this sound good and then i write it.
the story is about naruto is about to die and you see everything that happy to him in the series,and some part 1,part2,fiction.
in it show how much sakura feeling changes to sasuke to now naruto.
tell what you think and if any ideals,or something to change.
and it not gonna be a one shot story.its gonna a big story.

[Mira]

Here's the first thing I thought when I read your post: If you're gonna write you should improve your grammar. Bad grammar equals unappealing fanfiction. Second of all, if you're going to write then you should write it. Having someone dictate whether you write out your idea or not is a sign that you will probably abandon the fic. This is especially noted when looking at your writing idea. It's too vague to show that it was well developed and thought out. You probably haven't even planned out the plot. I suggest you write out the details of events and organize them before writing your story.

[Yori Uzumaki]

I don't know, it doesn't seem to have the author's...eh...special touch and plot, if you will? You see, I've been reading fanfiction since I was eleven and I'll tell you, I've seen a lot of fanfictions that have the same plot. One of the character's having multiple flash backs and it's not special, unless the author adds some thing extraordinary. And not just, make up your own flashbacks for the character, but all it really is, is a review. I've tried to write these and I got bored, but you know, it couls work out okay, I haven't read a Naruto one before, but I have in a lot of other catergories.

[MonkeysTotallyRock]

Here's the first thing I thought when I read your post: If you're gonna write you should improve your grammar. Bad grammar equals unappealing fanfiction. Second of all, if you're going to write then you should write it. Having someone dictate whether you write out your idea or not is a sign that you will probably abandon the fic. This is especially noted when looking at your writing idea. It's too vague to show that it was well developed and thought out. You probably haven't even planned out the plot. I suggest you write out the details of events and organize them before writing your story.

<{POST_SNAPBACK}>

yup yup. i go on and on in bad way and you don't like read it, no? in short, dude, fix the grammar. other than that, no one can really tell you how to write something. it's your dream, your story. you really shouldn't care what your fans think, unless pretty much every fan hates yours... which won't happen. ''^^ WRITE ON MY FANFICTION FRIEND!!! :thumbs:

[Toa]

Er...I agree with them ^, you do have a problem with grammar and sentences. I really think that you should improve it or get a beta-reader/editor...

Have you thought of the whole plot? Because if the thing you said will be the whole story then I think that it won't be a big one...

You should think about the whole plot first and how the characters will interact because of you don't then it'll result to a big writer's block. But if you do really want to write it then go for it! But I'm warning you...beware of those dumba*s flamers, don't let them go to your head :thumbs:

Good luck writing!