Hey guys, I just posted a reworked story of mine and I'd be glad if you could point out mistakes, give constructive criticism and feedback!
https://www.fanficti...695533/1/Savior
Edited by TeeBee, 16 September 2014 - 08:29 AM.
Savior
Started by Anthony, Sep 16 2014 08:29 AM
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Posted 16 September 2014 - 08:05 PM
I liked the story alot, it was nice. I must point out the slight OOCness in Sakura though. Other then that, I look forward to continue reading your story.
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Posted 16 September 2014 - 09:10 PM
I liked the story alot, it was nice. I must point out the slight OOCness in Sakura though. Other then that, I look forward to continue reading your story.
I've stated why she is OOC in the AN. There are different circumstances after all. She is no Uchiha fan, that means she isn't 'strong-willed' (haha, had to say that) in part one.
Thank you!
Edited by TeeBee, 16 September 2014 - 09:10 PM.
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Posted 07 December 2014 - 02:10 PM
So I updated the story. Any thoughts, criticism and/or feedback would be appreciated!
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Posted 23 December 2014 - 02:24 AM
New chapter out. This one is a bit experimental as I try to take a new view on the story altogether.
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Posted 19 April 2015 - 08:24 PM
Uh, a few chapter's have been posted since the last chapter. I've also put up another story named Could This Be, so if you like NaruSaku AN's that have a lot of angst and heartbreaks in them... that's your story.
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