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#1 tricksie

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Posted 25 November 2014 - 11:06 PM

Beginning of a new fanfic. I think you can tell where this is going! I realized I need this to make me feel better about the ending. Hopefully it will make everyone else feel somewhat better too.  :D This will follow Naruto, Sakura and Sasuke as they sort out their feelings and their futures.

 

 

Summary: “Thank you, Sakura-chan” — Bloodied but victorious, Naruto looked up to see his two teammates beaming at each other. They had found love. Then it was finally the end. He smiled weakly as she tended his wounds. It was okay, he wanted it for them too. Yet he also knew the ache that had settled in his chest would never be healed. But sometimes, the end is only just the beginning.

 

Thank you, Sakura-chan


#2 Mikey1181

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Posted 25 November 2014 - 11:13 PM

Thank you so much tricksie

I was told i looked like a beaver..

 

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Posted 25 November 2014 - 11:20 PM

You got me in tears already :(
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Posted 25 November 2014 - 11:22 PM

This is beautiful, tricksie!

 

My kokoro is brokoro...  :cry:

 

That would be the perfect ending!!! :smug:



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Posted 26 November 2014 - 12:16 AM

Oh shiz. This is so good wow. Can't wait to read the whole fanfic, and it's continuation <33


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Why do people NOT ship these two? I just don't get it.

Probably cause they hate Sakura. When she's probably the most developed female character in the whole show.

I respect Hinata, but Sakura deserves some too.


#6 Bryon_Konoha_Ninja

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Posted 26 November 2014 - 01:47 AM

Damn, Tricks!  :cry: You got me in the feels! Now I gotta work hard on my own fanfic so I can hope it'll be as good as this was!



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Posted 26 November 2014 - 02:56 AM

My kokoro >.<  :ermm:


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Posted 26 November 2014 - 04:14 AM

This was so beautiful and painful at the same time.
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Posted 26 November 2014 - 04:23 AM

This is so good tricksie; another fantastic job. I love the title of your fic because as you said many times before, those are Naruto's last, true, and honest words to Sakura and in the manga. To be honest, just reading what you wrote here would be perfect on its own, but I am excited to see the rest and I know it will be something great.



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Posted 26 November 2014 - 04:30 AM

Hope it's not too sad!! This is just a little preview. There's more to come. It will be a multi-chapter fic with Sakura and Naruto's pov. Not so much Sasuke's but more what they do in response to his choices. It will be a different imagined ending to the story, involving some of the challenges they might have faced upon their return.



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Posted 26 November 2014 - 04:33 AM

This is so good tricksie; another fantastic job. I love the title of your fic because as you said many times before, those are Naruto's last, true, and honest words to Sakura and in the manga. To be honest, just reading what you wrote here would be perfect on its own, but I am excited to see the rest and I know it will be something great.

 

:) Thanks so much!!! Yeah, I keep going back to that phrase. I feel like it's Naruto's only true confession in the whole manga. So it's a good place to start an ending fic. Anyway, glad you like it! There's more to come!



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Posted 26 November 2014 - 04:38 AM

Hope it's not too sad!! This is just a little preview. There's more to come. It will be a multi-chapter fic with Sakura and Naruto's pov. Not so much Sasuke's but more what they do in response to his choices. It will be a different imagined ending to the story, involving some of the challenges they might have faced upon their return.

 

:hug: I think that it will be great, especially since there's a lot for Sasuke to have to face too besides our favorite couple. I like to think that we'll see a slow but steady build-up for some NaruSaku romance, or at least I hope so!



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Posted 26 November 2014 - 07:50 AM

I love it! I ache too. It will always be NaruSaku>>>>>

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Posted 26 November 2014 - 08:53 AM

This is REALLY good. I'm excited for the whole thing. EEEERRRG! Now I have to wait! XD

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Posted 26 November 2014 - 01:46 PM

Great stuff, Tricksie. 10000x more moving and emotional than what Kishi gave us.



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Posted 26 November 2014 - 05:48 PM

Damn that baka....

Thank you so much Tricksie. It really managed to break me up....again..

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Posted 26 November 2014 - 06:10 PM

tricksie... omg. you made me tear up.

 

this broke my heart.

 

my beautiful children.  :cry:

 

can't wait for more.

 

this was BREATHTAKING and heart wrenching . :love:

 

thank you for continuing writing these two! you capture their personalities and feelings perfectly! 


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Posted 02 December 2014 - 10:50 AM

Oh wow. You know that feeling you get in your chest when you read something heart wrenching. This was truly that. I really like your writing style. It leaves me wanting to read so much more. Keep up the amazing work. :)

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Posted 06 December 2014 - 05:25 AM

Let us know when there's more, this is such a great start, I want to read this badly

 

I'm still working on it! Hopefully I'll have the first chapter up tomorrow. I don't like to put up much of anything before I figure out where the story's going. And I think I've got it figured out.






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