Need advice for a Naruto fanfic.
#1
Posted 22 August 2008 - 01:02 AM
What I need advice for:
1. possible ideas for henchmen for the enemies, living or undead? (the whole undead thing was mine.)
2. Should I use flames for my survivor's taijutsu and sword skills?
3. I decided to put a dragon-like spirit in the sword. I thought it to be the secret on the sword's mystery. Got anything better?
If you have any more advice for me, let me know.
Thank you.
#2
Posted 22 August 2008 - 01:23 AM
2. Maybe chakra... but not flames.
3. No, bad, bad, the Kyuubi is enough to handle.
I do have some more advice for you. Get a new story plot I think I've read ten fics already where Naruto is either delayed or doesn't come back from his training trip with Jyraiya... and the only good ones were none of them. Me? Naruto dies in the one I'm writing. Don't worry it's not a bleach crossover, and he stays dead for about 8 weeks.
Oh the anxiety!
#3
Posted 22 August 2008 - 01:33 AM
Any more advice?
#4
Posted 22 August 2008 - 01:42 AM
I personally do like the idea of OC characters, but readers just aren't given enough information to bond with the new character. Just like Sai, we all probably hated Sai when we first read about him, but then we started to learn about his past and why he was such a emotionless bastard all the time... although granted I still don't like him for various reasons, mainly because of the 'revealing' clothes he chooses to wear... all the time... and the incredibly insulting nicknames.
Edited by Saint Michael, 22 August 2008 - 01:45 AM.
#5
Posted 22 August 2008 - 01:51 AM
#6
Posted 22 August 2008 - 01:57 AM
A. You can just start them off with unless you're going to give them a very detailed story from when they were a baby, which I doubt most readers would want to read.
B. It's really a fun complication when you try and figure out how you're going to make Naruto and Sakura 'get together' when theres a little kid running around.
C. If Naruto left Konoha without becoming a missing nin or being banished I think it gives him a good reason to come back and settle down.
D. Because that's my OC, Tsukiko-chan, and I'm finding it to be a real blast!
#7
Posted 22 August 2008 - 02:10 AM
Better? (not to be angry, but it is my first najor Naruto fanfic.)
#8
Posted 22 August 2008 - 02:21 AM
Tsukiko means moon child, what does Ryouga mean?
Edited by Saint Michael, 22 August 2008 - 02:23 AM.
#9
Posted 22 August 2008 - 02:27 AM
Edited by Uzumaki Naruto Knight of Konoha, 22 August 2008 - 02:33 AM.
#10
Posted 22 August 2008 - 02:46 AM
Oooh and just because Naruto has it doesn't mean all the other characters need it to... say like he has the Kyuubi it doesn't mean that all the other characters need a demon inside them to. Like say for Sakura, people OFTEN put a demon inside HER. But Even stranger still most Jynchuuriki OCs end up being the same age as Naruto himself. Which is... unthoughtful as well as uneventful. In most logical cases it would be a rare event for a Jynchuuriki to be the same age as another Jycnhuuriki.
Edited by Saint Michael, 22 August 2008 - 03:07 AM.
#11
Posted 22 August 2008 - 11:48 PM
Besides, I wasn't going to make him stronger than Naruto anyway.
#12
Posted 23 August 2008 - 08:40 AM
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