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#1 Rachel

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Posted 14 June 2008 - 08:12 PM

here it is!

http://www.fanfictio...und_With_A_Kiss

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#2 Wilson

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Posted 14 June 2008 - 08:22 PM

Short and sweet. Very good! XDDD

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Posted 15 June 2008 - 12:02 AM

shamefulcry0js.gif thats so beutiful :thumbs: Great job! that couldnt have been better. very nice job


#4 SakuNaruLover

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Posted 15 June 2008 - 12:17 AM

Nice job, I like it happy.gif
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#5 alucard

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Posted 15 June 2008 - 01:32 AM

like omg i found this picture on photobucket it almost matches your story. just a bunch of little details to change

http://i151.photobuc...taichikun14.jpg


#6 Rachel

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Posted 15 June 2008 - 05:46 PM

Thanx guys!
WOW alucard that realli does look like what i wrote!! im going to save that to my computer now...aww its a sweet picture :]



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Posted 16 June 2008 - 12:09 AM

i feel like i've read this story somewhere b4, but either way i definitely enjoyed it smile.gif

#8 Yoshimoya

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Posted 28 June 2008 - 11:05 PM

haha, ive read this story even when you havent told us to! =) i thought this story was so awesome! it was very descriptive and everything, it was so sweet! i really loved it! =) if all the fanfics of narusaku were like this, they would all get millions of reviews =) narusakuct7.gif

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Posted 29 June 2008 - 05:05 AM

Very good story, I enjoyed it.




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