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#81 merryGOflava

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Posted 18 December 2014 - 09:35 PM

Id actually recommend not making the boys hair pink. red or orange would be better if you don't want blond.

 

The problem with pink is that Sakura if you look is basically unique in the manga for her hair color. one of her kids with pink hair is fine but too many you start taking away some of that uniqueness.

 

In  my own in your stories their 3 kids have spikey orange--girl--, neat blond--boy--, and pink fading into red --boy.

 

I don't know the idea of the boy having pink hair sounded interesting to me ^_^

 

I just don't like the idea of a blonde kid for Naruto's child.


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Posted 18 December 2014 - 11:00 PM

its not that the idea is bad from an artistic standpoint its more that it starts detracting from a character point that make sakura unique and starts handing it out like the sharingan was being handed out at one point.

 

its just a cautionary thing to be aware of.


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Posted 19 December 2014 - 12:38 AM

IM FREE AT LAST!!! IM FREE AT LAST!!! THANK GOD ALMIGHTY IM FREE AT LAST!!!! >XD

UGH!!! Physical Labor can be such a pain in the ass T_T now my body is freakin sore everywhere and I don't know if I should be resting from the forum for awhile until I recover..........

........-_-............AH SCREW IT!!!!!

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Posted 19 December 2014 - 03:54 AM

its not that the idea is bad from an artistic standpoint its more that it starts detracting from a character point that make sakura unique and starts handing it out like the sharingan was being handed out at one point.

 

its just a cautionary thing to be aware of.

Kushina's hair made her unique but Karin had it too.

I don't see the problem with Sakura sharing her beautiful hair color :3 it's a nice gift for a son. 

 

I see your point...but I don't think it's anything to worry about.


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Posted 19 December 2014 - 05:00 AM

And I have drawn Haruka! Didn't color her a little like I did Jiraiya, but I hope you guys like her!

 

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Haruka has pink hair like Sakura, with blue eyes like Naruto. She's got an aptitude for knowledge, and often tends to not say what is in her heart, so she has an Inner Haruka, similar to Sakura having had an Inner Sakura before she became more honest and open with herself. She looks up to her big brother Jiraiya, and yet also worries about him when he gets mischievous, given how scary their mom can be when she's driven.

 

I drew this, Moon Drop :D Meet Haruka Uzumaki, Naruto and Sakura's daughter (or my submission of her) :3



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Posted 19 December 2014 - 05:18 AM

 
I drew this, Moon Drop :D Meet Haruka Uzumaki, Naruto and Sakura's daughter (or my submission of her) :3


It's a nice design Bryon!!! XD
Keep working at it!!!!

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Posted 19 December 2014 - 05:37 AM

It's a nice design Bryon!!! XD
Keep working at it!!!!

 

Thanks! I will do my best to please. ^_^



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Posted 19 December 2014 - 09:25 AM

IM FREE AT LAST!!! IM FREE AT LAST!!! THANK GOD ALMIGHTY IM FREE AT LAST!!!! >XD

UGH!!! Physical Labor can be such a pain in the ass T_T now my body is freakin sore everywhere and I don't know if I should be resting from the forum for awhile until I recover..........

........ -_-............AH SCREW IT!!!!!

What's happening!?!?!?!? XD

 

Welcome back! :D

 

I amde some suggestions that Naruto doesn't have senju cells arm. But rather Sakura regrows the arm. Her jutsu as stated by Tsunade can do this. It will also finaly put her above Tsunade. And I don't like Naruto having senju cells.

 

Also I suggested that SK kids shouldn't have rinnegans. Sharingans are ok trough!


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Posted 19 December 2014 - 10:54 AM

 
Welcome back! :D
 
I amde some suggestions that Naruto doesn't have senju cells arm. But rather Sakura regrows the arm. Her jutsu as stated by Tsunade can do this. It will also finaly put her above Tsunade. And I don't like Naruto having senju cells.
 
Also I suggested that SK kids shouldn't have rinnegans. Sharingans are ok trough!


Thank ya thank ya XD

Hmmmm the Hashirama prosthetic limbs were, I admit, a surprising way to deal with Naruto's and Sasuke's missing limb situation. Honestly as you suggested I was hoping for Sakura to be the one to bring back their limbs but instead with some aid from the Sage of the 6 Paths. But now after seeing the results of the prosthetic limbs I am interested of its academic uses in the series future medical treatments in part 3. But if anyone feel that the story can take another direction regarding Naruto's handicapped situation in their own version then by all means everyone will welcome it. X)

Now regarding the Rinnegan for SK children.........personally and honestly I think it shouldn't be done :(. Reasons being is because we would want this story to flow with the logical standpoints that Killimoto has left within it. The Rinnegan is a very rare and special eye transformation within the series that it has left it's mark within the original series ending (698). You could say the story of the Rinnegan and it's importantce within the story ended with Naruto and Sasuke's fight. The continued use of it afterwards would eventually make the eyes significance die down more and more as common within each of the reader who will read our part 3. We should minimize the appearance and use of the Rinnegan as something very rare you hardly get to see in the story, that way in the future the audience would be begging for it to happen each time they continue to read Part 3, thus giving it more popularity and readers in the process which we are aiming for X). The sharingan is ok and it's uses can be explored with the SK children within anyone's version of the story but it should be recommended that the Rinnegan should not be used for the children and only exclusive to Sasuke instead.

If anyone feel the need that they want to do this in their story then you can try :) just hear out my recommendation before making your final choice before doing so is all I ask...

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Posted 19 December 2014 - 06:04 PM

I got an interesting idea; something that we could do to do our version of The Last but with it more NaruSaku related. The question is what is the threat if one? One idea I have had is someone seeks to gain the powers of the Sage of Six Paths, and needs special chakra for it, which is where the Biju come in as well as Tsunade and Sakura, since their Yin Seals are a storage shed of chakra essentially so use that as a means to drive Naruto to save Sakura, realizing how precious she is to him, as well as his drive to protect the world. Also bring Sasuke in to protect the bonds he has with Team Kakashi. Kinda like how the Inuyasha movies, well the first two, really show emphasis on the bonds that Inuyasha and Kagome form, and the love they have for each other, so why not do something akin to that?



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Posted 19 December 2014 - 11:30 PM

I got an interesting idea; something that we could do to do our version of The Last but with it more NaruSaku related. The question is what is the threat if one? One idea I have had is someone seeks to gain the powers of the Sage of Six Paths, and needs special chakra for it, which is where the Biju come in as well as Tsunade and Sakura, since their Yin Seals are a storage shed of chakra essentially so use that as a means to drive Naruto to save Sakura, realizing how precious she is to him, as well as his drive to protect the world. Also bring Sasuke in to protect the bonds he has with Team Kakashi. Kinda like how the Inuyasha movies, well the first two, really show emphasis on the bonds that Inuyasha and Kagome form, and the love they have for each other, so why not do something akin to that?


It's an interesting idea but right now we are working on the NS bond and relationship solely on its establishment in the manga and not portrayed in a "Movie sense" much like NH was in The Last. :(

After The Last came out pretty much everybody here in the forum would agree if NaruSaku were to be shown properly in the manga at the end, it wouldn't need a movie to explain how they did get together. But if we ever had the time in the future then maybe we might make an official NS plot to go along with our Naruto ending and Part 3 :D lol

Right now it's best to portray Naruto and Sakura's characters in your ending as they were after Chapter 698. No additional power ups or move sets are needed because those 2 are perfect just the way they are and we should portray that fact as best as possible!!! :D

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Posted 20 December 2014 - 04:14 AM

It's an interesting idea but right now we are working on the NS bond and relationship solely on its establishment in the manga and not portrayed in a "Movie sense" much like NH was in The Last. :(

After The Last came out pretty much everybody here in the forum would agree if NaruSaku were to be shown properly in the manga at the end, it wouldn't need a movie to explain how they did get together. But if we ever had the time in the future then maybe we might make an official NS plot to go along with our Naruto ending and Part 3 :D lol

Right now it's best to portray Naruto and Sakura's characters in your ending as they were after Chapter 698. No additional power ups or move sets are needed because those 2 are perfect just the way they are and we should portray that fact as best as possible!!! :D

 

True, I just had it spitballing an idea XD And you gotta admit, it'd be cool since Naruto would be VERY motivated to save Sakura. Just like he did when it came to fighting Gaara.



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Posted 20 December 2014 - 05:10 AM

 
True, I just had it spitballing an idea XD And you gotta admit, it'd be cool since Naruto would be VERY motivated to save Sakura. Just like he did when it came to fighting Gaara.


Oh yeah believe me I know how you feel!!! XD

I already have a few scenes planned out in my head for a "NS Movie Plot" that would feel more manga/anime romantic then The Lasts NH Disney story line crap X) lol.

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Posted 20 December 2014 - 12:00 PM

Alright I have constantly been saying I have a "suggestion" for everybody to consider using in the choosing of what would be the TRUE ENDING of Naruto. Now that I finally have the time........I'm gonna FREAKIN say it!!!! >XD lol

Ok for weeks we have been constantly been fed with kitten and Crap from Kishi and SP with their ending and their Stupid movie!!! Lies of deceit, misleads, profits, advertisements and corruption have been shoved down our throats to make us fall under heel to their conclusion of a beautiful and impactfull story, but we continue to ignore because we know the TRUTH!!! Well I say it's time we sent them a proper reply that we aren't going to be corrupted by them!!! To show the world that we are gonna Break Their Walls and show everybody and the story THE ENDING they truly deserve!!!!!!

But how do we go about doing so?? So many Naruto fans have a version of their own ENDING that they believe can be the TRUE ENDING everyone will go to believe. How can any of us choose which is more deserving of attaining the right to be the Naruto fandoms TRUE ENDING?? An Ending worthy for this story and it's characters truly deserve!?!? The answer for that I have came up with is actually pretty simple.....

...........A CONTEST!!!!!! A challenge amongst anyone who can create an ending they deem will be worthy to the entire fandom as the TRUE ENDING!!! Writers will create their own versions of the ENDING and each will be judged and voted by the fandom and which ever is the most liked will become the winner and will be used for the continuation of our PART 3 PROJECT!!!

Now I know what most of you will think when you see what I just said........it's not really original and plus it doesn't seem that appealing. But PLEASE!!! Hear me out first.....I have actually given this a great deal of thought this past week and have came with 3 solid reasons why we should do this!!!!

1: After we have Chosen what the TRUE ENDING will be after the contest is over, we will immediately afterwards begin work on our version of Part 3 from the basis of the TRUE ENDING. We want to show Kishi and SP whatever they think of for their future projects will not compare in comparison to what our work will be!! That our Part 3 will become something more then just the story itself but of a positive message to its readers!!!! We will do our damnest to make it become more popular then their work and show that we will NOT let them drag this series through the mud any longer!!!!! But saying we are going to make a part 3 is nothing but petty words.......we got to make sure we can commit ourselves to its development much like any mangeka is to their manga. So through this CONTEST it will be a test to ourselves to see if we can truly make a part 3 series!!! We will each create an ending much like any writer would work on their stories, and through each word, thought and soul you put into it you'll begin to test yourself if you are truly qualified to help write something Beyond!!! And not only that but you may find stuff about yourselves that you never thought you were capable of, things that can truly be beneficial to all of us in the future!!!

2: Through this entire contest we are going to be sending Kishi, SP, NH and SS fandom a MESSAGE. A message that we on the other side of the fandom, who truly believe that this series deserves better, that we will NOT be Crushed by their constant kitten!!! That we will not be Ridiculed by their constant Bullying!!!! That we will not be Deterred from our beliefs of what is RIGHT!!!!! We are gonna send them a Message that no matter how much they think they are in the "right" or that they are the more "deserving" or that they are the "better" of all of us........they are sorely MISTAKEN!!!! We of the NS/SK/SH/SNS fandoms may have our faults but what makes us different from them is that we are the TRUE readers of the story!!! That we better understand it's messages better then anybody!!! That we care much more for the characters because we can easily relate to them in someway on a emotional level!!!! We also have a BOND among each other that their most of their fandom apparently don't have. While they may get what they want they go against each other as soon as something goes wrong for either side. They easily fight amongst each other and don't really have mutual respect for one another........but WE do!!!! Like I have said before we have our faults and problems like anyone else but time and time again we come back to each in an understanding for each other. What We Lose Only Make Us Stronger!!!
And the CONTEST will prove that fact. Even though each one of us will be competing with each other to see what will be the TRUE ENDING, we will truly begin to understand each other through the works we make and read......and make our BOND that much stronger!! That no matter what is thrown at us we will not BREAK, FALL or SUBMIT to anything by their Corruption!!! And once we have made ourselves ready...... They will be made clear on who they are messing with!!! That when our time comes and we show them how wrong they really are.........WE WILL UNLEASH HELL!!!!

.........to me the Naruto series has become something irreplaceable in my heart and I do not want to stand and watch as it's creator and immature idiotic fandom destroy it's story, characters and good messages any further!!! This is my suggestion to you all of how to make our first step in fighting them back........what do you say?

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Posted 20 December 2014 - 02:29 PM

 

Welcome back! :D

 

I amde some suggestions that Naruto doesn't have senju cells arm. But rather Sakura regrows the arm. Her jutsu as stated by Tsunade can do this. It will also finaly put her above Tsunade. And I don't like Naruto having senju cells.

 

Also I suggested that SK kids shouldn't have rinnegans. Sharingans are ok trough!

 

Just had a thought regarding your idea that could be along the lines of what you're thinking. In the manga, Tsunade was capable of regenerating her own cells using the diamond seal on her forehead, right? Well, what if one of the ways that Sakura has surpassed her mentor is by utilising a similar technique that can rapidly develop and regenerate the cells of someone else? Perhaps she can take the cells that make up Naruto's body and reproduce them, and then she shapes those cells into an arm. It would still be useless at first - it could literally just be flesh and bone in the shape of an arm, but have none of the nerve endings etc. Over a period of time and operations, Sakura could reattach these nerve endings so that it slowly becomes fully functional. Perhaps this development in her skills is also the catalyst that elevates her to a higher position in authority regarding the medical facilities in Konoha later on (she could write a paper on it, and the technique could be used on other people to restore missing limbs and perhaps move onto organs etc.)


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Posted 20 December 2014 - 03:20 PM

Alright I have constantly been saying I have a "suggestion" for everybody to consider using in the choosing of what would be the TRUE ENDING of Naruto. Now that I finally have the time........I'm gonna FREAKIN say it!!!! >XD lol

Ok for weeks we have been constantly been fed with bullsh** and Crap from Kishi and SP with their ending and their Stupid movie!!! Lies of deceit, misleads, profits, advertisements and corruption have been shoved down our throats to make us fall under heel to their conclusion of a beautiful and impactfull story, but we continue to ignore because we know the TRUTH!!! Well I say it's time we sent them a proper reply that we aren't going to be corrupted by them!!! To show the world that we are gonna Break Their Walls and show everybody and the story THE ENDING they truly deserve!!!!!!

But how do we go about doing so?? So many Naruto fans have a version of their own ENDING that they believe can be the TRUE ENDING everyone will go to believe. How can any of us choose which is more deserving of attaining the right to be the Naruto fandoms TRUE ENDING?? An Ending worthy for this story and it's characters truly deserve!?!? The answer for that I have came up with is actually pretty simple.....

...........A CONTEST!!!!!! A challenge amongst anyone who can create an ending they deem will be worthy to the entire fandom as the TRUE ENDING!!! Writers will create their own versions of the ENDING and each will be judged and voted by the fandom and which ever is the most liked will become the winner and will be used for the continuation of our PART 3 PROJECT!!!

Now I know what most of you will think when you see what I just said........it's not really original and plus it doesn't seem that appealing. But PLEASE!!! Hear me out first.....I have actually given this a great deal of thought this past week and have came with 3 solid reasons why we should do this!!!!

1: After we have Chosen what the TRUE ENDING will be after the contest is over, we will immediately afterwards begin work on our version of Part 3 from the basis of the TRUE ENDING. We want to show Kishi and SP whatever they think of for their future projects will not compare in comparison to what our work will be!! That our Part 3 will become something more then just the story itself but of a positive message to its readers!!!! We will do our damnest to make it become more popular then their work and show that we will NOT let them drag this series through the mud any longer!!!!! But saying we are going to make a part 3 is nothing but petty words.......we got to make sure we can commit ourselves to its development much like any mangeka is to their manga. So through this CONTEST it will be a test to ourselves to see if we can truly make a part 3 series!!! We will each create an ending much like any writer would work on their stories, and through each word, thought and soul you put into it you'll begin to test yourself if you are truly qualified to help write something Beyond!!! And not only that but you may find stuff about yourselves that you never thought you were capable of, things that can truly be beneficial to all of us in the future!!!

2: Through this entire contest we are going to be sending Kishi, SP, NH and SS fandom a MESSAGE. A message that we on the other side of the fandom, who truly believe that this series deserves better, that we will NOT be Crushed by their constant bullsh**!!! That we will not be Ridiculed by their constant Bullying!!!! That we will not be Deterred from our beliefs of what is RIGHT!!!!! We are gonna send them a Message that no matter how much they think they are in the "right" or that they are the more "deserving" or that they are the "better" of all of us........they are sorely MISTAKEN!!!! We of the NS/SK/SH/SNS fandoms may have our faults but what makes us different from them is that we are the TRUE readers of the story!!! That we better understand it's messages better then anybody!!! That we care much more for the characters because we can easily relate to them in someway on a emotional level!!!! We also have a BOND among each other that their most of their fandom apparently don't have. While they may get what they want they go against each other as soon as something goes wrong for either side. They easily fight amongst each other and don't really have mutual respect for one another........but WE do!!!! Like I have said before we have our faults and problems like anyone else but time and time again we come back to each in an understanding for each other. What We Lose Only Make Us Stronger!!!
And the CONTEST will prove that fact. Even though each one of us will be competing with each other to see what will be the TRUE ENDING, we will truly begin to understand each other through the works we make and read......and make our BOND that much stronger!! That no matter what is thrown at us we will not BREAK, FALL or SUBMIT to anything by their Corruption!!! And once we have made ourselves ready...... They will be made clear on who they are messing with!!! That when our time comes and we show them how wrong they really are.........WE WILL UNLEASH HELL!!!!

.........to me the Naruto series has become something irreplaceable in my heart and I do not want to stand and watch as it's creator and immature idiotic fandom destroy it's story, characters and good messages any further!!! This is my suggestion to you all of how to make our first step in fighting them back........what do you say?

 

A contest, eh? What did you have in mind?


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Posted 20 December 2014 - 03:50 PM

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Nice! xd But I think there is a slight problem with this plan. Many people have their own version of what an ending could be. But not that many people can write scenario/script/fanfic to properly expresses his/hers idea!

 

 

Just had a thought regarding your idea that could be along the lines of what you're thinking. In the manga, Tsunade was capable of regenerating her own cells using the diamond seal on her forehead, right? Well, what if one of the ways that Sakura has surpassed her mentor is by utilising a similar technique that can rapidly develop and regenerate the cells of someone else? Perhaps she can take the cells that make up Naruto's body and reproduce them, and then she shapes those cells into an arm. It would still be useless at first - it could literally just be flesh and bone in the shape of an arm, but have none of the nerve endings etc. Over a period of time and operations, Sakura could reattach these nerve endings so that it slowly becomes fully functional. Perhaps this development in her skills is also the catalyst that elevates her to a higher position in authority regarding the medical facilities in Konoha later on (she could write a paper on it, and the technique could be used on other people to restore missing limbs and perhaps move onto organs etc.)

It's a nice theory! The reason why I think Sakura regrowing Naruto's arm. Is because she already surpassed Tsunade in the usage of seal. healing much more people at once. And being able to pas her seal on to Obito!


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Posted 20 December 2014 - 03:58 PM

 

Nice! xd But I think there is a slight problem with this plan. Many people have their own version of what an ending could be. But not that many people can write scenario/script/fanfic to properly expresses his/hers idea!

 

It's a nice theory! The reason why I think Sakura regrowing Naruto's arm. Is because she already surpassed Tsunade in the usage of seal. healing much more people at once. And being able to pas her seal on to Obito!

 

That could indeed be an issue. Perhaps people could collaborate on ideas in some way? Maybe that could work?

 

Ah, yes. I'd almost forgotten about those moments. That being the case, regrowing a limb doesn't really sound far-fetched for her at all.

 

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Posted 20 December 2014 - 06:17 PM

I had an idea for a scene, guys;

 

Shikamaru: Hey, Naruto, how much longer're you gonna be?

 

*Naruto is looking over some paperwork* Naruto: Yeah, gimme a minute, Shikamaru.

 

Shikamaru: Seriously, are you almost done?

 

Naruto: Huh? Oh, right, right! *puts the paper down* Listen, man, can you look at it all? I think I got it signed right. *does a hand sign and explodes*

 

Shikamaru: YOU GOTTA BE KIDDING ME!!! A shadow clone?! NOT AGAIN!! Naruto!! What a drag it is to be your advisor if you're not even here for me to advise you...!!!

 

*Naruto and Sakura Uzumaki's place, a little outside of the Hidden Leaf Village. Just a few minutes walk to the village*

 

Naruto: So that's how it is. *smiles as he is sitting with his 8-year old son, Jiraiya, fishing* Fish sure are hopping today, huh?

 

Jiraiya: They sure are, Dad. Hey, do you think Unca Shikamaru's gonna be mad you used the Shadow Clone Jutsu while in the office? I mean, I always hear Shikanosuke talking to me 'bout how Unca Shikamaru feels like you're shirking your responsibilities as Hokage.

 

Naruto: Hey, I get the work done, Jiraiya, plus I also can memorize everything thanks to the Shadow Clone Jutsu. We don't gotta worry too much. If Shikamaru needs to talk to me, he knows where to find me.

 

Jiraiya: I just hope he won't be TOO mad!

*Sakura comes out, holding Haruka, her and Naruto's 6-year old daughter's hand* Sakura: So any luck with the fishing, guys?
 

Naruto: Hey, hon! Yeah, they're jumping, but... *feels a tug, then gets up, focusing himself as he grits his teeth and pulls, crying out as he yanks up a big fish*

Jiraiya: HOLY COW!!!

Haruka: It's so big!!

*Naruto grins as he holds onto it* Naruto: Sakura, I think I got us dinner tonight! Maybe we oughta invite a few people!

Sakura: You dork, as if we need a few people! That fish's at least 20 pounds!
 

Naruto: Hey, you're an amazing cook! I bet you could make something great with it, like sashimi! 

*Sakura smiles and shakes her head at her husband, as he finally gets the fish to stop moving* Sakura: Naruto, sometimes, you can be an idiot.
 

*Leaping off the fish, Naruto walks over to Sakura, putting his arms around her waist, causing her to squeal and let go of Haruka's hand as she puts her hands on Naruto's chest* Naruto: I know. But I'm your idiot.

 

*Sakura chuckles, as the two kiss, with Jiraiya gagging in the background, and Haruka giggling*

 

 

I think showing interactions with those who have children and their new roles would also need to be explored, which is why I also thought of Naruto sometimes using the Shadow Clone Jutsu to do work at the office as Hokage AND to spend time with Sakura and the kids. Of course, much to Shikamaru's chagrin, it gets annoying fast, even if Naruto would memorize everything his Shadow Clone did when the Jutsu is dispelled. Plus I also see Sakura not just as a top medic at the Leaf Village Hospital, but also in charge of a team of medical ninja as well as now and then staying at home to look after Jiraiya and Haruka. 

 

So whatcha think, guys and girls? :3 Was it OK?



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Posted 20 December 2014 - 06:35 PM

Guyz, its not necessary to pair everyone up, some people can be single or even (or maybe in a relationship with a OC)
This adds reality to the story

totally agree ! 

What personally bothered me in the last chapter is that it was too Pairings-centered, putting people together like that, just for them to have kids, was bad. 

 

I had an idea for a scene, guys;

 

Shikamaru: Hey, Naruto, how much longer're you gonna be?

 

*Naruto is looking over some paperwork* Naruto: Yeah, gimme a minute, Shikamaru.

 

Shikamaru: Seriously, are you almost done?

 

Naruto: Huh? Oh, right, right! *puts the paper down* Listen, man, can you look at it all? I think I got it signed right. *does a hand sign and explodes*

 

Shikamaru: YOU GOTTA BE KIDDING ME!!! A shadow clone?! NOT AGAIN!! Naruto!! What a drag it is to be your advisor if you're not even here for me to advise you...!!!

 

*Naruto and Sakura Uzumaki's place, a little outside of the Hidden Leaf Village. Just a few minutes walk to the village*

 

Naruto: So that's how it is. *smiles as he is sitting with his 8-year old son, Jiraiya, fishing* Fish sure are hopping today, huh?

 

Jiraiya: They sure are, Dad. Hey, do you think Unca Shikamaru's gonna be mad you used the Shadow Clone Jutsu while in the office? I mean, I always hear Shikanosuke talking to me 'bout how Unca Shikamaru feels like you're shirking your responsibilities as Hokage.

 

Naruto: Hey, I get the work done, Jiraiya, plus I also can memorize everything thanks to the Shadow Clone Jutsu. We don't gotta worry too much. If Shikamaru needs to talk to me, he knows where to find me.

 

Jiraiya: I just hope he won't be TOO mad!

*Sakura comes out, holding Haruka, her and Naruto's 6-year old daughter's hand* Sakura: So any luck with the fishing, guys?
 

Naruto: Hey, hon! Yeah, they're jumping, but... *feels a tug, then gets up, focusing himself as he grits his teeth and pulls, crying out as he yanks up a big fish*

Jiraiya: HOLY COW!!!

Haruka: It's so big!!

*Naruto grins as he holds onto it* Naruto: Sakura, I think I got us dinner tonight! Maybe we oughta invite a few people!

Sakura: You dork, as if we need a few people! That fish's at least 20 pounds!
 

Naruto: Hey, you're an amazing cook! I bet you could make something great with it, like sashimi! 

*Sakura smiles and shakes her head at her husband, as he finally gets the fish to stop moving* Sakura: Naruto, sometimes, you can be an idiot.
 

*Leaping off the fish, Naruto walks over to Sakura, putting his arms around her waist, causing her to squeal and let go of Haruka's hand as she puts her hands on Naruto's chest* Naruto: I know. But I'm your idiot.

 

*Sakura chuckles, as the two kiss, with Jiraiya gagging in the background, and Haruka giggling*

 

 

I think showing interactions with those who have children and their new roles would also need to be explored, which is why I also thought of Naruto sometimes using the Shadow Clone Jutsu to do work at the office as Hokage AND to spend time with Sakura and the kids. Of course, much to Shikamaru's chagrin, it gets annoying fast, even if Naruto would memorize everything his Shadow Clone did when the Jutsu is dispelled. Plus I also see Sakura not just as a top medic at the Leaf Village Hospital, but also in charge of a team of medical ninja as well as now and then staying at home to look after Jiraiya and Haruka. 

 

So whatcha think, guys and girls? :3 Was it OK?

When I read chapter 700 I was wondering WHY Naruto didn't use his shadow clones at work while he would be spending some time with his children ! 

So yeah, that's a good idea ! Katia approves it !  :thumb:


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