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#1 dx/dt

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Posted 31 July 2006 - 12:00 AM

I'm bored, and I need writing practice. So, respond to this topic with 1) a keyword, phrase, setting, or piece of dialog, and 2) whether you want it to take place during part one or part two, and I will write you a 100 word naru/saku drabble.

One request per person please. biggrin.gif

Edit: Requests are now closed.

#2 jigglychu

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Posted 31 July 2006 - 12:37 AM

Oooh! Oooh! ME! Phrase... "Caught Red Handed"

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EDIT: Part 2
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#3 Nick Soapdish

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Posted 31 July 2006 - 01:05 AM

1) Boos

2) I'm tempted to say Part II to make it a challenge, but I think it'd fit better for Part I.

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Posted 31 July 2006 - 01:42 AM

Um... Snow! Part 1.

#5 dx/dt

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Posted 31 July 2006 - 03:35 AM

For jigglychu:
Title: Like What You See?
Phrase: "Caught Red Handed"

“So,” he says, grabbing the back of his neck and grinning proudly, “you gonna tell me why you keep staring?”

Sakura blushes, but does not say anything. Naruto knows damn well why she is staring, but tormenting her is half the fun.

“I thought you were supposed to be a social retard when it comes to these . . . these,” she searches for the right word, “ . . . situations.”

“Now why would that be,” he says, stepping closer, toes almost touching, lips and soft breaths inches apart. “Ero-senin is my teacher after all.”

Sakura blushes some more.

BTW jigglychu, I love your avatar!

For Nick Soapdish:
Title: Pranks
Keyword: Boos

It wasn’t that Naruto was particularly proud of his actions, he was however, rather smug with the outcome.

“Naruto, you suck!” was the common phrase uttered, followed by many moans and groans of the wanna-be ninja students.

“Now class,” Iruka says sternly, “if Naruto would learn to behave better, this wouldn’t be happening.”

But it was all worth it, because there was one pink haired girl who secretly did not mind the extra work his actions caused. And watching her face light up as she diligently dove into the task to be completed was the best part of his day.


For Hinata-chan:
Title: Seasonal Fun
Keyword: Snow

It’s a well known fact that team seven’s first C class mission happened to be the first time Naruto ever stepped out of the village. So when the genin team has a mission to a country full of snow, Sakura curses herself for not realizing that Naruto would go ballistic.

To calm him down, Sakura decides to launch a tightly packed snowball aimed directly for his head. Her aim is uncanny.

“Ouch! Sakura-chan! What was that for!?” he screams.

“It’s called a snowball, dummy. You throw them at people for fun,” she says smarty, almost winking.

Naruto’s grin increases tenfold.


Hope you all enjoy! biggrin.gif These were fun to write.

#6 Vespar

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Posted 31 July 2006 - 07:46 AM

Wow! Kudos on your great drabbles!
Now I want to throw you something too! tongue.gif

'Breath' @ Pre-time jump.

#7 Tatsu_no_Houou

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Posted 31 July 2006 - 02:35 PM

Mind soing some more?

Birthday trouble. (1)

the wrong present. (2)

A bad morning turned into a good day (2)

Sometimes it doesn't pay to get up in the morning (2)


"Dreams echo in the void of time, striving for completion, childhood dreams, innocent things. To each his or her own"~Me

Well my other favorite quotes... you'd have to click this link wont you.
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Posted 31 July 2006 - 07:21 PM

For Vespar:
Title: Blood and Tears
Keyword: breath


His breath is wet and shallow, but he is still standing.

Sakura is crying over a downed Sasuke. It makes Naruto’s heart cringe because he knows Sasuke will be fine.

“Naruto,” she is calling his name. He looks over at her tear stained cheeks. “Naruto, please,” There is something in her eyes that he has never seen before, something reserved only for him.

“Don’t worry Sakura-chan,” he says, with renewed optimism, “we will get out of this forest alive and we will become Chuunins!”

He turns to his adversary, tainted with sweat and blood.

“Do not underestimate me,” he breathes.


For Tatsu_no_Houou:
Title: Wake Up Call
Phrase: Sometimes it doesn't pay to get up in the morning.


The red glow of the alarm clock is flashing 6:00am. The numbers look like evil eyes, patronizing and mocking her.

Time to get up.

Sleepy eyed and groggy, Sakura edges off the bed but stops abruptly as a muscular arm snakes around her slender waist.

“Where do you think you’re going?” says a deep, gruff voice.

“Work,” she says, decisively.

“Nu-uh. Uzumaki house rules: no one gets up before nine.”

He pulls her back to the bed, back into his warm embrace, and that is when Sakura realizes that sometimes it does not pay to get up in the morning.


Keep those requests coming!

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Posted 31 July 2006 - 07:50 PM

1.) The first time we met

2.) Part 1

( Oh and for the title could it be Chemicals React) I got the title name from Aly and AJ's song.
I only ask for you to notice me.

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Posted 31 July 2006 - 07:55 PM

dx/dt these are awesome!!
cant wait to see more

either of these I would be happy with...take your pick biggrin.gif
vixen(2)
mice(1)

I dont know why...i'v been wanting someone to do a drabble on these for a long time.... unsure.gif

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Posted 31 July 2006 - 10:42 PM

I'm loving these! Great work, dx/dt XD
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#12 dx/dt

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Posted 01 August 2006 - 10:18 PM

For Narusaku fan:
Title: Chemicals React
Phrase: The first time we met.

The first time they truly met was during some obscure mission to some obscure little country. Sakura was engrossed in describing a certain chemical process pertinent to the mission.

“But,” Naruto was utterly confused, and Sakura had to admit he looked adorable with the big doofy expression on his face.

Then it clicked, “Oh, I get it! Sakura-chan, you’re the best teacher ever!”

His comment, and the sparkle in his eyes took Sakura completely out of her element. She wasn’t sure why or how, but for some reason she felt like she was truly meeting Naruto for the first time.


For quilted-remorse:
Title: Green Eyed Lady
Keyword: Vixen
Note: This may or may not referance my other fic Fragments. tongue.gif

She’s a green eyed vixen, full of pearls and grace, and Naruto can barely keep his hands off of her.

She usually bats him away with ease, (read: punches him across the room) but sometimes she’s coy and lets him wrap an arm around her shoulder or waist.

“So,” she purrs coolly, “are you going to take me out for some ramen?” Naruto is a little stunned by the statement, but it takes a lot more than that to surprise the number one unpredictable ninja in Konoha.

“Why Sakura-chan,” he replies with similar composure, “I thought you would never ask.”

I am glad everyone is enjoying these drabbles. Please, continue requesting.

#13 Vespar

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Posted 02 August 2006 - 03:28 PM

Whoa... Very nicely done, dx/dt!
I'm especially tickled for that moment you chose to write for my request! biggrin.gif
You sure are something! Major kudos to you, dx/dt!

#14 MonkeysTotallyRock

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Posted 03 August 2006 - 01:45 AM

well, well. not bad! very nice. B)
okay... i have to give a keyword, right? let's make it fluff-filled!
kiss
that is all. a fairly easy one.

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Posted 03 August 2006 - 01:53 AM

My request:

Pr0n.

Have fun with that biggrin.gif

If you want another: Your not wearing that?!!?


Bunny: Sasuke, join me.
Sasuke: What will I receive if I join you?
Bunny: POWER! UNLIMITED POWER!
Sasuke: Sweet! what do I do?
Orochimaru: Sssssssssssssaaaaaaasssssssssukkkkkkeeeeeee-kkkuuuuuunnnn!
Sasuke: oh f***

Sono nantomo ienai sekushii na oshiri wo ore no kokan ni okittensukete rizumu ni awasete kosurinasai = Back that ass up. :D

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Posted 26 August 2006 - 03:40 AM

QUOTE (gamerman_007 @ Aug 2 2006, 06:53 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
My request:

Pr0n.

Have fun with that biggrin.gif

If you want another: Your not wearing that?!!?


ooh, i like the second one. biggrin.gif haha.

#17 dx/dt

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Posted 10 September 2006 - 08:00 PM

Sorry for the mega delay, I got owned by real life.

For MonkeysTotallyRock:
Title: On the Subject of Kissing
Keyword: Kiss

His kisses are like him: loud, immature, annoying, wet and sloppy.

Most of the time, this gets on Sakura’s nerves. She yells at him, asking him why he can’t kiss like a normal person.

His reaction is always the same profound rhetorical phrase that pisses her off even more. “Because I am me, Sakura-chan!” He grins like a fool and she resists the urge to smack him senseless.

She tries to deny it through this behavior, but for some reason, whenever he kisses her, her knees weaken and her mind floats away, refusing to come back down from could nine.


For gamerman_007:
Title: Bedtime Story
Keyword: P0rn

When her breath returns to her and her heart is no longer racing, she slides down from atop him to snuggle at his side.

“That,” she starts, spying a copy of Icha-Icha Paradise on his bed stand, “is the single most trashiest romance novel ever. I know he is your sensee and all, but why do you even have a copy of that laying around?”

“Oh,” he breathes raggedly through the hugest grin possible, “so you’re an expert on trashy romance novels?”

“That’s not- I meant- ERRAAAGHHH!” Sakura desperately hopes Naruto doesn’t notice the huge blush creeping over her cheeks.


I'm gonna close off the requests now, seeing how it will take me forever and a day to respond to them. Thanks to everyone who put in a request, this has been fun!

#18 Gaara

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Posted 10 September 2006 - 10:33 PM

Hmmm... let me think... ok, here is a phrase for you: "What is this feeling?" huh.gif

EDIT: Oh, sorry, just noticed your last sentence. Too bad!! sad.gif




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