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#1 Crystalj2

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Posted 20 November 2015 - 11:06 PM

Ahh, it's been a long time since I've been back on this website, but to my fellow NaruSaku fans, I thought I would share the ending I've been writing for a while now. Because I've spent so much time on it, I want to share it with as many people as possible. I can't change canon, but writing this has been therapeutic for me. It's tough when you were a fan for almost 10 years and the ending offers little to no payoff. This is my canon now.

 

Hope that anyone who reads this enjoys it.

 

https://www.fanficti...fting-the-Dream

 

Summary: Post chapter 698. Maybe there really was a happy ending after all. [Team 7 centric. NaruSaku]


Edited by Crystalj2, 20 November 2015 - 11:06 PM.


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Posted 21 November 2015 - 01:28 AM

Ahh, it's been a long time since I've been back on this website, but to my fellow NaruSaku fans, I thought I would share the ending I've been writing for a while now. Because I've spent so much time on it, I want to share it with as many people as possible. I can't change canon, but writing this has been therapeutic for me. It's tough when you were a fan for almost 10 years and the ending offers little to no payoff. This is my canon now.

 

Hope that anyone who reads this enjoys it.

 

https://www.fanficti...fting-the-Dream

 

Summary: Post chapter 698. Maybe there really was a happy ending after all. [Team 7 centric. NaruSaku]

I had actually found this before you posted this here, was waiting for it to be finished to read :)


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Posted 21 November 2015 - 01:39 AM

I already had that in my faves <3

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Posted 21 November 2015 - 02:12 AM

Enjoyed it so far though i have to call you out on your interpetation of Sakuras confession.

 

​Sakuras confession was not fake or foul, it was a genuine and honest confession. the problem lay in Sakuras attempt to protect Naruto from the rookies decision about Sasuke. this was what Naruto sensed that she was holding back from him, and was confirmed by Sai.
 

beyond that Sakura was 100% honest in her reasons.


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Posted 21 November 2015 - 02:35 AM

i like it. hope you finish it :). i love reading narusaku fanfics. i believe sakura was honest in her confession. i feel like the only thing naruto was frustrated with was he KNEW there was something wrong, he KNEW she KNEW there was something wrong, and no one was telling him anything plus HE had a "secret" as well, and i guess from his P.O.V i think all of it was stressful for him!, i think everything was just too much for naruto to handle which sakura could have helped him with if he had just listened to her a minuet!


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#6 Crystalj2

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Posted 22 November 2015 - 05:53 AM

Glad a few of you are enjoying it!

 

Remember, regardless of your interpretation of whether or not Sakura's confession was honest, I'm writing a story through a character's perspective. I completely agree that Sakura's intentions were pure, but Sakura still tried to use Naruto's feelings for her to get him to do what she wanted (and that was to let her protect him), and if you're Naruto, that really sucks. Please don't disregard the second part of the paragraph, where he is acknowledging that he actually understands her intentions and everything she was willing to do just to protect him.



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Posted 25 March 2016 - 09:25 AM

I've read this story before, but I didn't realize it was yours. A well thought out, realistic, in-character ending in my book, stark contrast to the "canon" one. All in all, a fantastic read :)



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Posted 08 May 2017 - 08:11 PM

THIS WAS AMAZING <3 your story is canon to me now. Thank you, thank you!!







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