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[Derock]

a new page has been out for a week and a half. I just seen it yesterday. More Hinata though, so carry on.

 

You could have at least post it, regardless.

 

[Illnevergiveup3]

if you could tell me how to do that from my phone. Next time, I got you.

[TheFirstEvil100]

if you could tell me how to do that from my phone. Next time, I got you.

I missed it too, but dealing with a lot of personal issues right now sadly.

[Phantom_999]

You could have at least post it, regardless.
 

Hinata showing concern for her sister instead being a Naruto-minded bimbo is always a plus in my book

[Bryon_Konoha_Ninja]

Hinata showing concern for her sister instead being a Naruto-minded bimbo is always a plus in my book

Same here, Phantom!

[Derock]

New page:

 

[Phantom_999]

The art work is nice over all, can't say too much regarding the plot since there isn't much going on at the moment

[Derock]

New Page:

 

[LuckyChi7]

As far as the conversation between Toneri and Hinata it is pretty much beat for beat from the movie, and the same thing about the scene where Hinata is showing concern for Hanabi that was also present in the movie too.  

[NarutoUzumaki01]

How far is it in terms of comparison to movie?

[Derock]

New page:

[Bryon_Konoha_Ninja]

How far is it in terms of comparison to movie?

 

It seems to be close but I also get some vibes how Toneri feels a bit more sympathetic even if he still seems crazy.

[LuckyChi7]

How far is it in terms of comparison to movie?

 

The story is practically the same with a few revisions. 

 

 

SO far, I'd say Toneri is very much the same like how he was in the movie. 

[VanitasDS76491]

 

The story is practically the same with a few revisions. 

 

 

SO far, I'd say Toneri is very much the same like how he was in the movie. 

so boring and bland 

[ThroughWithLove]

I wish tokai would just skip all of the toners parts that are literally copy/pasted from the film.

[Bail o' Lies]

I wish tokai would just skip all of the toners parts that are literally copy/pasted from the film.

Agreed unless they are going to change it, what is the point? Might as well trace the movie be done with it instead of taking about a month to do a page.

Edited by Bail o' Lies, 26 November 2022 - 11:16 PM.

[NarutoUzumaki01]

 

The story is practically the same with a few revisions. 

 

 

SO far, I'd say Toneri is very much the same like how he was in the movie. 

That I know, I meant how far into the movie story is progressed, it's like few years old already.

[LuckyChi7]

I wish tokai would just skip all of the toners parts that are literally copy/pasted from the film.

 

 

Around the time the movie came out, I actually plotted out my own little story with my cousin on our take for The Last.. Except the big difference was that Naruto and Sakura were already a couple by the beginning of the story.

 

There was a more deeper meaning behind what they were gonna do. 

 

Agreed unless they are going to change it, what is the point? Might as well trace the movie be done with it instead of taking about a month to do a page.

 

 

That's actually the main reason why kind of tuned out from this story a while ago because it was practically the same.

 

That I know, I meant how far into the movie story is progressed, it's like few years old already.

 

 

 

Having rewatched it recently a few months ago, this would be where the halfway point. 

[Serenity Namikaze]

Agreed unless they are going to change it, what is the point? Might as well trace the movie be done with it instead of taking about a month to do a page.

 

It's true that it can be annoying, the whole repeat of some of the original scenes from the TL movie however, I think it is important for the natural flow of Tokai's story, to give the general information needed to understand the complete story of the doujin, especially for readers that didn't see the movie.

 

I understand that it's annoying for readers that do know and while I do remember most of the detail of the movie ( even if I never saw it), I appreciate the repeat of scenes that don't really need changes or not as much ans let's say, the NS scenes.

 

 

As for the chapters discussion, I really like how it turn out in general. Nothing is perfect but the approach of some of the fix is really mature and love the way they respect the chacacters that we knew and loved. 

 

Hinata is still very much Naruto-kuning but at least, there isn't any scarf and we see her worrying about Hanabi, which is very nice.

 

The scene in the cave with Sasuke was very well done, I love how Sasuke tells Sakura that the way she cares for others is her strenght, that this kind of love is what saved him. It gives proper respect to SS but mostly Sakura who has shown loving him so much but there are many kinds of way to love, doesn't mean that she's ''In love'' with him.

 

Overall, can't wait to see the next chapter 

[Illnevergiveup3]

cant shake the feeling that he gone troll us. Been feeling like that since page 1. Praying Im wrong though.