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[PhantomNinja]

Ok... so the title is self explanitory. Post your poetry here, critique, yadda yadda yadda. I know there was a poetry thread, but some one ran over it so I'm trying to revive it!

I'll start:


Pensive Dream

The ashes scattered in the wind,
Dusting across the land,
As day faded dark,
And the water became still.

I gaze upon the glassy surface,
All words lost:
The water reflecting you.

Even if I were to smile,
At this wistful image,
Would you still greet me?

Believing that it were to be,
An artificial dream,
Of you…

… And I

Together.

Flying on the white wings of hope,
Gathering the forgotten tears,
That were left behind.

Blind, perplexed,
And reaching helplessly,
For that absent sanctuary,
Where pain could fade away.

But all is lost when daybreak comes,
When the sun rips the sky,
With blood red fingers,
Shattering the illusion,
Of what once was.

[Luis]

togther throw bad or good

she loves him throw and throw

she loves the way he talks

she loves the way he smiles

it go on for miles and miles

and he loves her throw bad or good

he loves he throw and throw

[PhantomNinja]

Ok. firstest. You must have correct spelling. I can feel the emotion of the poem, but it does nothing if the words aren't spelled correct.

[Coupe]

Roses Are Red

Violets Are Blue

Some poems rhyme, but this one doesnt.

[Wolf_Demon_Kunoichi13]

Where'd It Go?

An innocent smile
A trusting look
Eyes Full of hope
A bounce in her step

Where'd it go?

Now a guilty frown
A distrustful spark
Eyes full of sharted dreams
A slow walk

A lost youth
A lost cause
A lost need
A lost innocence

Where'd it Go?

Where's her youth
Where's her cause
Where's her need
Where's her innocence?

It's gone
Most likely not
Coming back
Gone Forever

Never coming back....
To her heart