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[Luis]

ok this will be like a FF but we all will right it

for a FF Title : The graet NIN Tornment

I will be the reff she is Sakura and my onw OC. now Naruto is the Hokaga so you know why Sakura is the reff. now lets start you will get the hag of it as we go along. oh and tell what your OC looks like and what he or she is waering and there justs along with any Blood line limt you come you with i will give you a exlpl with my OC you can mak you justs and an other things just keep it in the realty of the Naruto world


Sakura Uzumaki: Now the tornmet will start in a few horus so plz al pll who want to partake sigh you here

(Oc) Max Rodolfo: man i cannt wate to fight i have been want to try my know justs
Mas is whereing a simpl shot sleve red hody and a blake t-shrit bagey blue gens and brown tenashoes with metle on the hela and the toes. and on both his legs are the hu..um where you put your kuni you what it is he has one on both hes legs. a blood red bandana. red figergloves with metl on the nagles. he has kind of spiky hair and it so dark brown it looks blake. the front part of his hair has the left siad cut off. and his skin is kind of dark to.

Name:Max

Clan:Rodolfo

Bloodline Limt:Dragon Eyes (his eyes go red all over his eyes evey bit of it even the with part and they turn to sliets and she water is the air and gather it for powerful water justs and other things)

Justs: most Dragon justs and one his clan is know for Dragon Blats (wich is nothing more than chkra shoting in a beam out of ther moths down siad there lungs are so over welmd they have to waet for them to get bake to there nomle state)

Sakura:we will wite for all how want to par take.

Naruto:dame you look hot in this comeing out of know were and standing right behind her with his arms arond her

Sakura:not now later ok

[jaquesparblue]

..What?

[Luis]

..What?

to make it simple you dscribe what you chater lookes like what justs they can do and what tey say about the tornment when there are like 10-20 of them the story will pick up and the fights will start i will thell who fights who. you just telll what your charter does and what they say i know what to do i have doen this before i will show you with my (OC) Max like how a fight would start and then show how to take to others here

fight
Max:all right lets do this

Max ran towld his oppnet then in a flash was behin Him/her and quily made some hand sindes then

Max:Warter Stayl: Dragon Warter Justs

then you wate for what you oppnt will do tell i see a winner others can make commtes during the fight but the tow fighting are the one that.

takl to others like this

Max turnd to face Yumiwith a sliet blush on his face then

Max:Yumi-chan i tick i love you and want to know if you love me

alittle out there but i think you get the idea i hop

[jaquesparblue]

Right...

I don't know about my fellow board members, but I can't make s*** out of your futile attempt to write in English. From what I did understand, or could interpret, is that your OC is a self-insert and possibly a Gary-Stue. Both are not cool and will burn in hell once they go six-feet under...

No-offense, ofcourse.

[Vespar]

I think I see what you're getting at, Luis.
Actually, Heaven & Earth have a forum dedicated to RPG's right over at the H&E RPG Town.
They've got a system set up to make three-man genin teams with other board members, but I'm not entirely sure how to go signing up there, since I don't participate in it. But yeah, have a look! :thumbs:

Though, I'd have to recommend maybe using a spell-checker of some sort.
Especially when in an RPG, it's pretty hard to get a point across as it is over the internet, you know?