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Luis

Member Since 13 Dec 2006
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07 January 2009 - 05:55 AM

I fell ashamed just leaving ya'll like I did last year. you see I got to thinking and I pick up my stuff and left home a few weeks after I stopped coming on here, I hoboed my way to Santa Monika. I stayed with my half brother danie for a wile. He kept asking me why I came out there. I got a part time job at a KFC but I felt like I was leaving my brother so 2 weeks ago I flew back and now I’m trying to mend the bonds I hurt when I just up left. So I’m here asking if you guys will for give me for just leaving like I did.

E-bro

07 May 2008 - 12:42 AM

I want to try and start an art studio. Any one that wants to join can. Right now it's just me. What I want to do is trying and make comics like Doujinshis and self made up stuff, we will also make shirts and other stuff like that. I would like people that will be series about this really really series. I want to make this in to a studio bigger than Clamp. I need people that can color and also people that do line like me. It will take a wile to get this started but to get it started I will need at least one inker and some one who can do color. To join all you have to do is make up a charter based off of yourself and put her/him with my charter down here V sieghn your name on the charter.

Luis's comic page ;P

01 May 2008 - 08:06 PM

I thought I would make a new one.

here is my main charter Luis Rodolfo




better one

showing what he can do

what he does when I'm not drawing him ;P

in anther fight -sighe-

Luis's little pet Dragon


here is the main lady Kira Setsuna




her Asian elfen sexy self

Luis's fav place to think (and mine ;P)


here is one of bouth of them




I love thia's -noddes to self-


here is a ruff cover of my comic




still working on it ;P

my charters

28 February 2008 - 01:00 AM

here he is tongue.gif


A link to it him on my myspace tongue.gif



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I want to do something - fanfic character creation

26 February 2008 - 10:18 PM

I came up with an idea for a little fun with the Manga world I mad. I want to is how different characters act in the world I made. The universe I made is almost just like ours but different. Every human is half animal and there are elves, droves, and gnomes, and other things as well. I really don't have it all in my head yet so that's one of the reasons I'm doing this.

Okay this is open to any one that’s wants to do it. I will need you to come up with a character with the profile below I give you. For what they look like you can draw it and put it up with the profile or give a detailed description of him/her if you will to the best you can.

Name: (an name first middle [if you want him/her to have one] and last name)

Age: (pleas if you can at least 17 or older only because of how my manga is)

Race: (on not human or elves like that more like Black Mexican and scotches)

Animal: (an animal even things like dragons and other things)

Sex: (yes pleas lol no but serially male or female)

Weapons: (you can have any weapons you want guns, swords, any thing)

Hair: (what color how it looks like a mop shaggy well keep you know)

Eye: (what color if you eye are like a cats or anything like that for your animal)

Clothes: (pleas if you can make the clothes like some you would were in a mall or out in public there can be little things changed about it one sleeve longer than the other or some thing like that)

How you fight: (give me like a short fanfic fight with your charter fighting anther charter or something so I can see how he/she fights with there weapons if they have any and hand to hand and any moves they have.)

Personality: (give me anther short fanfic with this one to if you may how he/she acts with people and alone and with good and bade things that could happen to him/her.)

I will write this as a fanfic were I don't know were I will put it yet but I hop some were soon. Also thanks to any one that will help me out ^^ tongue.gif

I will start writhing when I have like 7 charters okay.



Name: Luiz Rodolfo Zazsweta

Age: 19

Race: Mexican/Asian

Animal: Dragon

Sex: Male

Weapons: 4 foot strait Katana, two nine mm pistols 7 rounds.

Hair: brown shaggy long an inch or so pass the shoulders.

Eye: Blue turn to slits when made

Clothes: Light Blue short sleeve hoody that is all ways unzipped, a Blake t-shirt, baggy blue gens with a strap of blue gens going from the front bottom of one up round behind him right to the front of the other, and two more straps making a X under the long strap that goes from on leg to the other and over his shins, with and brown converse all star shoes, on each leg he has were the straps go around him up and mid thie sowed to the strap are two gun holsters for his two nine mm pistols just right under is sword his tell came out from his gens it was not long or short medium size and his horns poked out from is hair only to were you can see the top of the them.

How you fight: Luiz was walking down a street when he saw a feigner coming at him. Luiz toke his sword from his belt with his left hand. He turned to were his right side was facing the feigner. When it came to were he could see it he knows what it was “A Elementie wiz” he said to him self.

The feigner was about 2 10’ 3’ feet tall. It has on a cote that almost touched the ground and an old beat up wizard’s hat. Its face is all black with yellow half moons for eyes. It lifted up its arms witch were covered by the cote. Then brought them down fast and out of the clotted arms came a storm of rocks. Luiz got in his sword stands in a second. He sprayed his legs out and brought his sword to his left waist tiled the handle down a little. His hand is hovering over it as it silently opens. The rocks stop right in front of him and fall to pieces.

“Try again you little piece of-“ he started to say. Luiz stands up right again only to the Elementie open his cote he sees nothing but black then a something that looks like a doll comes out. Luiz does not know what it is. It has a mime mask on and monk cloths on.

Luiz puts up his swords and moves for is pistols. The doll dashes towers him. Luiz shoots 3 shots at the doll. It only seems to slow it down. It gets to him after the threat shot. It moves to hit him in the abdomen. Luiz’s left nee comes up and hits the doll away. It flips back after the hit and come at his face. Luiz moves to his right and shots the doll in the head. The doll keeps coming back tell Luiz ran out of ammo.

The doll is full of hoes now but wont stop. Luiz puts his pistols back away in the holsters. The doll comes at him and he duck forwarded on his hands and starts to spin on his hands. His feet hit the doll over and over again. He stops and with his left foot hit the doll in the air. Luiz using only his arms pushed himself up to were the doll was. He flips himself to face the doll then he started to kick the doll fast then faster and faster and faster still. Then kicked it to the ground, right before it was about to hit Luiz was under it and at the right time kick the doll before it hit the ground. It lied there beaten and broken.

“Well now that was fun” he said to himself.

He looked at the doll again only to see strings on its limes. ‘A puppet’ he thought.

“I think I’ll call them monk puppets” he said to himself.

Personality: Luiz saw some of his “friends” at the poll hall. He went to say hi. “Hey guys” Luiz said.

No one said any thing, just looking at one anther. Like they were trying to say some thing they didn’t what to. Luiz was confused at first but then realized is mistake. “Oh right sorry guys” Luiz said and then left.

“Woa good dame glade he’s gone.” Said one of them to the other

“Yay never can have fun when he’s around so what now” said anther.

Luiz heard this but then again he heard it all the time from a lot of people, but that was one of the things he liked about them they were open. Well to a point, but some times he wishes he had some one to talk to and be with a girlfriend or just a friend. He wanted a girlfriend move because they are supportive and good to the other, but only if you are good and supportive to them.

He thinks about his life a lot, and how it is. He gets dispersed some times, most of the time he just sings songs in his head. He goes around the town with a smile on his face all the time most people don’t pay him no mine. Some give him a look like ‘what a moron’.

He just lives like he wants. The only thing he would want to stop having is the feeling of loneliness in his life. The cold empty spot on his bed to be filled, some one to share it with but then again he never knew why ether.


There is my character and you can use that to go by thanks again ^^ tongue.gif
If some of ya'll want you can help me write it to. I will need a beta reader thought to read over it and look for any mistakes and help me make it better and thanks again ^^ tongue.gif
again make the characters as much like yourself as you can please and thanks again tongue.gif man this told to long to do sleep.gif need some meat.
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