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#1 Paul Blowfish

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Posted 07 November 2014 - 01:31 AM

So, since I just wrote my last fanfic utterly depressing, I decided to make a happy one (I'm kinda on a roll. Lol not really), this is after 700, yes. I'm not quite as satisfied with this one as my last one. It's kinda sloppy and rushed (cause I rushed to write it). I was listening to "Back to You" by Twin Forks and "Come to Me" by the Goo Goo Dolls, and recommend listening to them if you can! Kinda sets the mood, I guess. Lol, but enjoy and let me know what you think!

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It was potentially the happiest day in her life.

Time after time she made mistakes. When she was just a genin in Team 7, letting Sasuke run away, causing Naruto so much pain, trusting Sasuke, and who knows how long the list goes.

If she were to write an auto-biography, she would just summarize it just like this: mistakes.

But somehow, one stupid idiot manages to see the best out of her countless errors in life.

Naruto.

She gets kinda giddy and doesn't care. He loved her infinitely, and after the wait, they're finally together.

'You took your sweet time getting together,' she remember Ino commenting, when she told her when she got engaged.

He proposed, right next to the bench where he said he liked her big (to her) forehead. It couldn't have been sweeter.

And she said yes.

One of things that was not a mistake.

Edited by Paul Blowfish, 07 November 2014 - 01:41 AM.

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#2 Luna

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Posted 07 November 2014 - 01:53 AM

:weeps: I truly hate kishimoto. Beautiful


 


#3 Paul Blowfish

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Posted 07 November 2014 - 01:57 AM

:weeps: I truly hate kishimoto. Beautiful


Thanks! I appreciate it, sincerely. I would be satisfied if this happened after 700, but no chance. Kishi damn it.
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Posted 08 November 2014 - 07:49 AM

Hmm.. This ending would've made so much sense. What happened Kishimoto?

Nice writing by the way. :) You should do more.

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#5 Paul Blowfish

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Posted 08 November 2014 - 03:46 PM

Hmm.. This ending would've made so much sense. What happened Kishimoto?
Nice writing by the way. :) You should do more.


Yeah, there wasn't even resolution!

Thank you for your comment! I ddint really think I was too great, honestly. I appreciate it!
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