http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3455059/1/
this is my story: 'together forever'
It started out with small chapter, but they began getting bigger and bigger. I think it will be a long fic, with at least 15 chapters or so.
Plz tell me how I am doing, what pairing you want and what direction you want the story to go. I am open for any suggestions.
Together forever -discussion
Started by SakuNaruLover, Apr 04 2007 08:47 AM
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Posted 04 April 2007 - 08:47 AM
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Posted 04 April 2007 - 03:07 PM
I've enjoyed it so far. Keep up the good work :thumbs: oh and let me kno when you update, i wanna kno what happens 
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Posted 06 April 2007 - 01:59 PM
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Posted 09 April 2007 - 05:17 AM
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Posted 11 April 2007 - 12:35 PM
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Posted 12 April 2007 - 01:14 AM
SPEAK OF THE DEVIL!!!!! I was just reading this!!!!!! NICE WORK!!!
LOVE IS WAR,
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Posted 13 April 2007 - 10:49 PM
I need chapter 11...like NOW!!! But seriously, that was good and i enjoyed it but i definitely wanna read more 
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Posted 14 April 2007 - 01:44 PM
Rty on KnuckleHead!!!!! I NEED Chppie 11! Is it out yet??????
LOVE IS WAR,
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Posted 14 April 2007 - 03:42 PM
I'm almost done with the chapter guys...just wait a little longer. I think I will be ready tomorrow. My grandmother just died, so I am kind of emotional right now. I try to write each time that I get some inspiration, but I'm just so damn sad. The chapter will be a sad chapter too.
I am glad that you guys liked the last chapter. The next chapter will be not so good I think as chapter 10. It will be a chapter without action. It will just show the aftermath or so to say.
I am glad that you guys liked the last chapter. The next chapter will be not so good I think as chapter 10. It will be a chapter without action. It will just show the aftermath or so to say.
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Posted 14 April 2007 - 03:55 PM
Awww.....I feel for ya SakuNaruLover. -sighes- Maybe it won't be so bad. And, maybe if you based the chapter with your feelings now, it may surprise you.
LOVE IS WAR,
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Posted 14 April 2007 - 10:43 PM
Yeah sry for your loss 
take your time if you need it but like NaruIno said you may be surprised as to how your writing turns out due to your emotions
take your time if you need it but like NaruIno said you may be surprised as to how your writing turns out due to your emotions
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Posted 15 April 2007 - 01:34 AM
Thx KnuckeHead. And just call me Ino! As I said before....Actually do i need to repeat what I just said a couple of hrs ago? ^^ We're here for ya man!
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Posted 15 April 2007 - 05:59 AM
YEAH! What Ino said, we'll be here..BELIEVE IT!!
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Posted 15 April 2007 - 07:15 PM
thanks guys
Good news: I finally finished the chapter
bad news: when I try to upload the document, I get an error
I hope I can put it on as soon as possible
Good news: I finally finished the chapter
bad news: when I try to upload the document, I get an error
I hope I can put it on as soon as possible
I am neither good nor evil, I am awake yet I dream
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Posted 16 April 2007 - 06:30 AM
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Posted 16 April 2007 - 08:15 PM
Great job :thumbs: i thoroughly enjoyed that chapter. It was sad but i felt you described the emotions everyone was feeling really well- the sadness and the comfort everyone was receiving.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter
I'm looking forward to the next chapter
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Posted 17 April 2007 - 04:46 AM
Keep up the work, this story is getting good.
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Posted 17 April 2007 - 07:34 AM
great chapter! awesome narusakuness!
keep it up dude!
keep it up dude!
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Posted 17 April 2007 - 10:48 PM
-is crying now- OMG! That was sooooo sad!! -gives two thumbs up while crying- NICE WORK! I felt like you put all your feelings in there, man. -sob sob- It was awsome! Keep it up!
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Posted 18 April 2007 - 02:52 PM
Thanks a lot guys
I am almost done with the next chapter already. I think I will post it tonight or tomorrow.
I am almost done with the next chapter already. I think I will post it tonight or tomorrow.
I am neither good nor evil, I am awake yet I dream
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