The thing you can't do.
#1
Posted 26 August 2007 - 07:27 PM
For me, I think I have trouble with action scenes...not sure.
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#2
Posted 26 August 2007 - 08:10 PM
#3
Posted 26 August 2007 - 08:14 PM
#4
Posted 26 August 2007 - 08:18 PM
#5
Posted 26 August 2007 - 08:40 PM
lol, you could tell us anyways XD
Or else make a tread for it
And I am pretty bad at emotional scenes, I think I tend to get too emotional
#8 Guest_Ceras_*
Posted 27 August 2007 - 12:02 AM
2. "Lemons" (most difficult to express)
3. Large scale combat (most time-consuming and draining)
4. One-to-one, confrontational fights (also draining and very hard to capture the ferocity of it)
There's probably more at what I'm bad at, but I won't bog my post with a long list. Recently, writing itself has become something of a wearisome task for me. I keep looking back on what I write and think to myself: :shamefulcry0js: "God, what were you thinking, putting this kind of trash on the internet?!"
*gives a long, cynical sigh*
#9
Posted 27 August 2007 - 02:14 AM
I dunno about that, Ceras, 'Secret' looked pretty good to me on that point. Not every lemon has to be incredibly graphic and you portrayed the emotions they were feeling very well. Of course if you feel you need to practice writing more lemons, I won't compain.
I guess I'd have to echo Illjwamh and say beginning the stupid thing. I haven't written a long enough piece to know where else I need wrok.
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#10
Posted 27 August 2007 - 02:17 AM
2. "Lemons" (most difficult to express)
YES. Well humour I can usually get if I try to think of something funny that actually happened to me and would make sense with the plot.
LEMONS. It's just hard, hands down. Like, so many emotions and actions. DX
#11
Posted 27 August 2007 - 05:33 AM
Humor is pretty easy for me. lol As for lemons.... >_>
I think I'm pretty good. I have yet to write an "official" one but I've had a few reactions from some stuff I've done. :rolleyes:
XD
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I'm Extreme Reborn in Live chat! But you don't know that.....
Dedicated, Hardcore, NaruSaku Fan, Current number of narusaku fics that I'm waiting for to finish: ? ( I lost count)
I'm making up for my mistakes.
#12
Posted 27 August 2007 - 05:59 AM
#13
Posted 27 August 2007 - 01:00 PM
I'm on a good roll with my new fic's though, so I really hope I don't screw them up.
One more thing I have problems with, is knowing what the hell I should do with Hinata... She's just too timid for my tastes, and I really don't like to write the whole s-stutter s-s-scenes over and over again! You will never see a NaruHina with my name on it!
#14
Posted 27 August 2007 - 01:31 PM
Other than that, expanding my vocabulary probably. My grasp on writing's based on what I've picked up from the books I've read.
#15
Posted 27 August 2007 - 05:46 PM
#16
Posted 27 August 2007 - 06:00 PM
What I do before I write an action scene, is that I watch AMVs, fight scenes from video games or other anime. And try to incorporate that into Naruto's move list.
#17
Posted 27 August 2007 - 07:32 PM
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Posted 28 August 2007 - 12:14 AM
#19 Guest_Ceras_*
Posted 28 August 2007 - 09:35 PM
I know what you mean. As for the latter, you're lucky you can at least come up with something.
#20
Posted 30 August 2007 - 08:00 PM
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