Paul Blowfish

This was so beautiful and painful at the same time.

I'M BACK. (lol honestly who cares) Enough about me, a couple of days ago I was on Tumblr and saw this super amazing (wow such great words you used there) edit and I HAD to write something like it. It was all angsty and stuff, so right up my alley. I hope I didn't like plagiarize it or anything (maybe only the last line), cause I don't really remember a majority of it. This is after 700, it's a sorta letter (how can something be a sorta letter?) thing from Sakura to Naruto. I understand it's not formatted like an actual letter, but roll with it. If I don't stop typing, this will be longer than the story itself. Any who, let me know what you think and hope you enjoy!

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'Dear Naruto,

How are things? How's Hinata? The children? We haven't spoken in awhile, we never seem to be able to catch each other, so I decided to write and send this letter.

As for my life, Sarada is well. She seems to have a lot of trouble with her jutsus, but I know she'll be fine. Sasuke is out on Taka business, as usual.

I'm just gonna cut right to the chase. I can't hold it in anymore. Too many years have passed.

I understand you don't love me anymore. But I know we could have been, a thing. And what really sucks, is that that never happened.

You know, Naruto, maybe in another universe, you and me could be something more. Something extraordinary. We could have gotten the ending we deserved.

Sasuke wouldn't have gotten in the way, and Hinata wouldn't have stolen your heart.

Goodness, here I am complaining about how I screwed up and want to change it. But can't you envision it?

You would be your old idiot self, getting injured always, you Baka, and eventually would get fully bandaged.

I would spend days at the hospital just healing you. And you would make me feed you Ichiraku's, only Ichiraku's, ramen. I'd pretend I hated it, but secretly love it.

Years full of regret have gone by knowing this all could have happened, Naruto.

You just found me in the wrong universe.'

Mines a bit more focused on NS. But, Uh, here's the link to mine (even though it's here at H&E ):

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She came rushing to the two bodies bloody and beaten.

"Sakura-chan.." Naruto made the effort to open his eyes to look at her.

She gently shushed him. "I need to concentrate."

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She needed the fresh air. The smell of the hospital was giving her a migraine, and she couldn't bear to see the state her teammates were in.

Off to the side of the road was an old wooden bench, so she decided to have a rest.

"You sure have a large charming forehead. Makes me want to kiss it."

Then it hit her.

This was the bench where Sasuke (more like Naruto really) talked to her. It wasn't Sasuke. It was Naruto. Wait.. Naruto?!

He came out from the shadows of the tree, smiling sheepishly while being all bandaged up.

"Naruto, you idiot! You're supposed to be in the hospital, resting! Not out here!" As her anger consumed her, she got right up in his face. "What did I tell you? You need a lot of-"

He kissed her forehead.

It was gentle, sweet, and all of her anger melted away

He pulled back from her, and to be perfectly honest, looked terrified and sweaty. "Uh, maybe I should have done that. Too much, yeah..." He scratched the back of his head.

"You baka." She wrapped her arm around his head of fluffy, golden hair and kissed him.

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AN: On the lips, I assure you.

I swear if I keep making these things at this rate I'll just clog up the forum with my small stories. I should make a blog where I post all my fanfics, cause they're pretty short. Back to the story now, it's after 700, in a sorta third person/Sakura POV, and is extremely short. Also, excuse how bad this is. I hope you enjoy and let me know what you think!

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Something felt absent in her life.

It wasn't a subtle change. It was as if a part of her left.

Something.... Missing. Something she always had. It was gone.

As she exited her tiny (rather run-down) apartment to head to the hospital, she noticed Naruto's children playing in the streets, while Hinata and Naruto watched their children on a bench, every now and then yelling to watch out for other people or 'Don't run into the cabbage stand again!'. Hinata's head rested on his shoulder, while Naruto adorned small, sweet kisses on her forehead.

That could have been her forehead, their children playing in the streets, and she could of been his partner in life.

But he didn't love her like before.

And it left a shadow in her heart where his love used to be.

I DID IT GUYS!!! I DID IT!!!
 

THIS IS HOW THE PANEL SHOULD HAVE LOOKED LIKE. Lol maybe not.

We need to shop the image of Naruto on the macbook to have him looking up NaruSaku pictures lol

I must do that.

Guys, I think the part I hate most about this ending is that naruto is such a neglecting father.
...THIS IS NOT OUR NARUTO.
He was supposed to be goofy & loving. Not this douche bag.
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I thought that when he was Hokage, he would ditch some of his duties just to hang out with his family.

Kishi made all these characters so OOC it's naseuating.

THANK YOU! LIKE THANK YOU FUDGESTICKS MUCH! Because I thought I was the only one who didn't know what gender their child was. And to make matters worse, someone as gorgeous as Ino (and Sai's not too bad looking either, idk) should have a really cute child. Idk. I don't want to bash the children, but genetics were not too kind for them.

I'm pretty sure half of us don't understand the gender of their child. I expected a gorgeous girl or a very, and I mean very, handsome guy, but nope sorry genetics weren't working for you better luck next time.

699 and 700 would've been more realistic and believable if the seal of reconciliation wiped everyone's memories of bad things that ever happened and the war and set them all into a new peaceful world..with only Naruto and Sasuke remembering what truly happened

I swear all of you guys can write so much better than Kishi.

You know maybe if the ending wasn't so bad I would actually be sad Naruto ended.

So, since I just wrote my last fanfic utterly depressing, I decided to make a happy one (I'm kinda on a roll. Lol not really), this is after 700, yes. I'm not quite as satisfied with this one as my last one. It's kinda sloppy and rushed (cause I rushed to write it). I was listening to "Back to You" by Twin Forks and "Come to Me" by the Goo Goo Dolls, and recommend listening to them if you can! Kinda sets the mood, I guess. Lol, but enjoy and let me know what you think!

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It was potentially the happiest day in her life.

Time after time she made mistakes. When she was just a genin in Team 7, letting Sasuke run away, causing Naruto so much pain, trusting Sasuke, and who knows how long the list goes.

If she were to write an auto-biography, she would just summarize it just like this: mistakes.

But somehow, one stupid idiot manages to see the best out of her countless errors in life.

Naruto.

She gets kinda giddy and doesn't care. He loved her infinitely, and after the wait, they're finally together.

'You took your sweet time getting together,' she remember Ino commenting, when she told her when she got engaged.

He proposed, right next to the bench where he said he liked her big (to her) forehead. It couldn't have been sweeter.

And she said yes.

One of things that was not a mistake.

7 reviews already for my story. Damn. I hope SS and NH stay clear from that story. I'm ready to cuss them out.

If they get up in your grill then I swear I will get so angry with those fandoms.


Also, I just made a little fanfic about Naruto on his wedding day, so if any of you want to check it out, it's here on H&E or you can click the link.

http://www.narusaku....showtopic=14599

So, with the ending of Naruto ( which was terrible ), I mustered up this little fanfic of Naruto on his wedding day. I'm not sure how Japanese weddings work, so I used the Western style wedding. Some of this may not be totally accurate and it may have a few errors. And certain parts of it should be italicized, but I'm on mobile so, bare with me. Let me know what you think!

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He should be happy.

It was his wedding day, getting married to the lovely woman that was Hinata.

Kind, loving, and nothing but supporting.

But she just wasn't her.

For well over two decades he loved her.

And he still did.

Stop it, he scolded himself, mentally of course. Just cold feet. You love Hinata Hyugaa. Soon to be Hinata Uzumaki. And- Then the Nine-Tails had to step in.

Will he ever stop?

You still love her.

He ignored the Tailed Beast, shaking it off. But, he couldn't get her out of his mind. Her pink hair that was always so perfect, sparkling green eyes, and the fact that she was so, words couldn't describe how amazing she was.

Jeez Naruto, you're obsessing over a girl that isn't your wife on your wedding day.

He once again ignored him. This wedding wasn't right. Him and Hinata wasn't right. He was pretty sure Shikamaru knew, smarty pants and all, and probably Ino. She kinda had this thing where she could sense love or something, he really didn't know.

It finally hit him. After years it hit him.

He should have confessed. He should have spoken up. He had the chance. But he didn't, and now he was going to spend the rest of his life with a woman who just wasn't right. Hinata would make a great wife. For someone else.

He wanted Sakura.

He needed Sakura.

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The doors opened, revealing a blushing bride in an elegant dress. She stepped forward to the altar. They exchange the basic vows.

"Do you Naruto Uzumaki, take Hinata Hyugaa as your lawfully wedded wife?"

"I do."

BS is what these chapters were. Crazy, ridiculous, and overall maddening. Kishi just paired people up together just for the hell of it, imo. Choji and Karui? Did I miss something or what? Sai had romantic feelings? I thought he just was starting to understand friendship. I'm happy for him 110%, but jeez. And Naruto and Sakura didn't even mutter a word to each other. No resolution WHATSOEVER, and now the annoying SS/NH fans will just rub it in and claim Kishi never intended NS. I just wanted something to make me understand HOW IN THE WORLD did Naruto develop romantic feelings for Hinata? And SasuSaku? Are you high Kishi. Her name is SALAD. ( not really but you know what I mean ) Just utterly disappointed. Not only with no NS, but just how terribly written this became. If NaruSaku became canon, then it would have fitted and ended nicely, making absolutely perfect sense. But no. Money wins over a better story! Unsatisfied.

We ARE already walking dead lol

This fandom is incredible. If I were to sink with any of my ships, the NS fandom is the fandom I would want to sink with. You guys are great.

I wish the chapter would just come out -.- And then finally all of this will be answered.

Same, I'm just so confused. The leaked pictures look legitimate, but nothing really connects.

Why SS? What turned Sasuke around and have feelings for Sakura? Last time I checked, he wanted to kill her. Why is Sakura not a medical ninja? Why is she a stay at home mom? Must Kishi have done this?

I can't believe the NH/SS fans were right. So, all that build up was nothing then?