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[starlitestarbrite]

i don't think anything is confirmed yet, BUT, i do have a theory that there never was a NH, and SS those were just created by fans, and it was always NS all the way, and now kishi/sp/maybe other ns fans are trolling NH, and SS fans back as "pay back"for being so annoying lol. that would be funny. i can only see NS happening though. it's the only thing that makes sense. either NS, or a Team 7 ending[no pairings]. but,

 

even though i doubt sakura sometimes,i just don't see naruto as someone who would give up on his dreams. i do believe he will win sakura over, and who knows maybe he already has along time ago, and we just never saw it because kishi's...well, he's naruto lol...both oblivious when it comes to girls', and their emotions

 

but, i'm hoping for narusaku because they are heaven, and earth, and they do make an awsome couple.

[starlitestarbrite]

i hope studio pierrot makes NS canon in the anime.i thought sakura truley loved naruto, guess she WAS lying to herself after all

[starlitestarbrite]

*reaction*
[author note summary: team 7's reaction to NH/SS becomming canon]
*naruto, sakura, and sasuke are in the sp studio*
sasuke: did you guys see this? -holds up paper- turns out NH, and SS are canon...thats so out of character.
naruto/sakura: WHAT!?
naruto: -eyes water- sakura-chan?
sakura: -eyes water- but, what about all naruto, and i have been through? i was hoping we would be together!
naruto: yeah, and i told my dad sakura-chan was my girlfriend!, and sakura-chan has the personality like my mother
sasuke: hn, -walks out-
sakura: what about the build up?, i've showed true deep emotion towards you
naruto: and i to you, i would never give up!
sakura: i would never date a decieving psychopath
naruto: i really wanted to confess to you that i love you sakura-chan!, atleast there's fanart, fanfictions galore of narusaku.
sakura: -blush- i really thought we would end up together like naru, and keitaro from love hina, during shippuden i had started to fall in love with you
naruto: -smiles and blush-
sakura: but, your hokage it looks like, atleast that dream came true
naruto: do you think we'll be canon in the anime instead?
sakura: i don't know,it looked like i whent back to my fangirl ways!
*astral plane with minato, and kushina, and company*
kushina: -bonks minato on the head- EXPLAIN THIS! -gives him the paper-
minato: wait...so, naruto gave up on sakura...i swear she has a similar personality to yours...hey? sasuke uchiha is that mikito's kid?
*mikito comes over there*
kushina: WHOOPDIE FREAKING DOO! mikito, we both always talked about our sons being friends with eachother...but, i can't believe your son is a brainless scum bucket!
*itachi walks up*
itachi: what'd i do this time!?
kushina: not YOU your brother! -shows itachi the paper and stomps off-
*neji walks over*
neji:whats going on?
*kushina stomps back over*
kushina: WHATS GOING ON? WHATS GOING ON? I'LL TELL YOU WHATS GOING ON!, THE HYUUGA, AND THE UCHIHA HAVE INVADED THE MANGA, RUINED NARUTO'S CHARACTER, AND BROKE THE STRONGEST HEAVEN, AND EARTH BOND! ! *stomps off again*
minato: i'll go calm her down -walks off-
*jiraiya, and asuma walked over*
asuma: hey! so, shikamaru found a girlfriend after all.
jiraiya:well, naruto made hokage...but-
voice in the distant: NEVER TELL A GIRL TO CALM DOWN! -minato flies, and crashed into a wall*
minato: -sweatdrop- i think i should let her cool off
*back to konoha:team kurenai's reaction*
shino: this truley is a loss...gone are the days of narusaku it seems
hinata: so, naruto-kun gave up on sakura?
kiba: hey hinata? the circus called they want YOU back
hinata: -blinks-
*team asuma's reaction*
choji: this isn't the naruto i remember!
shikamaru: -sighs- this is such a drag...so troublesome
ino: so, sakura gave up on the one who loved her unconditionally?...what an airhead
shikamaru: isn't she your best friend?
ino: no, MY best friend would NEVER do something like this, betraying the village, choosing a guy who don't love her over someone who does love her...this isn't the sakura i grew up with.as for naruto, i'm not that surprised he moved on...if someone played with my emotions for years i'd enventually be done with them to.
*back to sakura, and naruto*
*naruto, and sakura both are crying with tears streaming down cheeks*
naruto: i love you so much sakura-chan -sniffs- i don't know why this happened
sakura: i love you to naruto -sniffs- we made a great team, and couple
*naruto, and sakura hug*
naruto: i can't believe our romantic bond got broken
sakura: i know! i didn't even give you a goodbye hug i just ignored you! i wish i could have giving you more hugs: i wish our bond never got broken...i was truley in love with you during shippuden, and also saw you as a bestfriend...i do want to be your girlfriend not sasuke-kun's
naruto:kishi was going for narusaku, or so we thought what happened?
sakura: we may never know the truth...kishimoto lied to his loyal fans'
*naruto and sakura kiss*

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 14 September 2015 - 04:56 PM.

[*- ZerΩ -*]

[ns.Believe.It]

 

 

sasuke: did you guys see this? -holds up paper- turns out NH, and SS are canon...thats so out of character.
naruto/sakura: WHAT!?
naruto: -eyes water- sakura-chan?
sakura: -eyes water- but, what about all naruto, and i have been through? i was hoping we would be together!
naruto: yeah, and i told my dad sakura-chan was my girlfriend!, and sakura-chan has the personality like my mother
sasuke: hn, -walks out-
sakura: what about the build up?, i've showed true deep emotion towards you
naruto: and i to you, i would never give up!
sakura: i would never date a decieving psychopath

 

This makes me cry   Please send it to Kishimoto cause he seems to have forgotten everthing he wrote before.

 

 

 

kushina: WHATS GOING ON? WHATS GOING ON? I'LL TELL YOU WHATS GOING ON!, THE HYUUGA, AND THE UCHIHA HAVE INVADED THE MANGA, RUINED NARUTO'S CHARACTER, AND BROKE THE STRONGEST HEAVEN, AND EARTH BOND! ! *stomps off again*

So true ! I despise both of the clans. 

[starlitestarbrite]

*genjutsu troll of a lifetime!*
[author note summary: something's alittle off...ends as narusaku![sidenote:wasn't the FINALE CHAPTER supossed to have 44 pages?]]
*hinata's house*
naruto: -walks out-
hinata: wait naruto-kun!
naruto: i'm the hokage...i have to go
hinata: well, not untill you give me a good bye hug -giggles-
naruto: of course
*they hug*
naruto: -sadly- see ya
hinata: -smiles-
*sasuke's house*
sasuke: bye household! see you all tonight! -walks out-
sakura: geez you can't even say our names? -sweatdrop- jerk!
*at the council where sasuke works*
karin: i can't believe i got stuck being your assistant!
sasuke: well, i could fire you if you like
karin: don't be a jerk
sasuke: -sighs- how did my life get so weird?...its like one big genjutsu!
karin: oh come on! your that cool kid from konoha whoes heart is as big as all get out! you had a never give up attidude! find your silver lining!
sasuke: um...karin? i LEFT konoha, and i never had that personality
karin: oh...then who am i thinking of? -walks off-
*hanabi visits hinata's house*
hinata: even though i dreamed of this life...it seems wrong
hanabi: don't doubt yourself! your the tsundere with a heart of gold!
hinata: um hanabi i was NEVER a tsundere
hanabi: then...who am i thinking of?
*hinata and sasuke meet up*
hinata: i think we're in a genjutsu, or something!
sasuke: i know! something fishy's going on...this isn't our life at all
hinata: i think someone's trolling us, and gave a genjutsu version of the final chapter!
sasuke: wouldn't it be funny if we were all in a genjutsu?
hinata: well,...naruto's lost his happy go lucky personality...he's just not who he used to be
sasuke: -think- wait...a never give up personality- yeah, sakura seems to never talk as much as she used to
hinata: -thinks- the tsundere with a heart of gold...it makes sense now-
sasuke: well, how do we fix this?
hinata: we need to make this right...you get sakura, i'll get naruto, and we'll meet at ichiraku's
*later at ichiraku's*
*hinata and naruto walk in*
naruto: why am i here?
hinata: this used to be your favorite place
naruto: now, it's not...i'm done with the past! -starts to leave as sasuke, and sakura show up-
*sakura, and naruto stare at eachother*
hinata: about time you two showed up!
sasuke: well, i had to talk her into comming here!
sakura: n-naruto?
naruto:hi sakura-chan.
sakura:-whispers- sasuke whyd you bring me here?
sasuke: naruto?
naruto: -stands there shocked-
hinata: we think we all might be under a strange genjutsu
sasuke: WAIT! what does everyone remember about the LAST thing that happened before today?
hinata: well, i just remember going into I.T unless that was a dream
sasuke: YOU KNOW WHAT I THINK HAPPENED!? I THINK naruto, sakura, kakashi, and i have not disabled the I.T yet! the final chapter wasn't the real final chapter!
naruto: wait...oh yeah weren't we in somekind of war?
sakura: hmmm...-thinks-
*meanwhile outside the I.T sakura, and kakashi get to the valley
sakura: NARUTO! -runs over and heals him-
kakashi: i think we're too late
sakura: -eyes water- no!, naruto!...naruto wake up!
kakashi: wait...i think they put themselves in a genjutsu!
sakura: why would they do that?
*meanwhile back to oocnaruto, and sasuke*
sasuke: naruto, we need to go back to where it all happened!...the valley of the end
*sasuke, and naruto go to the VOTE*
naruto: so, you mean this all might be a genjutsu?
sasuke: it could be, either that are we're dead
naruto: -remembers something- oh...crap!
*back to sakura, and kakashi*
sakura: no...naruto said when they faught again they'd both die...-cries on naruto's chest-
*back to oocsasuke, and ooc naruto*
sasuke: i also get the feeling the creater might have wanned to give his viewers a glimps of what genjutsu life is like!
naruto: THEN HOW DO WE GET OUT OF HERE!...i thought the road to ninja was a genjutsu world?
sasuke: THATS IT! i think i know how to get us out of here
naruto: we have to fight eachother here to!?
sasuke: no...we have to remember who we were before we got here
naruto: -sighs- i wasn't anyone special...i mean sakura-chan ended up with YOU...you were always the "cool one"
sasuke: i betrayed you guys, left the village, tried to kill sakura THREE TIMES, all because i wanted revenge and in the process almost succseded in killing my only best friend who has been like a brother to me since we first met!
naruto: waw...thats your real personality? you sound like a jerk.
sasuke: YES!...wait...why am i cheering about that?...i think we both entered a genjutsu during our last fight!.
naruto:and somehow switched roles? that would be weird...why would i ever be you?
sasuke: -sweatdrop- i don't know dobe...cause you thaught i was cooler than you?
naruto: hn, mr perfect.
sasuke: know-it-all
naruto: show off
sasuke: -gets an idea- now, i know why kakashi only trained me, and not you! hn
naruto: he did?...-someting comes to mind- yeah? well, while YOU were with him i was training with pervy-sage so, i could kick YOUR butt all the way back to konoha!
sasuke: oh yeah naruto?
naruto: yeah sasuke!
sasuke: NARUTO!
naruto: SASUKE!
sasuke: NARUTOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
naruto: SASUKEEEEEEEEEEEE
sasuke: CHIDORI!
naruto: RASENGAN!
*a burst of light appears as they clash, and back to kakashi, and sakura*
naruto: -slowly opens his eyes- sakura-chan?
sakura: YOUR ALIVE!? -sniffs- oh naruto -hugs naruto, and cries-
kakashi: you need to heal sasuke to
sakura: oh yeah -wipes eyes- -heals sasuke-
sasuke: -opens his eyes- -think- so it was a genjutsu after all?-
*sasuke, and naruto dispell the i.t*
sasuke: well, i'm off to be a wanderer, good luck being hokage dobe
naruto: thank you -eyes water-
*sasuke walks off*
sakura: what the heck happened between you two while you two were out cold!?
naruto: i think in a way...he helped me realized that i have a much better life than he does.
sakura: -smiles- you sure do
naruto: sakura-chan?, i have loved you ever since our genin days, and i still do, and always will
sakura: and i love you too naruto.
*naruto, and sakura kiss*
THE END

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 08 November 2014 - 02:00 PM.

[ns.Believe.It]

 

 

*a burst of light appears as they clash, and back to kakashi, and sakura*
naruto: -slowly opens his eyes- sakura-chan?
sakura: YOUR ALIVE!? -sniffs- oh naruto -hugs naruto, and cries-
kakashi: you need to heal sasuke to
sakura: oh yeah -wipes eyes- -heals sasuke-
sasuke: -opens his eyes- -think- so it was a genjutsu after all?-
*sasuke, and naruto dispell the i.t*
sasuke: well, i'm off to be a wanderer, good luck being hokage dobe
naruto: thank you -eyes water-

THIS should have been how the fight ended. Not that lame NaruSasu bromance. 

 

I still hope, pray that 700 was all aU scenario and the real epilogue will be given in the movie.

[starlitestarbrite]

*NaruSaku date*
[author note summary: a random NS date at ichiraku. set after the war, and naruto, and sakura are celebrating]
*sakura and naruto walk in, and sit down*
sakura: this time i'm buying! for the hero of the village!
naruto: -blush-
*they get a bowl of ramen*
nruto: -sluuurrrps- mmm i thought i'd never eat you again my delicious ramen! -slurrrps-
sakura: -laughs- i love your sense of humour naruto. -smiles-
naruto: -slurrrps- ah, so, good.
sakura: naruto?
naruto: yes sakura-chan?
sakura: it took almost loosing you to realize that...i really love you...i almost lost you twice during the war. once when your kyuubi was extracted, and after your fight with sasuke
naruto: -blushes and smiles- i love you to sakura...and i've loved you since our academy days.
sakura: and you waited untill NOW to tell me!
naruto: well, i wanted to bring sasuke back to you like i promised first.
sakura: -eyes water-
naruto: i'm not sure if we're destined to be together or not...but, i hope we atleast stay best friends.
sakura: -tears stream down cheeks- -she hugs naruto-
naruto: -smiles- -hugs her back-
*they both bite on each end of a noodle and slurp untill they're kissing*
*both laugh*
*naruto and sakura kiss*
THE END

[ns.Believe.It]

Beautiful date   Damn you Kishimoto !

[starlitestarbrite]

*shinachiku uzumaki*
[author note summary: MY version of part three!. naruto, and sakura are married, naruto's hokage, and have a son named shinachiku]
*at the uzumaki house*
sakura: SHINACHIKUUU WAKE UP OR I'M SENDING YOUR DAD IN TO WAKE YOU UP seriously...does he need to be a ninja?
naruto: *sneaks into shinachiku's room* A THOUSAND YEARS OF DEATH -pokes his butt-
shinachiku: -jolts out of bed- -whine- DAAAD!
naruto: well, thats going to be your alarm clock when you don't get up in time!
shinaciku: wait till i need to fart...then do it
naruto: then you'd fly around the room like a balloon
*naruto and shinachiku both get ready*
shinachiku: i still don't get why i have to get up early
sakura: because, i work at the hospital, and your dad's hokage, and YOUR going to school
shinachiku: i can stay by myself!
naruto: shinachiku if you wanna be hokage someday you have to become a ninja, kick butt, get a cool girlfriend, marry her, and keep all your promises of a lifetime, and never give up...
sakura: oh good grief shut your mouth a minuete -holds naruto's mouth closed and kisses him- have a good day
naruto: you to sakura-chan
*at the academy*
iruka: okay...where's my clipboard?...-sighs- shinachiku did you take it again?
shinachiku: lets see -reads the clipboard- oooh hey everyone!? we get our teammates today
*iruka takes the clipboard*
iruka: okay,...your teammates...
shinachiku: hey, shikamari...pssst shika-chan?
shikamari: -tries to ignore him-
shinachiku: PSSST! shiiikkkaaa-chaaannn
shikamari: -sweatdrop- this is the lamest day ever...-sighs- hey iruka? can i leave?
iruka: why?
shikamari: because your boring
*class laugh*
iruka: no, now team 7: shinachiku uzumaki, shikamari naara, and daichi inuzuka....
shinachiku: hey shika? pssst
shikamari: -lays head on desk-
shinachiku: -plays with her ponytail- shiiika?? shikachoo...shika shika
shikamari: oh for peeps sake WHAT!?
shinaciku: hi
shikamari: grrr -punches shinachiku across the room-
iruka: -sweatdrop-
daichi: waw...so, my parents are hinata, and kiba
shikamari: shikamaru, and temari
shinachiku: -thinks- she can punch me any time -hearts in eyes-
daichi: isn't that the hokage's son?-points to shinachiku-
shikamari: so? i'm the kazekage's niece! got a problem?
daichi: no.
*later shinachiku, shikamari, and daichi all meet their sensei in the training feild*
*shikamaru comes up with a cigarette*
shikamari: oh great...my dads our sensei this is lame.
shikamru: okay, -puts cigarette in mouth- i'm going to tell you all what my sensei told us...there'll be no goofing off during training,
*they start rubbing their eyes*
shikamaru: and of course we need to learn the importance of teamwork
shikamari: DAAAD TAKE YOUR CIGARETTE OUT OF YOUR MOUTH THE SMOKE'S GETTING IN OUR EYES!
shikamaru: -takes it out- okay., it'll be like the game of chess or shogi, you need all the pieces to play the game
shikamari: -thinks- oh no not the game metaphors again...gosh this is lame, so bothersome-
shhinachiku: hey? how do i win in the game of looove?
shikamaru: by not trying to win...just live like your a part of the game...plus your only twelve.
shinachiku: so? my mom, and dad fell in love at twelve!
shikamaru: -sweatdrop- so, i take it you never heard your mom's side of the story
*later that night at the uzumaki house*
sakura: so, how was your day?, and YOUR day at school? -sits at the tabel-
naruto: yaaay chicken, and rice! my day was peaceful.
shinachiku: my day was fun! i finnally got my team, and sensei. daichi, and shikamari are my teammates, and shikamaru's our sensei! we're team 7
naruto: waw...team naara! bet you'll have fun...unless it was a drag, or so troublesome -giggles- i was on a team 7 to. your mom, myself, and sasuke uchiha
shinachiku: is it true that when you, and dad were twelve you two fell in love? shikamaru-sensei said that wasn't true on your side
naruto: -sweatdrops and goes pale- uh oh
sakura: no, who told you that...we didn't start dating untill we were around 18
shinachiku: daaad you said you two fell in love when you were my age!
sakura: NAAARRRUUUTTTOOOO
*naruto runs off, sakura chases him bopping him on the head with a spatula*
*later naruto and sakura kiss*
THE END

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 10 November 2014 - 05:30 PM.

[ns.Believe.It]

Thanks for this, it was certainly a lot more in-character than Kishi's ending 

I like Shinachiku and Shikamari's chemistry. That ending was so perfect. Kishimoto...you ruined it so bad     

Edited by ns.Believe.It, 10 November 2014 - 05:51 PM.

[Iwantbuns]

Thank you for a NaruSaku family ending <3 Totally needed that ^^

[starlitestarbrite]

*NARUTO*
[author note summary: my version of how naruto should have ending]
*in sakura's genjutsu*
*flashback-1*
naruto: i'll bring him back to ya sakura-chan -thumbs up- promise of a lifetime
*flashback-2*
naruto: the next time we fight we'll both die sasuke
*flashback-3*
karin: sasuke-kun! -blush-
*end*
*sakura wakes up*
sakura: sensei...theres one person we need to get before we head over to naruto!
*back to where everyone else is*
*sakura awakens karin from the genjutsu*
karin: sasuke-kun? wheres-
sakura: we need to hurry
*karin, sakura, and kakashi head to the valley just as a blast of light is seen*
sakura: NARUTO!
karin: SASUKE-KUN!
*they get there and sasuke, and naruto have their arms blown off*
*sakura starts healing naruto, and karin heals sasuke*
naruto: thanks sakura-chan
sakura: -eyes water- you big idiot -hugs him- thanks for keeping your promise...and for being you
naruto: -blush- i love you sakura-chan...that's why i did all this...just for you
sakura: you two almost killed eachother!
sasuke: k-karin?
karin: shhh...i'm concentrating
sasuke: i'm sorry
karin: sorry for what?...FOR BEING AN IDIOT AND GETTING YOURSELF ALMOST KILLED! -whacks him in the head- WHAT THE HECK IS WRONG WITH YOU SASUKE-KUN! and you should thank sakura for bringing me along to save your butt!
sasuke: thank you sakura
sakura: thank you for not killing naruto -hugs naruto again-
*after naruto, and sasuke get their arms back all of them go, and dispel the genjutsu*
sasuke: well, i'm off to be a wonderer
karin: can i come to!? -blushes- take me with you sasuke-kun!
sakura: hard to believe that was how i acted a looong time ago
naruto: yeah -sweatdrop-
*sasuke pokes karins forehead*
sasuke: good luck being hokage dobe
naruto: thank you -eyes water- -hands sasuke his forehead protector-
sasuke: you kept it all this time?
karin: -whines- sasuke-kuuun lets gooo alreadyyy
naruto: if you do get your own village someday lets become allies
*sasuke, and karin left*
suigetsu: WAIT! I WANNA COME TO! TEAM TAKA FOR LIFE! -runs after them-
sakura: well, looks like it's over
naruto: now i can kiss your charming forehead
sakura: -blush-
*flashback*
"sasuke": your foreheads so charming it makes me wanna kiss it
*end*
*naruto kisses sakura's forehead*
sakura: you big goofball! -bonks him on the head-
sai: now you can confess like we talked about naruto
naruto: i already have.
sakura: -smiles- i love you to naruto
naruto: i can see it in your eyes...i could always see your most heartfelt emotions by looking into your eyes
sakura: -blush-
*naruto and sakura hug*
*hinata walks over*
hinata: hey naruto-kun -smiles- thanks for saving the village
naruto: we all saved the village
sakura: -thinks- aw that's my naruto...always so, selfless-
ino: so, you, and naruto are a "thing" now?
sakura: now? i've been falling for him since he came back from his 2/3 year trip! -blushes-
naruto: -jaw drops, blushes and eyes water- -thinks- HOW DID I MISS THE SIGHNS!
*naruto, and sakura kiss*
THE END

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 11 November 2014 - 04:03 PM.

[starlitestarbrite]

*closure of a lifetime*
[author note summary: OMG i just thought of the funniest, coolest, but sweetest troll omake ever! it starts out looking like NH/SS but you wont believe how it ends in NS lol]
*as sasuke goes off on his wondering journey*
sasuke: sakura...i like you as a SISTER...thats it
sakura: -smiles-
sasuke: ready to go karin?
karin: duh yes!
sasuke: good luck being hokage dobe
naruto: thank you -eyes water-
*sasuke, and karin walk off*
sakura: -eyes water- thank you for bringing him back naruto -walk off-
naruto: -wipes eyes- guess i don't get the girl after all...sorry mom, dad...i failed there
hinata:h-hey naruto-kun maybe we can train together sometime?
naruto: sure...we need to talk wanna go to ichiraku?
hinata: -blushes- sure
*they go to ichiraku meanwhile sakura's watching them as they enter ichiraku*
sakura: -blinks- he usually asks me to go to ichiraku with him!
*inside*
naruto: -slurrrps- remember when you confessed your feelings to me?
hinata: y-yes i do...i thought you forgot -blushes a little-
naruto: then during the war you said you would stop chasing me
hinata: oh...-hangs head- well...i didn't know if you would feel the same way...i mean...um- -stearts blushing like crazy and getting nervous-
naruto: hinata? you okay?
hinata: y-y-yes n-naruto-kun
naruto: you look like your going to passout!
hinata: no go on!
naruto: okay, ayane can i get some water for hinata? she looks like she's going into somekinda panic attack or something!
*ayane brings water*
hinata: t-thank you -takes a sip-
naruto: as i was saying...i knew you admired me but, not THAT much, i wanted to say thank you but, my heart belongs to sakura-chan
hinata: -sweatdrop- -eyes water but smiles-
naruto: i'm sorry -sadly- i was going to confess to her after the war but, she still loves sasuke
hinata: well, maybe she'll come around...does she know you love her?
naruto: how do you tell someone you've loved your whole life you love them? i've tried showing her by bringing sasuke back to her, and that didn't work
hinata: well, maybe she was in love with you when she hugged you that day.
*flashback after pain invasion arc*
sakura: -punches naruto- YOU IDIOT! -hugs him- thank you
*end*
naruto: yeah, but i think she was just REALLY glad i was safe, and i saved the village that day.
hinata: i think she kept you alive...when you almost died in the war
*flashback*
naruto: -wakes up and sees obito, and sakura- -gets up-
sakura: NARUTO! YOUR OKAY!
naruto: what happened...wait..i don't have time i need to stop maadara! -runs off-
obito: he didn't thank us!
sakura: -giggles- thank you for saving naruto
*end*
naruto: she's a medic ninja it was her job
hinata: yeah...i guess your right naruto-kun
*they both walk out together*
sakura: hey! are you two...dating?
naruto: nope just eating, and talking -scratches head-
*hinata leaves*
sakura: some call that a date
naruto: you never called it a date when WE whent for ramen.
sakura: yes i did!
naruto: no i was always the one asking you to go out for ramen
sakura: yeah, i've asked you out for ramen before!
naruto: then i'd joke, and say "like a date" and you would say it's not a date
sakura: grrr IS EVERYTHING A JOKE TO YOU YOU IDIOT! -punches him, and stomps off-
naruto: eh?...-sweatdrop- wonder what her deal is? ah, well,guess she's just missing sasuke -gets sad again-
*the next day*
*knock knock knock*
*naruto opens the door it's ino and sai*
naruto: hey! are you two going out?
sai: we are out -smiles-
ino: we're taking you for ramen! least we can do for our goofy hero of the village!
*at ichiraku*
sai: so, have you confessed to sakura yet?
naruto: no...-sadly- she still loves sasuke...-smiles- but, as long as she's happy that's all that matters! believe it-ttebayo!
ino: she's still in love with sasuke! geez that girl's gotta move on!
sai: i read in a book that sometimes people hide what they truley feel behinde a mask...she's not being honest with herself
naruto: i hate it when people do that! why do they do that?
sai: well, it could be for many reasons...are you being completley honest with YOURself?
naruto: i think so...-sweatdrop- heeey are you saying i lie to myself?
sai: i think everyone lies to themselves sometimes...we don't always mean to...thats what doubt is...lying to oneself
ino: waw thats really insightful sai!
sai: you think i look alittle like sasuke do you ino?
ino: -sweatdrop- hey! we're talking about naruto here don't start trying to analyze ME or we wont have anymore sai-ino art time!
sai: -blushes- okay,...so naruto are you going to confess to sakura yet?
naruto: i'm waiting for the right time!...-bursts out laughing thinking of ino posing nude for sai for "art"-hahaahahahhaahahhaahhahaha so, haahhaahahhaah sai? haahhahaahahahha you draw naked pictures of ino?haahahahhahahahaah
sai: -gets a nosebleed- why would i do that?
ino: NARUTO! YOU PERV! -punches naruto-
naruto: then whats ino-sai arttime?
ino: WE LIKE TO GO TO THE PARK, AND DRAW, AND PAINT TOGETHER!
sai: and we like going to the art museum for their "artist of the week" contest
naruto: -sweatdrop and embarrassed- oh...eheheheeh
ino: NAAARRRUUUTTTOOO!
*naruto runs out with ino running after him, and runs into sakura, ino tells sakura what naruto said back at ichiraku*
sakura: -blank expression/sweatdrop/blushes- NARUTO UZUMAKI I'M SO KICKING YOUR BUTT -kicks naruto WAAAY up in the air*
ino: waw
sakura: WHAT WERE YOU DOING WITH NARUTO AT ICHIRAKU ANYWAY!
ino: eh, sai, and i took him for ramen to celebrate his saving the village...are you okay sakura?
sakura: oh...-smiles- so, you, and sai are going out?
ino: yeah.
*ino goes back to ichiraku, and sakura goes to find naruto who was lying on the ground*
naruto: -confused dazed, and embarrassed look on his face- h-hi sakura-chan
sakura: -sighs- -thinks- he sure heals fast!- i don't know my own strenghth
naruto: yeah, i think you've gotten alot stronger! you've been holding back -grins his goofy grin-
sakura: -grins- -thinks- gosh i've missed that smile!...heck i've missed THIS naruto- well, guess i better go...um...training
naruto: we can train together!...unless you want to be alone -sad face-
sakura: no, i guess we could train together...like we used to
naruto: GREAT! okay, I KNOW! lets see who can climb up the tree the fastes! -he jumps on a tree trunk, and runs up a tree-
sakura: -smiles- -thinks- your stronger now to naruto-
*flashback academy days*
naruto: -tries to run up a tree, and falls down-
sasuke: -sighs- idiot
sakura: -laughs- naruto stop goofing off!
naruto: WELL, SASUKE KEEPS STARRING!
sakura: because your being a doofus!
naruto: i bet sasuke's controlling me with his sharingan and making me fall
sakura: GRRR
sasuke: if i could use telekanesis i'd toss you UP the tree not make you fall down dobe
*the two argue*
sakura: -sighs- SENSEI THEY'RE ARGUING AGAIN!
*kakashi is hiding reading his book ignoring them*
*end*
sakura: -smiles and blushes- classic naruto
naruto: YOOHOO SAAAKURA-CHAAAN! YOU COMMING?
sakura: -runs up there to join naruto-
naruto: yaaay -starts jumping, looses balance- uh oh WAAAh! -slips and sakura grabs him, pulls him back up-
sakura: you idiot! you have to keep your chakkra balanced!
naruto: now, lets see who can run back down the festest! -tries to but falls-
sakura: NARUTO! -jumps and catches him, they both jump down together*
naruto: guess i've practiced running up the trees' more than i have running down them -laughs-
sakura: -laughs- hey, it's a starry night tonight want to go sit on the monuement
*they sit on the fourth hokages head on the monuement*
sakura: now, don't fall off here...-quietly- i don't want to have to give you CPR, and pump your heart for you again-
naruto: again? -blushes- -thinks- SAKURA-CHAN GAVE ME THE KISS OF LIFE AND I MISSED IT! DANG IT KURAMA WHY DIDN'T YOU WAKE ME!?-
kurama: I WAS EXTRACTED OUT OF YOU AT THE TIME!...well...nows your chance...don't make me sing "kiss the girl" in your head here to
naruto: -thinks- so, thats why that song was in my head all day during the day sasuke left...i thought you were calling sasuke a girl- -he chuckles alittle-
sakura: -smiles, and snuggles into naruto's chest- i like laying here
naruto: -smiles- -kisses her forehead-
*sakura gives naruto a big hug*
sakura: -cries- naruto i've been lying to myself...all this time i thought it was sasuke i loved
naruto: -hugs her back- its okay,..i've been lying to myself to...actually i've been postponing telling you...
*they gaze in eachothers eyes*
naruto: i've loved you since the day i met you...i was hoping that bringing sasuke back would show you how much i loved you -sadly- but, i understand that you still love him...or i thought you did...but, seeing you happy is all i want sakura-chan
sakura: -blushes-
naruto: because you deserve to be happy...even if it's not with me.
sakura: -thinks- oh naruto-
sakura: -smiles- i love you to naruto...i've been in love with you since you came back from your trip with jiraiya-sensei...it took you almost dying for me to realise it!...i don't want to live without you naruto!
naruto: -eyes water- must be dreaming
sakura: -bonks naruto on the head-
naruto: -blushes- nope it's real...i don't want to live without you eather sakura-chan!
*sakura, and naruto kiss*
naruto: wait...tell me about the CPR!
sakura: why talk when we can just enjoy our kiss...boyfriend?
naruto: okay girlfriend -thinks- YES! MOM, DAD, I GOT A GIRL LIKE MOM AFTER ALL! YAAATTAAA!-
*sakura and naruto kiss*
THE END

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 14 September 2015 - 05:22 PM.

[ns.Believe.It]

I like jealous Sakura 

This has to be one of your best omakes ever ! The NS resolution was beautifully done. 

[narusaku256]

This was a MASTERPIECE. Boy! Why did Kishi had to pull such a stunt >_< I am still hurt....and reading this...Oh gosh! Why Kishi....why?

Anyways....it was really a wonderful omake. One of the best I've ever read...

[starlitestarbrite]

*hokaga's day off*
[author note summary: shinachicu, and naruto spend father, and son time together sidenote: in this universe boruto's an anime]
*at ichiraku naruto, and shinachiku are eating ramen*
naruto: mmm -slurrrps- i like ramen...i used to come here aaall the time!
shinachiku: -slurrrps- i'm going to be hokage like you someday dad! so, who braught you to ichiraku?
naruto: well, when i first become genin iruka did.
shinachiku: i wish i could meet your parents...i've met granny mebuki, and grandpa kizashi.
naruto: -sadly- yeah, they died when i was born...but my father was the fourth hokage! and he saved the village!
shinachiku: cool! just like you!?
naruto: -eyes water, and smiles- yes, -thinks- about time someone compared me to my father!- i used to like to sit on the monuement, and look up at the stars...it was even more magical when your mother would join me
*later they sit on the monuement on naruto's head*
naruto: someday...THIS'll be your hangout...or hideout. so, do you have a girl you like?
shinachiku: yeah, shikamari-chan...but, mom said to not go to you for advice on girls anymore
naruto: -sweatdrop- -thinks- sakura-chaaan- yeah, thats probabbly a better idea
*they both laugh*
naruto: wanna see a REALLY funny jutsu i used to love to do?
shinachiku: sure!
*naruto does the sexy jutsu*
shinachiku: -bursts out laughing-
naruko: hello, are you being good for your parents?
shinachiku: hahaahhahahahahahahaah!
naruko: you may call me "aunty naruko"
shinachiku: haahhaahahhaahahbhahaha! you got boobies haahahhaahahahahhaaha
*naruto transforms back*
naruto: ahahahhaahahahahahahhaha but, you can't tell your mom!
*later at the uzumaki house naruto, and shinachiku are watching tv*
shinaku: hey look! boruto's on BOLTSARADA FOR THE WIN!
naruto: -smiles-
shinachiku: he's a ninja like me!
*sakura walks in*
naruto: hi sakura-chan!
sakura: what are my two favorite knuckleheads doing?
naruto: watching boruto!
*sakura sits down*
shinachiku: dad, and i are borusara shippers! see? sarada's the girl with the glasses, and thats -points to the blonde- boruto...bolt is his nickname!, and that's -points to the other guy- shikadai
sakura: a rip off of our world it sounds like -sweatdrops- wait were there hints, and parallels' pointing to borusara?
shinachiku: this is just the first episode!
naruto: yeah...this comes from the taiyo village! they make really cool anime!
*meanwhile in the village hidden in the sun A.K.A taiyo*
mangaka: i'm just started my manga!
editor: i know...the studio pirate wants to know if you will allow fillers? it'll get you more views, and boost the ratings, and your series'll be HUGE worldwide everyone'll be cheering for boruto!...but add a rival!
mangaka: a rival? okay,...how about-
*next saturday shinachiku and naruto watch boruto*
naruto: oh no! sarada has a crush interest!
shinachiku: yeah...why did the go, and introduce that weirdo?
naruto: guess the main character needs a rival
*in taiyo*
editor: it's going great! buuut S.P wants to make ooone small change
mangaka: okay! but, only very small
*the next month on saturday*
naruto: hey? whoes that new girl that secretly likes boruto?
shinachiku: NOOO! hanata! you stay away from sarada-chan's boruto! throws a tissue at the screen*
sakura: hey naruto? does this reminde you of something?
naruto: no...what?
*back in taiyo*
mangaka: i've finished the new volume!...i've sent it to the weekly ninja jump magazine! so, its like a comic-manga!
editor: perfect...the studio wants to make ooone more slight change!...they want a romance subplot! between the two main characters, and a love triangle with the side characters'!
mangaka: -sweatdrop- but, i don't know about romance!
editor: write what you know! borrow ideas from other writers if you need to... they'll fix it up for you when it gets time to make the anime!
mangaka: -thinks- why do i feel like i'm being coaxed into working for studio pirate?-
*back to konoha that night at the uzumaki hous in naruto, and sakura's room, and shinachiku's asleep in his room-
*naruto, and sakura hug, and kiss*
THE END
*omake mini: a theory i came up with*
kisi: -goes to his editor- i need help with the ending i forgot where i was going with it...all i know is it ends with naruto being hokage!
editor: okay sell me your manga, and i'll fix it!
*chapter 699-700 comes out*
kishi: -sweatdrop- WHAT HAVE YOU DONE!? IT WAS SUPOSSED TO END AS NARUTO, AND SAKURA ON THE ROMANCE SUBPLOT!
editor: don't worry! studio pierriot is still doing the anime, and they'll take care of everything! NS for the win! thanks for doing all the work so, we wont have to! well...we did the fillers -smiles-
kishi: heeey that was sneaky!
editor: well, thats the anime industry for you...to us the manga industry work for us...we dont work for you thats show biz!
*shows naruto and sakura kissing on screen*
THE END

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 05 July 2019 - 08:56 AM.

[ns.Believe.It]

So sad yet so true. I'm always amazed at how you incorporate those sort of real life situations/ facts in your omake.  

 

Kishi was probably pressured and forced to alter his original story at every step. The effects did not show much in the beginning or the middle of the story but the impact was hugely felt in the ending. It has ruined a very good manga.  

[narusaku256]

The beginning was very....good :') Awesome work!

[starlitestarbrite]

omake ideas:

 

1-a sakura arc-since she never got one it'll start at pre timeskip when naruto leaves , and end at timeskip when naruto returms but, i have no idea what all can go on inbetween lol

 

2- a rewrite of the whole fourth shinobi war- i have something in mind...and it ends up being narusaku! lol.hagaromo, and kaguya wont be in this version.and sasuke dies! lol

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 15 November 2014 - 03:09 PM.