Revenge Upon The Avenger
#21
Posted 16 February 2011 - 08:41 AM
Some however do use japanese words mid-sentence, but for some reason it bothered me less than in the fanics I read from you Omegaman.
Ofcourse it could also be because I get more used to it. Next time I read one of your fanfics (chapter 4 of revenge Upon the Avenger?? HINT... ). I will see if that's the case if so I'll let you know.
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#22
Posted 16 February 2011 - 08:42 AM
Some however do use japanese words mid-sentence, but for some reason it bothered me less than in the fanics I read from you Omegaman.
Ofcourse it could also be because I get more used to it. Next time I read one of your fanfics (chapter 4 of revenge Upon the Avenger?? HINT... ). I will see if that's the case if so I'll let you know.
Well what did you think of their quality? I'm curious if mine's any good compared to theirs.
#23
Posted 16 February 2011 - 08:59 AM
while the others I read where entirely fiction (forgive me for not crediting the author atm I will look him/her up this evening and edit):
fly me to the moon for example.
It had me clustered on the text like I was actually reading a book.
If I really needed to compare it's like (on lvl of story) reading the manga and if I read yours it was like watching the anime
(although with drastic changes and without the crappy animation from time to time or hinata worship and all those flaws of the anime),
you could more or less guess the development of the story, you did surprise me however when you let Shikamaru devise a plan to kill Sasuke WITH the aid of Naruto. But that was about the only surprise the story brought for me thus far.
while those other fanfics are like a totally new story kind of like the sensation of a new chapter you just read as fast as u can to find out what happens in the story.
So do your best to keep me reading your story... (not going to be that hard though really looking forward to chapter 4).
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#24
Posted 16 February 2011 - 09:04 AM
while the others I read where entirely fiction (forgive me for not crediting the author atm I will look him/her up this evening and edit):
fly me to the moon for example.
It had me clustered on the text like I was actually reading a book.
If I really needed to compare it's like (on lvl of story) reading the manga and if I read yours it was like watching the anime
(although with drastic changes and without the crappy animation from time to time or hinata worship and all those flaws of the anime),
you could more or less guess the development of the story, you did surprise me however when you let Shikamaru devise a plan to kill Sasuke WITH the aid of Naruto. But that was about the only surprise the story brought for me thus far.
while those other fanfics are like a totally new story kind of like the sensation of a new chapter you just read as fast as u can to find out what happens in the story.
So do your best to keep me reading your story... (not going to be that hard though really looking forward to chapter 4).
Well thanks again. "Fly Me To The Moon" is actually written by Digifruit who I feel is a very talented author with a very creative spin on some of the characters and interactions. What you read is called AU (which means Alternate Universe) my starts as canon but goes to an AU story, and as things get further along the further it gets away from canon. The best way I can describe it is like dropping a rock in a pool. It starts making ripples that continue to grow outward getting bigger and bigger.
#25
Posted 16 February 2011 - 09:11 AM
Just kidding ofcourse.
But seriously: when do you think approximately that you will have finished ch4? (Don't rush it though)
A very big minus point of mine is that I easily get addicted to stories/series/games/etc...
PS: I knew i.e. is used for giving examples but could someone please say to me what the abbreviation stands for google just returns industrial engineer .
(kinda hope i can at some point put that in front of my name though )
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#26
Posted 16 February 2011 - 09:17 AM
Just kidding ofcourse.
But seriously: when do you think approximately that you will have finished ch4? (Don't rush it though)
A very big minus point of mine is that I easily get addicted to stories/series/games/etc...
PS: I knew i.e. is used for giving examples but could someone please say to me what the abbreviation stands for google just returns industrial engineer .
(kinda hope i can at some point put that in front of my name though )
I'm actually writing as we speak. I post every Friday too so you'll be able to look for it at the point.
Also I'll answer your question about i.e. fully written it's (id est) which is Latin for "That is..."
And we all get addicted to things. But I think getting addicted to stories and series is a lot better than getting addicted to other things out there.
#27
Posted 16 February 2011 - 09:21 AM
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#29
Posted 20 February 2011 - 08:34 PM
#30
Posted 22 February 2011 - 01:58 PM
I'm not much one to give comments on a story and my life's atm to busy to be a beta-reader of any kind and I suspect that after my internship I will need to focus for my exams and 2nd tries for exams in august plus my holiday job (wich is as a waiter in a restaurant/bistro kind of thing). Ad to that that I really want to graduate in September so that I can take the next step to become an engineer. And I know you'll understand that I just don't have time for it. Otherwise I still can give reviews if you'd like. (some are going to be a little late)
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#31
Posted 23 February 2011 - 11:45 AM
If you're interested P.M. me at Ff.net.
There isn't a reward I can give you. Though being able to get super secret views on how I work might be considered one. Idk
#32
Posted 23 February 2011 - 02:02 PM
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#38
Posted 24 February 2011 - 12:18 PM
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#39
Posted 24 February 2011 - 07:27 PM
Ah that's cool. Though it's not a crossover. It's separate stories with the same original character. That's it.
#40
Posted 24 February 2011 - 07:36 PM
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